im having a gigleing fit and i just fell of my chair
very cute story. I would love to see more of it.
Oh, please say you'll make a follow up story! It's too rich a story to drop!!!
LOL! Oncore! Oncore!
*cringe* Sevie oh the embarassment. I think i would die if ever called one of my teachers that let alone Snape! But you have to hand it to her she handled it well tehe!
That was awesome; it's nice to read a lighter fic every now and then. Nice job.
that was a good chapter again
this is a good chapter! cant wait for the next one, hope its longer though
oh, dear. hermione is a muggleborn, hasn't she heard of MASH!?!? this is going to be good.
This story is quite intriguing. I can hardly wait to see where it leads...
Ahh ... lovely. Fluffy and funny at the same time! I'm sorry, usually I try and leave a load of concrit, but with this story I think I love it too much to find much wrong with it!
“Revolting! I love them!”
“Seven years has taught me, if nothing else, that your bark is worse than your bite, Sevie”
That was BRILLIANT!!!!!!!
Only one nitpicky thing: Brits don't say candy, they say sweets. I should know, being one myself. But, seriously, I absolutely adore this story!
Oh, I KNOW this is going to be interesting. I take it it's SS/HG then? Yippee!!
All right, I'm going to be serious now. *coughs* A wonderful beginning, you really set the scene nicely. I am familiar with the game the girls played, I find the outcomes really amusing, and poor Hermione's was hilarious. Not to mention "Sevie".
I can just tell she's going to slip up and call him that by accident ... am I right???
Can't write much, cause I'm slightly hysterical. This is going on my favorites.
Oh wow. I totally enjoyed this story. I would to read more if you have hopes to continue!
Nice. You could write a sequel to this about if Hermione and 'Sevie' had carried on an relationship.
Oh my dear sweet Lord, what has she done?
Wow. If she slips up this'll be FUNNY.
This story had me laughing so hard i nearly fell out of my chair. My family is watching a movie and they currently think i am insane =]
i loved it :]
it was vair vair funny,
and i remember i used to play that game all the time.
snape having kids is quite a scary thought though...
and especially with hermione.
loved it though,
i was utterly rotflol :]