I thought that was one of the best one-shots I have read. It was so great!
It was a very cute story, but it seems that you either wrote it really quickly, or didn't read over it after you finished, because your grammar and just basically sentence structure was very bad. I recommend you get a beta; they're really nice, and will hopefully prevent you from making these kinds of errors. :)
very cute! your a great author. please write some more stories, they are really cute. & a similair thing happened 2 me.
So sweet and fluffy! She fell asleep in his arms-how perfect! Great job
I loved how it ended. Itís unique. Every romance fic ends with "I love you". Yours was excellent.
ummmm yea it is...but u really need a bete im sorry but ur english sucks or u just typed this really fast
yes it is very romantic and sweet
Aw so sweet i loved it again and i can't wait to read your other stories.
It's quite good but PLEASE read over it propely next time.
OOOOHHHH la la, how sweet!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
That was so romantic!
Not the whole "Oh I love you," but the young love. #Sigh#
I liked it a lot.
Too right. Ron wouldn't just kiss her full out. I loved it! perfect fit for the characters.
cute story and you are really really put the characters in the right place... 10/10
Author's Response: Thankies =)
that was good...but he really should have kissed her
Author's Response: He should, but he's Ron, it would be too sudden to kiss her just like that, wouldn't it?
Thanks for the review! :)
aaaaw thats so cute!!!!!!!! *rates 10*
Author's Response: :) *Thanks for the review and the 10*
It was lovely! I applaud you. (claps hands).
Author's Response: I hadn't had any reviews for some time now :) Thanks for reviewing! I'm very glad you liked it!
*sighs* This was just sooo cute, and romantic, yes... Not a real kiss, but who cares? Everyone who's got eyes know that this is romantic.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, it was not a real kiss but that's what Ron would probably have been dreaming from that day on- a real kiss with Hermione. Lol. (I think I used incorrect tense... Anyway) Thanks for the review!
Yes, it IS romantic. Ron and Hermione don't have to snog each other senseless to make it a romantic story! I really enjoyed this, as well as your other fic! I hope you write more!
Author's Response: Thanks :)))
awww that story so sweet and cute!!! i luv it!!! its adorable!!! i cant think of nufin else to rite so yer!!!
Author's Response: I really really thank you :o)