Reviews For The slap
Reviewer: HPgurl4eva
Date: 07/27/06 12:09
Chapter: What's his problem

I thought that was one of the best one-shots I have read. It was so great!

Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/21/06 12:06
Chapter: What's his problem

It was a very cute story, but it seems that you either wrote it really quickly, or didn't read over it after you finished, because your grammar and just basically sentence structure was very bad. I recommend you get a beta; they're really nice, and will hopefully prevent you from making these kinds of errors. :)

Reviewer: daddys_little_girl
Date: 06/22/06 12:49
Chapter: What's his problem

very cute! your a great author. please write some more stories, they are really cute. & a similair thing happened 2 me.

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 06/19/06 22:04
Chapter: What's his problem

So sweet and fluffy! She fell asleep in his arms-how perfect! Great job

Reviewer: MuggleHermione
Date: 05/20/06 22:27
Chapter: What's his problem

I loved how it ended. Itís unique. Every romance fic ends with "I love you". Yours was excellent.

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 05/12/06 8:44
Chapter: What's his problem

ummmm yea it is...but u really need a bete im sorry but ur english sucks or u just typed this really fast

Reviewer: potterchick2010
Date: 05/08/06 17:08
Chapter: What's his problem

yes it is very romantic and sweet

Reviewer: Jane Bilus
Date: 05/02/06 14:18
Chapter: What's his problem

Aw so sweet i loved it again and i can't wait to read your other stories.

Reviewer: nini807
Date: 04/26/06 15:09
Chapter: What's his problem

It's quite good but PLEASE read over it propely next time.

Reviewer: mini emma
Date: 04/22/06 19:48
Chapter: What's his problem

GGGGRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Story

Reviewer: flo
Date: 04/18/06 23:10
Chapter: What's his problem

OOOOHHHH la la, how sweet!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Reviewer: Ginnyrocks
Date: 04/16/06 12:25
Chapter: What's his problem

That was so romantic!
Not the whole "Oh I love you," but the young love. #Sigh#
I liked it a lot.

Reviewer: HR1992
Date: 01/14/06 10:27
Chapter: What's his problem

Too right. Ron wouldn't just kiss her full out. I loved it! perfect fit for the characters.

Reviewer: cady
Date: 11/26/05 10:13
Chapter: What's his problem

cute story and you are really really put the characters in the right place... 10/10

Author's Response: Thankies =)

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/27/05 19:02
Chapter: What's his problem

that was good...but he really should have kissed her

Author's Response: He should, but he's Ron, it would be too sudden to kiss her just like that, wouldn't it?
Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Emilylightof flamel family
Date: 08/05/05 11:10
Chapter: What's his problem

aaaaw thats so cute!!!!!!!! *rates 10*

Author's Response: :) *Thanks for the review and the 10*

Reviewer: YouKnowWhoHBPrincess
Date: 08/02/05 18:39
Chapter: What's his problem

It was lovely! I applaud you. (claps hands).

Author's Response: I hadn't had any reviews for some time now :) Thanks for reviewing! I'm very glad you liked it!

Reviewer: HermioneG
Date: 06/23/05 2:16
Chapter: What's his problem

*sighs* This was just sooo cute, and romantic, yes... Not a real kiss, but who cares? Everyone who's got eyes know that this is romantic.

Author's Response: Yeah, well, it was not a real kiss but that's what Ron would probably have been dreaming from that day on- a real kiss with Hermione. Lol. (I think I used incorrect tense... Anyway) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/21/05 23:59
Chapter: What's his problem

Yes, it IS romantic. Ron and Hermione don't have to snog each other senseless to make it a romantic story! I really enjoyed this, as well as your other fic! I hope you write more!

Author's Response: Thanks :)))

Reviewer: hp_fan_1992
Date: 06/20/05 4:59
Chapter: What's his problem

awww that story so sweet and cute!!! i luv it!!! its adorable!!! i cant think of nufin else to rite so yer!!!

Author's Response: I really really thank you :o)

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