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Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 01/29/08 17:48
Chapter: What's his problem

aaaaaaaaaaaww

Reviewer: Beeb
Date: 01/05/08 18:48
Chapter: What's his problem

in answer to your question at the end. It is romantic

Reviewer: anarf88
Date: 10/01/07 16:49
Chapter: What's his problem

absolutely absurd

Reviewer: HermioneIsLucky
Date: 08/15/07 12:11
Chapter: What's his problem

It was sweet

Reviewer: Meg_Lupin
Date: 08/11/07 13:43
Chapter: What's his problem

That was a really great story and I'm not trying to be mean, but you seem to have a bit of a problem with English. Are you not from a English speaking country?

Reviewer: Germa
Date: 08/04/07 13:38
Chapter: What's his problem

Good

Reviewer: Glittering_Pheonix
Date: 07/06/07 2:25
Chapter: What's his problem

This is so sweet! I love it! I really liked how Harry was describing what he thought Sirius would say, "Ron! You Ďve got an Hermione on you! Whatís going on between you two?" haha! I also think that itís cute how Ron kissed Hermione near the lips instead of on them =)

Reviewer: ciscomom
Date: 06/08/07 11:38
Chapter: What's his problem

How long did it take you to write this? The story idea is good but your sentence structure is so choppy it is difficult to read in places. In addition, you use the wrong words very often which is quite off putting. I'm surprised your Beta didn't have you correct this. Nothing ruins a good idea like carelessness.

Reviewer: stanleygeorgie
Date: 05/08/07 2:36
Chapter: What's his problem

It was great I loved it when she felt asleep on Ron's arm. xoxo

Reviewer: hanna_Weasley
Date: 04/27/07 19:02
Chapter: What's his problem

yes..it refreshing that this story can still be cute and romantic without the drastic words "I love you" or the kissing on this lips because i dont think Ron would be brave enough to do it anywy lol

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 03/31/07 16:19
Chapter: What's his problem

u noe......u have a point ... its not a story with fluff and pixie dust but its just so totally romantic... im lukin fwd to more of such un-fluffy yet hopelessly romantic fics.....

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 03/31/07 16:19
Chapter: What's his problem

u noe......u have a point ... its not a story with fluff and pixie dust but its just so totally romantic... im lukin fwd to more of such un-fluffy yet hopelessly romantic fics.....

Reviewer: Aggieboy9
Date: 03/21/07 14:30
Chapter: What's his problem

Yes, I have to agree while thier was no cofession of love. there was a feeling or atmosphere of love and caring after the fight of course. you did really well with so little.

Reviewer: susa_hp
Date: 02/19/07 18:39
Chapter: What's his problem

I agree with you, it's still romantic. Though I would love you to make a secuele, woul you mind (you can see me butI'm making my puppy face) jaja

Reviewer: Mina44
Date: 02/17/07 15:07
Chapter: What's his problem

loved it, it was really sweet

Reviewer: 32594sarah
Date: 12/04/06 19:45
Chapter: What's his problem

I thought it was good but it could be better if it was longer. Spwlling errors but that is okay I might have errors when I do a story but it was great.

Reviewer: 32594sarah
Date: 12/04/06 19:45
Chapter: What's his problem

I thought it was good but it could be better if it was longer. Spwlling errors but that is okay I might have errors when I do a story but it was great.

Reviewer: Wilhelm Fink
Date: 11/22/06 19:51
Chapter: What's his problem

That was lame...but pretty good..I guess.

Reviewer: trouble12
Date: 08/30/06 14:13
Chapter: What's his problem

That was so cute! :D

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 07/30/06 12:38
Chapter: What's his problem

that was a gd story, it was cute and lovely!

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