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Name: moldy999 (Signed) · Date: 01/29/08 17:48 · For: What's his problem
aaaaaaaaaaaww


Name: Beeb (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 18:48 · For: What's his problem
in answer to your question at the end. It is romantic


Name: anarf88 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 16:49 · For: What's his problem
absolutely absurd


Name: HermioneIsLucky (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 12:11 · For: What's his problem
It was sweet


Name: Meg_Lupin (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 13:43 · For: What's his problem
That was a really great story and I'm not trying to be mean, but you seem to have a bit of a problem with English. Are you not from a English speaking country?


Name: Germa (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 13:38 · For: What's his problem
Good


Name: Glittering_Pheonix (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 2:25 · For: What's his problem
This is so sweet! I love it! I really liked how Harry was describing what he thought Sirius would say, "Ron! You Ďve got an Hermione on you! Whatís going on between you two?" haha! I also think that itís cute how Ron kissed Hermione near the lips instead of on them =)


Name: ciscomom (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 11:38 · For: What's his problem
How long did it take you to write this? The story idea is good but your sentence structure is so choppy it is difficult to read in places. In addition, you use the wrong words very often which is quite off putting. I'm surprised your Beta didn't have you correct this. Nothing ruins a good idea like carelessness.


Name: stanleygeorgie (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 2:36 · For: What's his problem
It was great I loved it when she felt asleep on Ron's arm. xoxo


Name: hanna_Weasley (Signed) · Date: 04/27/07 19:02 · For: What's his problem
yes..it refreshing that this story can still be cute and romantic without the drastic words "I love you" or the kissing on this lips because i dont think Ron would be brave enough to do it anywy lol


Name: mysticmemories (Anonymous) · Date: 03/31/07 16:19 · For: What's his problem
u noe......u have a point ... its not a story with fluff and pixie dust but its just so totally romantic... im lukin fwd to more of such un-fluffy yet hopelessly romantic fics.....


Name: mysticmemories (Anonymous) · Date: 03/31/07 16:19 · For: What's his problem
u noe......u have a point ... its not a story with fluff and pixie dust but its just so totally romantic... im lukin fwd to more of such un-fluffy yet hopelessly romantic fics.....


Name: Aggieboy9 (Signed) · Date: 03/21/07 14:30 · For: What's his problem
Yes, I have to agree while thier was no cofession of love. there was a feeling or atmosphere of love and caring after the fight of course. you did really well with so little.


Name: susa_hp (Signed) · Date: 02/19/07 18:39 · For: What's his problem
I agree with you, it's still romantic. Though I would love you to make a secuele, woul you mind (you can see me butI'm making my puppy face) jaja


Name: Mina44 (Signed) · Date: 02/17/07 15:07 · For: What's his problem
loved it, it was really sweet


Name: 32594sarah (Signed) · Date: 12/04/06 19:45 · For: What's his problem
I thought it was good but it could be better if it was longer. Spwlling errors but that is okay I might have errors when I do a story but it was great.


Name: 32594sarah (Signed) · Date: 12/04/06 19:45 · For: What's his problem
I thought it was good but it could be better if it was longer. Spwlling errors but that is okay I might have errors when I do a story but it was great.


Name: Wilhelm Fink (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 19:51 · For: What's his problem
That was lame...but pretty good..I guess.


Name: trouble12 (Signed) · Date: 08/30/06 14:13 · For: What's his problem
That was so cute! :D


Name: A_Pink_lady (Signed) · Date: 07/30/06 12:38 · For: What's his problem
that was a gd story, it was cute and lovely!


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