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Name: fleurflower (Signed) · Date: 07/03/05 14:52 · For: The Rough Beginning
this is so cool it just makes me laugh you could improve a little bit like when his bottem lip quivered a smell met is nose harry starts crying and lily rings again and hears harry crying.

Author's Response: I can't seem to stay logged in long enough to go about editing it. :-( Infact, this is the third time I've wrote this message. The others kept getting deleted. *sigh* But I'm really happy you liked it, though. :-)

Name: Eponine (Signed) · Date: 06/28/05 21:43 · For: The Rough Beginning
Very good story! I really love the beginning; it drew me in right away. And I must say, I was laughing after probably three paragraphs. This is very well written. I really enjoyed how the connection that Harry and Sirius have in the books is being foreshadowed. However, I don't think it's necessary for him to be referred as "Baby Harry" instead of just "Harry" all the time. The telephone bit, also, could easily be replaced with speaking through the Floo Network, even though this way is more entertaining. I really enjoyed this story! ~Eponine

Author's Response: *crossed fingers and hopes this goes through* I thought about the Floo thing, but I just couldn't make it work in my mind. :-)Glad you liked it though. I can't wait to get the second chapter submitted. I gotta get ahold of my Beta and see what she's been up to lately. :-)

Name: Winterdream (Signed) · Date: 06/26/05 2:08 · For: The Rough Beginning
Aha! That was great! Bite my hand funny! Can't wait for an update...it's going on my favorites...

Author's Response: Aw, really ? Thanks !!! :-D Glad you liked it !!

Name: vigal (Signed) · Date: 06/15/05 10:50 · For: The Rough Beginning
interesting story so far. I almost died of laughter as sirious discovers harry "accident"... he eh can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Just wait til you see what happens when he tries to "clean" the "accident!" :-) I'll try and get chapter 2 up soon !

Name: neverlost (Signed) · Date: 06/14/05 13:17 · For: The Rough Beginning
"Ahhh, he thought. James told me about this fellyphone thing. He picked up the receiver, and though still unsure of how it worked, he screamed "HELLO?!"" The *screaming* part and picturing Sirius with a stupid phone experience cracked me up...Excellent work!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'd update it, but my beta has been taking a much need break recently. Hopefully soon I'll update !!

Name: rgfawkes (Signed) · Date: 06/12/05 10:38 · For: The Rough Beginning
I loved it! It was right on target!

Author's Response: Thanks !! :-D

Name: Splatteh (Signed) · Date: 06/12/05 5:36 · For: The Rough Beginning
Awesome!! I think it was funny. The paragraghs were very strangely spaced out though, you had a paragragh in the middle of a sentence at one point!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. And yeah, I've noticed that about the paragraphs, too. Hmmm.... I'll have to try and fix them.

Name: miss padfoot (Signed) · Date: 06/11/05 23:21 · For: The Rough Beginning
great chapter. I couldn't stop laughing.Update soon.

Author's Response: I'll definitely be updating soon ! :-D Glad you liked it !

Name: BuckbeakBeyond (Signed) · Date: 06/11/05 18:04 · For: The Rough Beginning
Wow, the first to review! LOL, you got the babysitting deal exactly right, i know how it feels... update soon! ~10/10~

Author's Response: Thanks for the 10 !! :-D Look for an update soon !

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