very good. knew most of it. nice change in the scene. Really like the detail of the dream. KEEP WRITING!
Harr burst out laughing
a new character perhaps?
"Damn right!" Sirius said, grinning. He grabbed Snape's hand and shook it. "It's good to be back." Snape was grinning too. Harry couldn't believe it. Snape and Sirius were shaking hands? What had happened to the world since they had been gone?!
Kodak moment!
“Are you serious?!?!? You wouldn’t mind?” Harry burst.
well, as far as i know, his name is Sirius...
i like the end a whole bunch! i thought that harry might do a little kan-kan dance or something... if only...
when ever i think of hospital security, i think of big bald guys wearing white. well, i don't know why i told you this, oh well, love your already finished story by the way...
Remus glanced side-ways at Remus,
that is sort of awkward, staring side-ways at your self, don't ya think?
and i love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Oh, alright...but can we eat dinner first?" ha ha! good old Ginny... so, anyway, well, i'm just going to leave this horribly sexy review box and move onto the next chapter, k?
NO HAGRID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STUPID HARRY, DON'T BE A HERO BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he-he-he, i have a touch of morbid humor there...
he-he-he... i knew Petunia was up to no good...
“Hey, Ginny. Can I ask a favor of you?”
“Another one?” she asked in false exasperation.
“Can I kiss you?” She nodded. Harry pulled her to him, and kissed her.
Ha Ha! that is sort of funny! can i kiss you? he-he-heeee!
umm, okay. Petunia and McGonagall are starting to freak me out a bit. it's almost funny...
WTF?!?!? hehehe, i typed wtf... well, what's going on? ?????????????????????? well, i'm going to stop typing in this sexy review box and read the next chapter, k?
fantabulous story.i loved every moment of it
WAT????????????? are u kidding me?!!! petunia!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!! i love plot twists!!!!!!!!!
The ending was wayy too fast and Dumbledore was super OOC when he was extremely happy and crazy when Sirius, Ginny, and Harry returned. Great ending though and I can't wait to read the sequel
ARGH YOU ARGH YOU!!! HAGRID IS DEAD!!! ARGH ARGH ARGH
ARGH YOU ARGH YOU!!! HAGRID IS DEAD!!! ARGH ARGH ARGH
I really dislkie the fact how you made DURSLEY THE STINKIN DADA TEACHER!!! ARGH ARGH!
That mirror is very strange. very strange indeed...
WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA!! i am in MAJOR SHOCK WHOA WHOA WHOA!!! TOO MUCH INFO!!! AHHHH!!!!!! DURSLEY AT HOGWARTS?!!! I dont like this at all...Dumbedore's comment on his long list was humerous though and what happened to filch?!
