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Name: Osced (Signed) · Date: 01/13/08 13:28 · For: Friends Like These (Part 1)
Great Chapter, very interesting to read about the competitions....

Author's Response: Thank you, Osced. I'm glad you think so.

Name: I Am Peeves (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 12:47 · For: Friends Like These (Part 1)
Wow, I almost gave up hope on this story. I'm REALLY glad you updated, though. I hope to see the next chapter (or, rather, the rest of this chapter) soon!

Author's Response: *blush* I almost gave up on it too! I'm really glad you didn't. Thank you for sticking with me and reviewing. I really appreciate it, I Am Peeves.

Note to all who get notified of my updates. I had a terrible time getting this chapter posted because of the glitches created by the Hacker. I have learned that you probably received a ton of update notice emails. Sorry about that. The site wasn't updating the story properly, so I was surprised to find out that it was sending out the emails. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Name: muggler180 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 12:12 · For: Friends Like These (Part 1)
great chapter i hope you upate soon

Author's Response: Thank you very much, muggler180. I hope so too. :)

Name: Marauder Evans (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 12:07 · For: Friends Like These (Part 1)
what?! WHY did she stopp?! She could've won lool gosh i feel frustrated for her haha. And poor Remus I wonder what they'll do to him and Lindi... update soon!

Author's Response: :) Poor Lindi. She's a mess and she's going to have to pay for it. *Muwahahahahcoughsputter* Goodness, I'm out of practice with being evil. Not enough time with the Marauders these days to keep in practice, I guess. I need to work on that. I'll try to have an update for you soon. Thank you for reviewing, Marauder Evans.

Name: ren_a87 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 8:57 · For: Friends Like These (Part 1)
Another good chapter! I thought it had a good amout of action even if it was just for the competitions, you can't have every chapter packed! Anyway, it is a bit cruel of you to leave Lindi's "punishment" to the next chapter! But I guess as you have it almost finished, I'll forgive you this once! Just kidding, hope it's as good as this one!

Author's Response: Thank you, ren_a87. I know what you mean about the action. I'm afraid action isn't one of my strengths, as I enjoy writing more personal interaction than anything. Still, action is necessary, unfortunately! LOL Lindi thinks it is cruel to make her wait too! I'll try to let her and you get it over with soon. I actually hope the next one is better, but I'm not particularly optimistic as it is still part of the chapter from h*** for me, but I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you for reviewing. :)

Name: froggie (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 13:13 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
thank you
i am sweet sixteen just like lindi (i wrote a review in that chapter lol)
i think it came out when i was only fourteen, wow

Author's Response: Your quite welcome, now may I ask what on earth you were doing reading a 6th-7th year fic at fourteen, young lady? *waggles finger in very Molly Weasley fashion*

*removes Molly's apron and puts on Rita Skeeter glasses and whips out Quick Quotes Quill* So, it was your sweet sixteen. Did the little birdies get to sing "Sweet Sixteen, MoB's dear pet, Never been kissed by a little boy yet" or simply Happy Birthday? Prophet readers want to know! LOL /teasing froggie] I'm glad to know you've stuck with me all this time. We crazy's need to stick together.

Name: froggie (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 13:10 · For: Sweet Sixteen
that is so wierd i am exactly the same age as lindi was in that story...
i just had to do a shoutout to this old chapter

Author's Response: *gives birthday cake* :-D I hope you didn't get embarrassed like Lindi did!

Name: finfine (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 14:40 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
I'm sorry but are you trying to subject your loyal fans to a cruel and agonizing death? We need more MOB!

Author's Response: *hides*

Okay, here's the deal. I'm having a really hard time with this one. Not because it is a particularly complex chapter or anything (that's the next one. ) <.< /teasing MoB readers] but because I keep getting interrupted when I try to write it. And now, it has taken so long, I can't seem to get into it. However, I have sent the lion's share of it (almost 10000 words worth) to Marauderswolf for a basic betaing so I could get some feedback that might help me refocus. I have been in contact with her and she's helped me do that. I'm working on it right now (well when I finish here.;) ) I hope to get the rewrite of the first half to her this weekend. The chapter is going to have to be posted in two parts due to length. Depending on how the beta goes, I may or may not post it all at once. If not, it shouldn't be a long wait between the first and second halves. Now, when I will have anything to actually post is anyone's guess, but I feel like I'm getting close. I only wish there was more substance/action/excitement in the chapter since you have been waiting so long. I hope to make up for that in the next chapter. *more shameless teasing* Okay. That probably made no sense at all, so, long story short. I'm getting close.

I am so sorry for the very long wait. :*( Thank you for your patience and encouragement. I needed it. A lot! :)

Author's Response: Oh, and Happy Birthday, froggie! I'm sorry I don't have anything for you, but I send best wishes! Hope it's been great!

Name: liss8493 (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 8:50 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
This is an a amazing story! 47 Chapters is briliant! omg i soo cant wait for the competition! woo lol Great Story please keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, liss8493. I'm glad to know you are enjoying it. I might argue with you about the 47 chapters being brilliant. I'm really thinking it is insanity! LOL But thank you so much. I will definitely try. :)

FYI to readers: I've broken the 10,000 word limit for chapters on MNFF with the current chapter, and it still isn't finished. >.< So, you may end up with two smaller chapters as I've had to do before, or my beta, *waves at Marauderswolf* might hack out a lot of rubbish and get it back in line with the site chapter limit. Of course, if I don't finish the darn thing, she won't have a chance to cut it with the big red pen. *sigh* *goes off to try to wrestle bad chapter into submission*

Name: iluvkrum (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 14:30 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
poor remus having to lie all the time. i'm looking forward to lindi finding out about him. wondering if she's going to figure it out on her own or if remus or someone else is going to spill the beans on him. hoping you update soon!

Author's Response: *huggles Remus* Hopefully, you won't have to wonder for two more years how she finds out or what happens when/if she does, but...gah! I'm having such a hard time getting through this chapter. I wish I could just skip it and move on to the next one. Thank you for reviewing, iluvkrum. I hope I update soon too. >.<

Name: froggie (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 1:02 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
hey there thanks for responding to the review. now i know you are still alive. or that you didn't get abducted by aliens or move to the rainforest where they don't have computers.

i feel so bad that you are frustrated, but just know that we love this story a lot.
if you can't have it out by christmas, it can be my birthday present, which is ten days after.

your loyal reader

Author's Response: Hi, froggie, actually, I like the abducted by aliens thing. I might start using it as an excuse for why I still haven't finished this blasted chapter. :( Now, I'll shoot for your birthday. If I miss my target, have a very Happy Birthday! Thank you for this nice post. :)

Name: froggie (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 9:10 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
this is nuts!!! this chapter must have come out a few months ago! if this story gets deleted/dissapears from the internet, i willl be so mad. so please continue with the story! we are your loyal fans.

lots of love

Author's Response: *hides from froggie* I know! It is nuts, but it has only been a little over 2 months. <.< *dies of shame* I wish I could tell you it is because I'm working so hard on making the chapter excellent, but in truth, I'm not getting any time to work on it at all. *blames Real Life* Well, very little and very sporadic, which is a bad way for me to work. I end up getting all out of focus and...bleh! It is giving me trouble, but I promise, I'm not giving up. I wouldn't do that to my loyal fans. :*) My goal is a chapter by Christmas, but no promises, other than the one to keep trying. I am so sorry to keep you waiting so long. Thank you for your encouragement. I need some poking when I start feeling so frustrated about it all. It helps to know you are out there and that you'll be mad if I just give up. *scared* Thanks, froggie. <3

Name: readingislife (Signed) · Date: 12/03/07 15:04 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
I have just read through this story for the third time. You do have quite a flair for writing. I have read several different fanfictions, and there is only one other author that I have enjoyed nearly as much as this story.

Your description of the marauders, their personalities, their way of teasing others, their fierce loyalty, their frequent tussles with the Slytherins, are all believable based on JK Rowling's work. It is infrequent that I feel an author can draw their readers into a relationship with a character that has an incredibly believable personality, has recognizable motives for their actions, and cute quirks. I love the way you have expounded all the characters in this fic. Well done. Lindi is adorably neurotic and Remus is everything I would have wanted him to be written like. He is exactly as I pictured him in younger years (despite that bit of idiocy with Celia, but I completely believed it could have happened, I was just upset with him for doing it...) But he is expertly written in my opinion, very loyal, very thoughtful, and even the way he is haunted by lycanthropy and the way he relates to his parents. I can't praise his character development enough.

Let me encourage you, please don't give up writing this piece... if only because we enjoy it! But it is a very good bit of writing and showcases your talent well. I would not be surprised at all if you had a career in it.

Oh, and I love how each of the marauders is so different, you haven't lumped any of them together. You've showed their personalities and their maturing in their own ways, again excellent.

Thank you for sharing and please keep writing!

Author's Response: *rereads fabulous review* Thank you so much, readingislife. This is one of those reviews that nearly leaves me speechless, and makes me want to quit before I really blow it (especially when I am hating the chapter I'm working on. >.<) I won't, of course, even though it may seem that I have. :*( Thank you, thank you! for the wonderful comments on my story and my writing, particularly the characterization. I am so glad you have enjoyed it and I will try my best not to disappoint you (TRY being the key word.) *prints out lovely review for motivation* Thank you again, readinislife.

Name: HClovesPhelps (Signed) · Date: 11/22/07 10:03 · For: The Crystal Cove
I'm not throwing things at you. Just a little disappointed. This is a really really good story. You have a talent of writing that I will never have.

Author's Response: I just had to check what chapter this was for, and then refresh my memory on what happens in it, to see why you were disappointed. *blush* That's how long it's been since I wrote this. I really need to get more writing finished. *nods* I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and thanlk you so much for the encouraging words, HClovesPhelps. I appreciate the review and thanks for not throwing anything. :-)

Name: ren_a87 (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 22:17 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
Oh! Please update soon! I, too, am in serious need of an MOB fix!!

Author's Response: :*/

Name: ren_a87 (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 22:15 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
Oh! Next chapter, please! I too am in serious need of an MOB fix!!!

Author's Response: Hi, ren_a87! I'm so sorry for keeping you waiting. I'm having a terrible time finding time to work on the chapter, and to make matters worse, I'm having a really hard time with this one. It's probably because I don't have the time to dedicate to it. *eyes roll* I am trying, but... *sigh* My fervent hope is that I will have it up by Christmas and that you will not find it a poor excuse for a Christmas gift. :( I will do my very best.

Name: froggie (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 21:58 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
oooh i am soo excited for the next chapter! this chapter was good, kind of a fillerish type i think, but nice all the same i loved the part where they gave each other the same gift--so cute! im getting impatient herebecause i need a new chappie! mob fix.
kk cant wait for update, im excited.

Author's Response: Thank you, froggie! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was a sort of fillerish chapter, though I think of it more as a building block chapter, in that it has information that will serve as a sort of foundation for future chapters. Probably the same thing, but as I am incoherent where the story is concerned, I'm rambling. *blush* I am trying to get the next one finished. I'm sorry for trying your patience so horribly. I hope it won't be too much longer. Thank you for reviewing and giving me encouragement. I really need it!

Name: Roommate of the Quillster (Signed) · Date: 10/30/07 2:47 · For: Shining Light in the Growing Darkness
I love how precious and delicately you approach the all-important topic of Remus, a werewolf, dating a beautiful young lady. Remusís wishes were so lovely and honest. It was quite in character for him to be in awe and gratitude for having such a treasure to hold. It was a lovely moment to read.

Then came the duel with the Marauders. Although it was completely brilliant and great fun, it felt a bit weak for the four of them. I know they were playing nice because Lindi was there. But it seems like if one of them gets to do the teasing, somehow all of them would join in at one pointóafter all, they are boys. Even though Sirius wanted to make a point, the boys were lighthearted and I could completely see them joining in the fun because they were a little bored or just couldnít keep them out of the action. Particularly when Lily walked in, I could see a hex miss aiming and James and Lily joining in the duel. Just a personal thought. Though I did like how you resolved it and got them talking about students involved with Death Eaters.

Once again, you leave us loving the characters. This was a lovely filler chapter. One of those life experience chapters where nothing spectacular happens, but people exist. Sometimes I like a little more detail that you so perfectly give about characters and their thoughts and emotions. Or even the little things that Remus notices.

But, I do say that leaving us wanting more was the best thing you could have done. Iíd almost forgotten about field day, and now Iím so ready to see Lindi take on James and see who wins whatever bet.

Author's Response: Oh, Roommate, I am so ashamed! It has taken me far too long to get to these absolutely fabulous reviews. I have no good excuse. Please forgive me. I am struggling with the next chapter, to the point I'm ready to delete the whole story, (Of course, I won't, but I want to!) and I can't seem to have a coherent thought about anything related to it, including reviews with such depth as you have given me here. I promise to make a proper response as soon as I finish the blooming chapter. Please forgive me until then and thank you for taking the time (considerable time, I'd say) to share your thoughts with me. And I'm so glad you are back! :)

Author's Response: Oh, Roommate, I am so ashamed! It has taken me far too long to get to these absolutely fabulous reviews. I have no good excuse. Please forgive me. I am struggling with the next chapter, to the point I'm ready to delete the whole story, (Of course, I won't, but I want to!) and I can't seem to have a coherent thought about anything related to it, including reviews with such depth as you have given me here. I promise to make a proper response as soon as I finish the blooming chapter. Please forgive me until then and thank you for taking the time (considerable time, I'd say) to share your thoughts with me. And I'm so glad you are back! :)

Name: Roommate of the Quillster (Signed) · Date: 10/30/07 2:26 · For: No Funny Business
I find it interesting and good that when you bring us back from Christmas holiday, you also bring us back into wizarding current events. Itís not pleasant (but neither is returning to school after a holiday) but the parallel emotion was a nice touch.

I also am interested in how subtly you continue to change and adapt Peterís character. I donít think heís completely thought out. Itís like sometimes you remember that he becomes the traitor and so you throw in something almostÖ obvious that reminds the readers that heís not the good guy. But then youíll revert back to him acting as a typical marauder.

Peter blushed, but looked around nervously before he answered in a hushed voice as his mother had done. ďLord V-Voldemort.Ē

Although this is appropriate and possibly accurate, it was kind of thrown at us. And then not mentioned again. Perhaps think of evening him out to make him more consistent.

I liked bringing Will Chambers back. I happen to have a mini-crush on him because of the small details youíve included about him. My favorite line was this:

ďHeís a Hit Wizard?Ē Oh, brilliantÖI have a Hit Wizard threatening me if he thinks I mistreat her.

The best part about this was how nonchalantly Lindi mentioned her cousinís line of work and how seriously it affects Remus. How utterly evil of you to add another stress to Remusís self-consciousness about dating the beautiful Lindi. :) I thought it was brilliant. And it was brilliant because you didnít focus or panic about it. You just mentioned it and moved on even though it was something that will probably pop up in the back of Remusís mind for a while ó particularly considering the setting he first met Will the Hit Wizard in. Nice work at this detail. But thatís something youíre usually very on top of is including the details that make your story significant and your characters real.

Author's Response: Wow, another amazing review. Forgive me for taking so very long to respond. Peter...Peter is difficult. I understand and fully agree with your assessment that he is uneven. The problem is, I see him that way. I don't mean you are wrong at all. It is a problem I have. I just think there would be little hints that would show up and I feel the need to hint, though I know they are rather obvious, yet I don't know if it is because we all know the truth about him, or if I'm just being too obvious. Does that make sense? I will definitely try to be more aware of him. The miserable little *^*&^*&

One thing I enjoy is writing things that my characters are oblivious to, ie Lindi's oblivion to the impact her statements have on Remus and his life. Being omniscient can be fun. *hehehe* Or should that be *muwahahaha* Well, thank you for this very lovely and helpful review. I will keep your points on Peter in mind. You may have to keep on me, because I do find him a chore. :-P Thanks, Roommate.

Name: Roommate of the Quillster (Signed) · Date: 10/30/07 2:02 · For: Donít Drink the Punch
After leaving us with a perfect moment of bliss (I love it when you use that phrase), you bring us back to reality. :) And the fun begins. The witty banter completely met the standard youíve set in your story ó including the CPR discussion and crystal ball of their futures.

You continue bringing in Severus Snape. I will be quite intrigued to see what you do with the tension youíve built and what has to inevitably happen between him and Remus. However, I do think youíve hit Remusís personality accurately ó he is by far the most patient of all the Marauders.

Which brings me to the punch. Of all the things to put in the punch, the blabbing potion or whatever it was, was an excellent choice. It was nice to see the disasters coming up as well as to hear what was on everyoneís mind. For once it was nice to see Lindi as outspoken as she was ó even if it wasnít really her. You took a nice opportunity to showcase her thoughts without disrupting the integrity of your storyline.

Personally, I donít love the idea of Sirius as a complete ladies man in real life. But, you write it well and keep the camaraderie of the Marauders consistent, which is the more important thing.

Once again, after the almost forty chapter build-up, itís nice to see Remus happy. And with Lindi. :) Youíve hit their romantic innocence right on the mark, and itís nice to finally have them together.

Author's Response: :*) You like the moment of bliss phrase? *dies* Sometimes I look at the title and have considered pulling a KFC. You know, they don't ever call it Kentucky Fried Chicken anymore. LOL Would you all be able to find the story if I change the title simply to MoB? A long time ago, one of the funnier people over on the forums started poking fun at story titles (all in good fun). It was one of the funniest things I've read, but I was so worried she'd get a hold of MoB. *dies* Part of me was hoping she would, and another was dreading it. Fortunately or unfortunately, she was made to stop. :( Still, I throw the title in once in a while, don't I? Not sure why. Maybe I'm a masochist. LOL Anyway, I'm glad you like it. It makes me feel a little better about it.

Severus...he is complicated for me. I hope I do him justice, though I will admit that I will likely take the cowardís way out and probably not focus on him any more than I feel is absolutely necessary. :*/ Ladies man Sirius... :*) I can't help myself...40 chapter build up...*dies again* This review...wonderful. Thank you, again Roommate.

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