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Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 21:17 · For: Just a Little Hexing Between Friends
hahahaha James and Sirius are so funny and so right. that was a great chapter, they were so close. I'm sure that Lindi likes him, and that she was probably thinking "kiss me" but being shy when Remus gave er more then just a second to think she got nervouse. I still think things will work out for her despite darlean i can't wait to read more. GREAT story.

Author's Response: That is exactly how Lindi feels! Thank you, Fiffer!

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 20:49 · For: Special Attention
I love Sirius and James they are just to funnywhen they tease remus. Speaking of which Mr. Moony is making progress. I smell love in the air. i can't wait to read more. I really like how you write.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 20:22 · For: Lindiís Problem
Arhhh curse Darlene. Well i suppose something had to be in the way of their romance for their to be a good story. Anyway i'm proud that remus figured out what was bugging Lindi. An i must ay i quite agree with messers prongs and padfoot.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 19:46 · For: Sixth Year Begins
So astronomy with Lindi and Darlene that should be intersting spetially with Lily playing matchmaker. The spetiall lessons seem interesting. This does explain how peter managed to be a spy and how Snape became so good at it. i wonder if all the maruders will become good at it. As for the ball i think it is a great idea. And i have a feeling that lindi and remus might attend together.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 19:01 · For: Not Her Little Boy Anymore
that was one of the funniest chapters i've read it was great.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 18:15 · For: Butterbeer with Mum
Remus is so cute he get's so nervouse. I'm glad they got to talk for a little even if it wasn't the most charming talk they could have ahd. Mrs. Lupin is great a typical mum. malfoy and them suck. Anyway Lindi seems happy and it's nice to know a bit more about her. great story so far.

Author's Response: I know! He is so adorable. *huggles Remus* I'm glad you like Mrs. Lupin. I'm very fond of her. :) Malfoy...not so much, but he is fun to write. lol I'm glad you are enjoying the story, Fiffer. Thank you for such great feedback. I really appreciate it.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 1:10 · For: Girl Talk
So Lily is trying t get Remus on the good side. this should be quite interesting. I wounder what he'll et up to with those draemy eyes of his.

Author's Response: Lily needed a mission to bring her into the story. What better one than helping poor dear Remus get the girl? ;)

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 0:21 · For: Tutors and Teasing
Wow so Remus had another girl after him. Intersting. I tink it's great that Lily is tuttoring lindi. Anyway i like the story so far. I wonder how Darlean/Remus will affect Lindi/Remus

Author's Response: I figure Remus was so adorable and kind and wonderful and part of the cool crowd and just perfect he just had to have girls after him. ;) I had to get Lily into the story some how. ;) Glad you like that. Thank you for reviewing, Fiffer.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 23:59 · For: Humiliation
Wow professor Adamson is quite mean. I'm proud Resmus stood up to him. I wonder why Lindi is so bad at spells she seems bright enough to get them. Anyway i like the way you write the maruder's freindship it is very realistic.

Author's Response: Yes, he's a real jerk! Lindi....*sigh* <.< And thank you so much, Fiffer Haliwell. I really try to make it realistic, or as realistic as a story about boys with magic wands and werewolves can be. ;) Thank you.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 23:30 · For: The Bet
Yey for Lindi, I lvoe Sirius but he can be an icredible prat whe it comes to girls. with his friends however he is extreamly loyal. I wonder how remus will get close to lindi and how Sirius will take it. even if he isn't emotionally involved it might be a blow to his ego. Then again he is a good friend.

Author's Response: LOL yes, Sirius can be a prat when it comes to a number of things, but I love him anyway. And that is a good question. ;) Thank you for reviewing, Fiffer.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 23:10 · For: The Welcome Back Feast
Interesting she's a ravenclaw. Remus seems to really like her, as does everyone else. I liked the sorting ceremony for her and i really like that she isn't the first to do it. Something tells me that Sirius is in for a big suprise, I really hope he looses this bet.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 23:01 · For: Delectable Dellington
I knew that girl was important. I wonder where she is transfering from. Sirius better not fuin this for Remus as much as I love him Sirius can be a git sometimes. Anyway I love the way youprotray the maruders, and how the map occures little by little and not all at once.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Fiffer. Yes, she's slightly important. lol I'm so glad you like my version of the Marauders. That means the world to me.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 21:53 · For: Hard Work Pays
Wow they mae it finally. I found it so sweet that they were so mad at nobody being able to help him. finally he won't suffer so much.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 21:51 · For: Time Flies
That was posibly the best reaction I have heard ever. It's really well written. You show that they care for him but they are also hurt because he didn't trust them. His first kiss was so sweet. i'm sure taht girl is going to play an important part in the story. I wonder why she never went to hogwarts she seemed to have been lookign forward to it.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 21:46 · For: Making Friends
I love that they become friends over the materials of their wand. Ok i know they became freinds befoer that but still that was like the final piece. I love that James tries to tame his hair.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/09/08 21:42 · For: 1st Year: The Adventure Begins
I had never thought of it before, but it does fit that there are more then just 5 first years or so. I like the idea that they weren't all just placed together, they actually MADE their friendship. Any way nice chapter. I love Sirius and te way he acts in this story.

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 21:57 · For: A Wish Come True
Wow I'm so happy for Remus he really deserved that. I really like the way you write.

Author's Response: :) Thank you so much for saying so, Fiffer. I love that name, btw. And yes, Remus did deserve it. *loves him* Thank you for the lovely review. :)

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 21:14 · For: Prologue: Notes on a Life
wow poor Remus that is a harsh childhood and he is so sweet. KNowing his future it's even harder to rad all this but at least he had some very good years.

Author's Response: :( Poor Remus; he is sooo sweet. But he had parents who loved him. I firmly believe that, or it would break my heart completely. Thank you for reading and reviewing Fiffer Haliwell. I appreciate it.

Name: finfine (Signed) · Date: 07/02/08 19:09 · For: Friends Like These (Part Two)
I have really tried to be patient but please tell me you are on the verge of submitting a new chapter! Btw keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Oh, finfine, I am trying. I actually think something went my way for a change today, which will hopefully give me more time this week to work on it than I had expected or hoped. *cheers* Now, this is no promise that I will finish it this week. I'd be surprised if I did, to be honest. I have been so distracted from it for such a long time, it will take work to get into the right frame of mind, but hopefully, I will make good progress. I rnAM REALLY SORRY IT IS TAKING SO LONG! I really hope I manage to make it worth the wait, though I realize that is a tall order after this HORRENDOUSLY long wait. Again, I promise to try. Thanks for the prod. :)rn

Name: thelongestwinter (Signed) · Date: 06/25/08 22:42 · For: Friends Like These (Part Two)
I’m a little sad. I haven’t had internet for the past three months and I finally bought a new wireless card for my computer today. One of the first things that I did (now that I can finally use the internet again) was log onto this site, fingers crossed and hoping against hope that Chapter 50 had been posted, but to no avail. So sad. But on the bright side, apparently I haven’t missed much during my three month technological darkness.

Since I’m here (and because I can again) I just want to commend you for Chapter 49. It was great, as always. I’m glad to finally know what the bet was. It definitely took Lindi far out of her comfort zone! And you gotta love teenage Remus! Oh, hormones. Plus, the “mature” birthday present that the Marauders gave Remus were fantastic. They are starting to grow up and I’m glad to be able to witness it through your fanfic.

Lastly, I want to thank you for not leaving us in too much suspense as we eagerly await Chapter 50. However, since the end of this chapter was so open-ended, I am really quite curious to see where you are going next. Happy writing!

Author's Response: Oh, I feel so very guilty. What a wonderful, and patient review. I am so ashamed that it has been so long. I always told myself I would not do that to readers as I hate it when I'm reading something. I really don't blame anyone who has given up or lost interest in the story. If it makes a difference, I have 3800+ words for the next chapter written. I still have a lot to go, but I am a little more focused than I have been in weeks. Sadly, I will have to go out of town this weekend and probably lose my focus again. >.< But RL...what can one do? *sigh* I am glad that even if the last chapter was open-ended, it wasn't a vicious cliff hanger or I would be so guilt ridden I would probably want to run away. :*(

Chapter 49...Oh, yes...hormones...yep...<.< scary things...>.> :X I'm really glad you liked the presents. I find those sorts of things difficult to come up with, which is why I'm trying to figure out how I can avoid all the other characters' birthdays. *wonders if anyone would buy that everyones' birthdays coincidentally occur over full moon and so we don't see what everyone gets/gives* *rolls eyes* Okay, now I'm rambling. I'm really happy you are enjoying the story still. Thank you for this really wonderful review, thelongestwinter. I will try very hard to get chapter 50 finished soon.

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