Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 3:54
Chapter: Piling Straw on a Camelís Back

wow a lot of big news. I wonder how this will affect remus today. I'm betting it's not going to cheer him up. The deaths are absolutly horrible but i suppose it was a matter for time before tehy got involved in it. Originally i was going to read until i read about the fatefull kiss but since it is 3am and we still haven't reached it i suppose i'll keep readingtomorrow. Great story once agian.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 3:19
Chapter: You Just Never Know

yey! things are going quite well for the two lovebirds.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 2:59
Chapter: Sweet Sixteen

that was a mean prank to play funny but mean. I'm gald she took it so well. I half expected remus to give her a quick kiss right there jsut so the birds would shut up. It was good of them anyway and remus sure seems willing to give up his sleep for her which is saying something.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 2:25
Chapter: Halloween

mean joke on sirius' part. the party seemed cool and the boys did seem to have fun during the full moon. I get exactly how remus is feeling, he feels like he is dating her but not really it sucks. With any luck that will change soon and if lily has anything to do wiht it they will share lips soon enough.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 1:48
Chapter: A Shadow of Doubt

that was an intereseting chpter, it certenly seems like Lindi wanted to help remus. i wonder how things will progress from here.

Author's Response: Thanks, Fiffer. We shall see. ;)

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 1:16
Chapter: Thanks to the Slytherins

I really like this chapter. I'm glad hagrid was able to help. It amkes things seem a bit more real if the maruders don't ahve all the answers. I really like this story it jas jsut the right mix of real life and the magical world of potter to make it fantastic. You write incredibly well and you can delvelop your characters witha lot of depth. My hat is off to you and your writing.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 0:49
Chapter: The Crystal Cove

Arhhh i REally wanted them to kiss but it works fine this way too, it fits with lindi's personality. I eally hope that she goes to remus' house and not only to leasrn about chocolats. Those were a briliant idea by the way. The cove aslo sounds beautiful. I wonder, why McFonagall is looking for him. Now originally i was going to stop at this chapter and continue reading tomorrow but seeing as there was no kissing i guess i'll jsut ave to keep on reading.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 0:25
Chapter: The Answer Is As Clear as Pea Soup

hahaha that diversion was pricless, good of remus to presuade her to go to the cove. I'm so glad lindi isn't prejudice she didn't seem like the type. James and sirius are the best they really care for their friend.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 0:02
Chapter: Playing Games

hahaha you have to give james somepoint he is quite clever at times. The place tehy went to sounds beautiful and the game they invented is quite useful for their purpuses

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 23:33
Chapter: A Little Adventure

This was a good chapter, I defenetly see sparks between remus and lindi not to mention james and lily.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 22:55
Chapter: Confusion

yey I'm really happy lindi and daniels aren't going out, it seems like remus has a very realistic chance. Now if only Darlene would let them be. I'm sure the maruders will figure something out.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 22:09
Chapter: Peter's Insight

Wow so Lindi and aniels what is up with that? Peter is very bright in this chapter and i really think he is right. Sirius is very protective and loyal towards his friends that's a good quality in him. I really hope remus and lindi figure things out. I must say though remus is being very grown up about it mature if very lenient. I can sympathise with him.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 21:17
Chapter: Just a Little Hexing Between Friends

hahahaha James and Sirius are so funny and so right. that was a great chapter, they were so close. I'm sure that Lindi likes him, and that she was probably thinking "kiss me" but being shy when Remus gave er more then just a second to think she got nervouse. I still think things will work out for her despite darlean i can't wait to read more. GREAT story.

Author's Response: That is exactly how Lindi feels! Thank you, Fiffer!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 20:49
Chapter: Special Attention

I love Sirius and James they are just to funnywhen they tease remus. Speaking of which Mr. Moony is making progress. I smell love in the air. i can't wait to read more. I really like how you write.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 20:22
Chapter: Lindiís Problem

Arhhh curse Darlene. Well i suppose something had to be in the way of their romance for their to be a good story. Anyway i'm proud that remus figured out what was bugging Lindi. An i must ay i quite agree with messers prongs and padfoot.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 19:46
Chapter: Sixth Year Begins

So astronomy with Lindi and Darlene that should be intersting spetially with Lily playing matchmaker. The spetiall lessons seem interesting. This does explain how peter managed to be a spy and how Snape became so good at it. i wonder if all the maruders will become good at it. As for the ball i think it is a great idea. And i have a feeling that lindi and remus might attend together.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 19:01
Chapter: Not Her Little Boy Anymore

that was one of the funniest chapters i've read it was great.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 18:15
Chapter: Butterbeer with Mum

Remus is so cute he get's so nervouse. I'm glad they got to talk for a little even if it wasn't the most charming talk they could have ahd. Mrs. Lupin is great a typical mum. malfoy and them suck. Anyway Lindi seems happy and it's nice to know a bit more about her. great story so far.

Author's Response: I know! He is so adorable. *huggles Remus* I'm glad you like Mrs. Lupin. I'm very fond of her. :) Malfoy...not so much, but he is fun to write. lol I'm glad you are enjoying the story, Fiffer. Thank you for such great feedback. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 1:10
Chapter: Girl Talk

So Lily is trying t get Remus on the good side. this should be quite interesting. I wounder what he'll et up to with those draemy eyes of his.

Author's Response: Lily needed a mission to bring her into the story. What better one than helping poor dear Remus get the girl? ;)

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/10/08 0:21
Chapter: Tutors and Teasing

Wow so Remus had another girl after him. Intersting. I tink it's great that Lily is tuttoring lindi. Anyway i like the story so far. I wonder how Darlean/Remus will affect Lindi/Remus

Author's Response: I figure Remus was so adorable and kind and wonderful and part of the cool crowd and just perfect he just had to have girls after him. ;) I had to get Lily into the story some how. ;) Glad you like that. Thank you for reviewing, Fiffer.

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