Reviewer: Linwe Ferland
Date: 07/26/08 11:45
Chapter: Prologue: Notes on a Life

Well I'll keep my eye out for updates.

Author's Response: I'll try not to keep you checking too long. :)

Reviewer: Linwe Ferland
Date: 07/26/08 11:22
Chapter: Prologue: Notes on a Life

Yeah, I'm here and i love it! thanks for replying :)

Author's Response: Haha! *waves* I'm just sorry I didn't get to it as quickly as you. I love the interaction with readers and really hate that I've been so busy these past few months so that I've actually had to decide between responding to reviews and time to write the story. >.< I hope it gets better soon. Thank you again. :)

Reviewer: flapjack88
Date: 07/24/08 13:13
Chapter: Friends Like These (Part Two)

Yes, I know. I'm an absolute crap fan. (But please note, definately still a fan) The last time I reviewed this must've been lightyears ago.
To be honest I just havent had the time (I know you understand that this RL crap gets in the way). I've just got back from being sooooo busy and I've just discovered I have three days to do absolutely nothing. So after catching up on everything else I need to I've decided now that i'm going to read this all the way through again because I just re-read the first chapter and realised why I love this fic so much.
Once I've read through i'm going to leave a nice lil review for you.
Hope you're okay and everything isnt too hectic.
Kerry xx

Author's Response: O.M.G!!!! Kerry! I am so thrilled to see you. I was sure that your life had become so busy that you would have no more time for MoB (perfectly understandable), especially with my horrible updating record. >.< I'm quite sure many of my earlier readers have drifted off, with nothing to keep them tuned in. So, I am truly thrilled to *see* you. Things are pretty hectic, which is why it has been since *dies* March that I last updated. I can't believe it has really been that long. *dies some more* I'm having some difficulty getting the flow going and now is when things are getting more intense in the story and I really need to be focused. *headdesk* However, I have been getting more excited about the story again, probably more than I have since reading HBP (which rather dulled my inspiration, I admit) and then I had some more issues with DH that didn't provide much motivation either. But anyway, I'm more involved with it again. Now, if I can just find the time and get back into the grove with the actually writing. *crosses fingers* Well, knowing there are still readers out there helps. I hope you aren't horribly disappointed in the story upon reread. I actually reread it myself about a month ago. (I had to remind myself what it was about after so long. *blush*) I was a little mortified at some of it, but rewrites will have to wait for me to get it finished. I feel I owe that to my long time readers. So, anyway. As you can tell from my rambling, I'm so glad you're still there. *goes back to reread flapjack88 reviews for inspiration* *expects to laugh out loud!...again* :D

Reviewer: Linwe Ferland
Date: 07/18/08 17:53
Chapter: Prologue: Notes on a Life

Its taken me two days to read this story! Please tell me its not the end?? I really enjoyed it so far!!

Author's Response: :) I'm so glad you've enjoyed it, Linwe Ferland. Nope, not the end, not even really close. >.< I should probably put a warning on it for new readers: Halt! This story has not been completed and the author is taking FOREVER to post updates! /warning] *dies of shame* I am working on it though. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you for reading and leaving a review. It has been so long since I posted the last update, it's not getting very much traffic and I have to wonder if I have any readers left. :( Thanks for letting me know some are still out there. :D

Reviewer: ginnystwin629
Date: 07/15/08 18:04
Chapter: Friends Like These (Part Two)

hey!!! i read this in one big swoop. it's soooooooooooooo good!! please dont tell me it is the end! can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you, ginnystwin629. I'm really glad you have enjoyed it so far. No, it is definitely not the end, though I'm afraid you will (obviously) have to wait for more. I am working on it, though, so thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story, once I manage to get more posted. :)

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/14/08 1:22
Chapter: Friends Like These (Part Two)

hahah that was a good birthday remus defenetly deserved that. MAn that was funny to read, i'm defenetly glad taht james won the bet now,

Author's Response: *blinks* O.O Wow, Fiffer reviewed every chapter....*speechless* Wow. I am so glad to know you are enjoying the story. That you have taken the time to comment, with specifics O.O, on each chapter is so kind. I can't get to them individually at the moment, but I just want to say THANK YOU! I really truly appreciate it. I must hurry and get the next chapter up, especially after the comment down the page that you are glad you don't have to wait for updates. *cringes* *blushes at longtime readers' rolling eyes* Thank you again, Fiffer.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/14/08 0:18
Chapter: Friends Like These (Part 1)

So lindi lost? i wonder why she would do taht? Mabey she was afraid of something in the forest? who nows. I wonder what they'll ahve lindi do. I bet it will be a type fo gift for remus.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/13/08 1:25
Chapter: Almost Perfect

I like dhtis chapter it was quite nice. Lindi's and remus' realtionship is geat, i love how they like eachother so much but still get totally nervouse about the other's feelings. Sirius is cool, i mean i get why leanne is hurt and i really wish she hadn't gotten hurt. but it is sirius aand he didn't exactly do anything wrong. Then again i'm sure that if it was anyone but sirius i would be singing a different tale. Anyway i really liked this chapter and i'm gald everything is turning out fine so far.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/12/08 23:19
Chapter: No Funny Business

that talk with will was great, i really do like him he is a good "older brother".

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/12/08 1:50
Chapter: Out of His Mind

wow that is a lot to consider. Knowing how much lindi and remus love eachother i think it's right for her to know but not yet she ahs to mature a little. I cetenly hope remus lets himself enjoy it while he can.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/12/08 1:23
Chapter: Blossoming

Wow poor remus thata is a big delema on one side it might be better if she jsut asdds two and two together but it might really hurt er that he didn't trust her. I also see sirius' point. That should be a very interesting fight.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/12/08 0:53
Chapter: Under Pressure

That was a nicce cahpter. For a moment it seemed like lindi did know but she doesn't I hope she figures it out just around the time tath remus tells her and it turns out well. I hate knowing that in the very end soemthign has to come between them i just really hope it isn;t this though i ave a feeling it might be related.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/12/08 0:16
Chapter: Home for the Holidays

hahaha that ending conversation was pricless. i loved it. The train ride was also quite nice. I wonder how remus will explaine te love bites

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 23:12
Chapter: Don’t Drink the Punch

Those preats spiking the punch was funny in the end. I'm so glad things are working out between them. Lindi is indeed a lucky girl.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 22:48
Chapter: The Crystal Ball

FIANALLY!!!! they kissed they kissed. That was a wonderful kiss. Fantastic in fact defenetly worth all the antisiaption. I'm so happy they are together. And i'm hapy yhay everything else in this chapter worked out too now i must keep reading.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 22:01
Chapter: Some Sort of Conspiracy

wow the note parchment was clever, and that conversation was extreamly sweet. i'm glad things are working out for them. I hope lily realises that james does really love her.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 20:35
Chapter: We Need to Talk

Oh My god. I feel like killing who ever interupted them. That must have been a hard conversation, but at least they got to say everything that needed to be said. Otherwise it would have been bad. At least they are together now or really close to it. curse whoever interupted them.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 19:38
Chapter: Things Get a Little Explosive

Wow wow wow lindi stood up to Darlene. This is good. and now she is looking for remus? i don't think the ball is that out of the question. I can
't belive lily is going to the ball with soemone else but james is defenetly making progress.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 19:00
Chapter: When It Rains

Wow I am so proud of sirius I can't even begin to describe how i proud i am. Some one needed to put lindi in prespective. I am not justifying waht remus did but i do get why he did it. Anyway it was a great chapter. Fantastic to read. i certenly hope that Sirius managed to solve things between remus and lindi at least a litte

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/11/08 18:22
Chapter: Where There's a Will

Oh my god. NO NO NO NO Remus was doing so well things with lindi were going great. Arhh he should ahve trusted he a bit more then again Lindi shouldn't ahve sidmissed him like that. Stupid firewiskey. arhh ok i better keep reading before i go crazy. Glad i don't have to wait for updates.

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