wow the note parchment was clever, and that conversation was extreamly sweet. i'm glad things are working out for them. I hope lily realises that james does really love her.
Oh My god. I feel like killing who ever interupted them. That must have been a hard conversation, but at least they got to say everything that needed to be said. Otherwise it would have been bad. At least they are together now or really close to it. curse whoever interupted them.
Wow wow wow lindi stood up to Darlene. This is good. and now she is looking for remus? i don't think the ball is that out of the question. I can
't belive lily is going to the ball with soemone else but james is defenetly making progress.
Wow I am so proud of sirius I can't even begin to describe how i proud i am. Some one needed to put lindi in prespective. I am not justifying waht remus did but i do get why he did it. Anyway it was a great chapter. Fantastic to read. i certenly hope that Sirius managed to solve things between remus and lindi at least a litte
Oh my god. NO NO NO NO Remus was doing so well things with lindi were going great. Arhh he should ahve trusted he a bit more then again Lindi shouldn't ahve sidmissed him like that. Stupid firewiskey. arhh ok i better keep reading before i go crazy. Glad i don't have to wait for updates.
wow a lot of big news. I wonder how this will affect remus today. I'm betting it's not going to cheer him up. The deaths are absolutly horrible but i suppose it was a matter for time before tehy got involved in it. Originally i was going to read until i read about the fatefull kiss but since it is 3am and we still haven't reached it i suppose i'll keep readingtomorrow. Great story once agian.
yey! things are going quite well for the two lovebirds.
that was a mean prank to play funny but mean. I'm gald she took it so well. I half expected remus to give her a quick kiss right there jsut so the birds would shut up. It was good of them anyway and remus sure seems willing to give up his sleep for her which is saying something.
mean joke on sirius' part. the party seemed cool and the boys did seem to have fun during the full moon. I get exactly how remus is feeling, he feels like he is dating her but not really it sucks. With any luck that will change soon and if lily has anything to do wiht it they will share lips soon enough.
that was an intereseting chpter, it certenly seems like Lindi wanted to help remus. i wonder how things will progress from here.
Author's Response: Thanks, Fiffer. We shall see. ;)
I really like this chapter. I'm glad hagrid was able to help. It amkes things seem a bit more real if the maruders don't ahve all the answers. I really like this story it jas jsut the right mix of real life and the magical world of potter to make it fantastic. You write incredibly well and you can delvelop your characters witha lot of depth. My hat is off to you and your writing.
Arhhh i REally wanted them to kiss but it works fine this way too, it fits with lindi's personality. I eally hope that she goes to remus' house and not only to leasrn about chocolats. Those were a briliant idea by the way. The cove aslo sounds beautiful. I wonder, why McFonagall is looking for him. Now originally i was going to stop at this chapter and continue reading tomorrow but seeing as there was no kissing i guess i'll jsut ave to keep on reading.
hahaha that diversion was pricless, good of remus to presuade her to go to the cove. I'm so glad lindi isn't prejudice she didn't seem like the type. James and sirius are the best they really care for their friend.
hahaha you have to give james somepoint he is quite clever at times. The place tehy went to sounds beautiful and the game they invented is quite useful for their purpuses
This was a good chapter, I defenetly see sparks between remus and lindi not to mention james and lily.
yey I'm really happy lindi and daniels aren't going out, it seems like remus has a very realistic chance. Now if only Darlene would let them be. I'm sure the maruders will figure something out.
Wow so Lindi and aniels what is up with that? Peter is very bright in this chapter and i really think he is right. Sirius is very protective and loyal towards his friends that's a good quality in him. I really hope remus and lindi figure things out. I must say though remus is being very grown up about it mature if very lenient. I can sympathise with him.
hahahaha James and Sirius are so funny and so right. that was a great chapter, they were so close. I'm sure that Lindi likes him, and that she was probably thinking "kiss me" but being shy when Remus gave er more then just a second to think she got nervouse. I still think things will work out for her despite darlean i can't wait to read more. GREAT story.
Author's Response: That is exactly how Lindi feels! Thank you, Fiffer!
I love Sirius and James they are just to funnywhen they tease remus. Speaking of which Mr. Moony is making progress. I smell love in the air. i can't wait to read more. I really like how you write.
Arhhh curse Darlene. Well i suppose something had to be in the way of their romance for their to be a good story. Anyway i'm proud that remus figured out what was bugging Lindi. An i must ay i quite agree with messers prongs and padfoot.