Reviewer: Megstiel
Date: 10/22/14 12:21
Chapter: The Scent of Heaven

It's been a while, but I finally got around to checking to see if any new chapters were added and I was not disappointed! I had forgotten my old login information, so I just made a new one. My old name was Southern_Pride. I just wanted to let you know that I'm still around! I can't wait to hear what happens next!

Reviewer: Thor27
Date: 07/06/14 6:16
Chapter: The Scent of Heaven

First time reviewing. Great story so far! Please don't stop here :)

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 05/31/14 21:37
Chapter: The Scent of Heaven

Oh nooooooooooo! She is leaving? How could you do this to us?

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 02/26/14 15:09
Chapter: The Scent of Heaven

Oh man. I'm not sure Remus will ever see Lindi again. All of a sudden I'm invested in this story to see how you're planning to end it. (If you're ending it. I mean, I know you will finish, I'm just not sure if you're near the end of not.)

And I am so curious about the note!

Whenever you write the next chapter, I will read it.

Author's Response: Ahhh...Cinderella Angelina!! CA! How exciting! I remember you from many moons ago... When the forums were buzzing and Electronicquillster was a mod, and ...*wistful sigh* the good ole days. :D It is so good to *see* you and to know you are reading. I am definitely planning to end it, but I'm not as near the end as I should be after 8 years! *non-wistful sigh* But getting closer by the year! I will say, I'm pretty sure it won't take another 8 years, even as slowly as I'm updating these days. >.< Thank you so much for reviewing. It's always a thrill to *see* someone after a long while.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 01/05/14 21:05
Chapter: A Cruel Joke Continued

I keep checking, but you haven't written anything! If you are posting somewhere else, please let me know!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking and forgive me for neglecting my readers and especially my reviewers. Thank you, Buckbeak. Hope the new one is satisfactory. At least it's long!!! :*)

Reviewer: marauderm
Date: 12/03/13 8:55
Chapter: Prologue: Notes on a Life

Wow, I think I've read this story at least 3 times since my last review. And you still haven't posted a new chapter! *dying inside*

I am still checking once a day for a new update, so please please please hurry up haha. *begging*

AND don't tell me you've given up on this great fic, because it really needs a good ending... *hoping*

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: marauderm
Date: 12/03/13 8:52
Chapter: Prologue: Notes on a Life

Wow, I think I've read this story at least 3 times since my last review. And you still haven't posted a new chapter! *dying inside*

I am still checking once a day for a new update, so please please please hurry up haha. *begging*

AND don't tell me you've given up on this great fic, because it really needs a good ending... *hoping*

Author's Response: *blushes furiously* I am torn between hoping you are still checking once a day and hoping you haven't since it has been so very long. I'm so sorry. I do hope you enjoy the new one. Thank you so much for reviewing and encouraging me to continue. I promise to try to give you a good ending, but at this point, I just plan to give you an ending, period! I hope you aren't disappointed. Thank you again, marauderm.

Reviewer: GeekMcLeod
Date: 09/28/13 15:12
Chapter: A Cruel Joke Continued

You are such an evil person! I really hope that you haven't given up on writing this story. You have me so absorbed it's not even funny. I love all the characters, the twists and turns. Hell. I love everything about this story. I can not wait to read more, if there ever will be.

Author's Response: Oh, I used to get a kick out of doing the evil muwahahaha laugh when people called me evil, but now, I'm so ashamed at how long it has been that I just want to say, Forgive me!!!! I haven't given up, though by now, you probably have. :( I'm just very very slow....and like I told Liz, my computer is doing weird things and I don't even see reviews half the time, and the site doesn't like me and goes to white screen when I try to log on half the time... >.< I think it is a conspiracy to keep me from finishing MoB, but I will, daggonit!!! Hope you are still there waiting to read more, and I'm sorry to keep you waiting so long. Thank you for reviewing, GeekMcLeod!

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 06/27/13 21:05
Chapter: A Cruel Joke Continued

That was so funny! I was almost as on tenterhooks as Remus waiting for him to tell her. And there isn't another chapter up! I can't believe you are doing this to us!

Author's Response: I know, I am awful!! It has been months and months. I figure I will have finally torqued my readers off so much I won't have any left at all. :( I'm glad you got a kick out of it, though. Thank you, Buckbeak22!!!

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 06/27/13 20:49
Chapter: A Cruel Joke

Wow, Poor Remus! I am getting a little worried about Lindi though, I can't believe her friends didn't back Peter up, and stop her going to the party.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 06/27/13 20:21
Chapter: Too Late

Ohhh, the plot thickens. Love the way you have dropped in Barty Crouch! Off to read the next chapter...

Reviewer: Liz878
Date: 06/10/13 1:27
Chapter: A Cruel Joke Continued

Well, I'm one of the slightly crazy ones. Been reading for about five years I think. I always forget to review! But I love this story. :) Hopefully Lindi will remember the conversation when she wakes up the next morning!

Author's Response: I'm really sorry for taking so long to respond. Something very weird has been going on with my laptop and it doesn't refresh pages after I leave them and come back. I kept seeing the same review count for ages. >.< I discovered something was different when I logged on to upload the new chapter. Anyway, I hope you all will forgive me and thank you so much for reviewing. 5 Years!!! That's a while, isn't it. I'm so glad you've stuck with me. Hope you are still there now and that you enjoy the new chapter. :*)

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 06/09/13 17:18
Chapter: A Cruel Joke Continued

Ta Da - it worked, and happy anniversary (yesterday). He may be a teenager but he so should have waited and kept trying to wait when she pushed the issue. She's not going to remember squat about any of that. Silly boy.

Of course I am still here! You have no idea how incredibly difficult I am to get rid of. The only surefire way is write something of complete disinterest to me and/or do it really badly without ever improving. In other words, you personally are completely stuck with me. I may be in stealth mode but the lurking doesn't stop; I'm such an ff stalker. I occasionally annoy people because I send them reminder notes that I miss having the contents of their brain spilled onto paper for my perusal (you know what I mean, so I'm going to ignore my instinct to delete that sentence). I still have things on alert that haven't been updated in six years. I made myself go through my lists and delete all the wips that hadn't been touched in... I think two years... a while back but even then 1/3 of them stayed because I just couldn't do it. They're too wonderful. However, I don't review nearly as much as I used to, but that's a long story.

Point being, I will probably be around until there isn't anything to be around anymore regardless of visibility. Now that you've read my unnecessarily long version of that statement I can come down here and be all precise. o.-

I need to be careful what I say if people are going to actually pay that close attention! I was all impactful and didn't remember it. Reading your response, at first I was like, Wow self, harsh phrasing. But I think I remember you saying something about people hating you first so I was just mirroring your phraseology. That's my story and I'm sticking to it :-D. Few will hate you, but there will be sadness and pathetic sighing, I anticipate pouting and scowls, but with less harsh terminology I think I stick by my ancient sayings. I personally, at any rate, would rather have an ending that makes me scowl and grump then no ending at all. There is a lot to be said for an ending that makes sense even if I don't like it. It's not what I wanted but its right, you know? Not to mention, that it is your story so write the ending you like and everyone else can either deal with it or write their own story. So there you people! Whoever you may be, nonexistent or otherwise.

If mugglenet is being overly glitchy you could try AO3? It's supposed to be user friendly although I don't know from personal experience. You'll get new readers though - which is a problem if it fills you with incapacitating guilt, but good if it inspires you to dig out the time to write more and revives your muse. I hear reviews are the equivalent of muse CPR combined with massive doses of caffeine and sugar.
That seems like such a long response in this tiny review box. So that is all for now. Thank ye for your perseverance and I will read whatever you choose to share with me in this story. Unless I have a brain injury and lose the ability to read or some such unexpected interference.

~ Nox

Author's Response: <3 :)

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 06/07/13 1:25
Chapter: A Cruel Joke

I received six emails informing me of this chapter update. I think it was a sign saying "Review already you slacker!" So. This is me reviewing because the internet clearly loves you. The story is at that stage where everyone has a valid point and we're not sure who should prevail. We Want Remus to reveal his true reasoning to Lindi even though she should really smack him for it, but Sirius still has a point that she really has poor secret keeping skills. And her knowing won't change his decision to separate himself from her.

So, I suppose those who persevere will succeed - that is we the readers and you the author should we keep plowing along. Yours is the Only story I have marked on this site to be updated in the last two years. It's really sad because this is the first website I ever discovered fanfiction on - which is a disturbingly long time ago. So I appreciate that you continue to grind out fic when so many have given up with the seventh books release. Also, abandoning stories is a readers worst nightmare. It's worse than angst suddenly turning into a parody about Voldemort as a turnip gardener of Doom. Well... maybe not that bad... but is is vastly unpleasant.

Carry on - and we thank you. Have an internet cookie, flavoring of your choice. I suggest the most unhealthful possible since it is an internet cookie and completely free of carbs, fat, sugar, and calories.

Author's Response: OH. MY. GOSHHHH!!!! NoxSomnium!! It is so good to *see* you! I can not believe you are still here. I thought you had long since given up on MoB, me, or fanfiction in general. And here I thought the internet hated me. That's why you have received six emails. Because the site hates me and won't let me publish the chapter conclusion. >.< This is only the shorter first half of a rather long chapter which I had to divide. Arghh... And now, I can't get the other longer half to post. ARRRGGHH...I've been trying for 2 days. I just came on to try again, hoping that if I get it in early, maybe it will go through. And I find NoxSomnium!!!! Yay... If it prompted you to review again, I'm glad the site hates me. I've missed your cookies. ;) And I've been thinking about you the last few months. I agree about how sad it is that so many of the old timers have given up after the 7th book. MNFF is the first place for me too. And I don't know if you know it, but the reason I've been thinking about you is that you have been largely responsible for me plowing on with the story even though I thought you were long finished plowing along. I don't know if you remember a review you wrote many years ago, but I remember it vividly. "You will be hated more if you don't finish, than if you finish badly." O.O And so I can't abandon it, or my readers. I've long thought about putting a warning on it to stop new readers, thinking that eventually all the old readers will get sick of my dreadful posting habits. :*/ But there are a very few who have been with me so long, I question their sanity as much as my own! I'm looking at you, Buckbeak. And now Nox is here... Do you know that tomorrow is MoB's 8th Anniversary? What a happy anniversary present. I'll take a large white chocolate macadamia nut cookie, and I'd like that frosted with browned butter frosting, since it's fat free! :) Really good to *see* you. Now I'll go see if I can't get the second half to post. Wish me luck!

Reviewer: SeekingZenith
Date: 06/01/13 8:22
Chapter: 1st Year: The Adventure Begins

I am just stating this right now: I sobbed so hard five minutes ago. It was because I felt so happy. Honestly, this is the best Marauder era fanfic. It accurately tells Remus' story; which, I believe is best POV for the Mesrs. Excellent job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SeekingZenith! I'm so happy to know you are enjoying the story so much. I'm honored! I definitely agree that Remus is the Best POV, too! He should be the star!!! Well, he is, to me. ;) Hope you continue to enjoy. Next chapter will be up as soon as I can get the site to post it. Wish me luck! And hope you aren't disappointed. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Katie123212321
Date: 04/15/13 13:16
Chapter: Too Late

This chapter did not disappoint! By any means, it was wonderful as usual and I just re-read this whole thing for like the millionth bijiolianth(excuse my made up words....) time! Hahaha now I'm like bouncing up and down with anticipation for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Oh, hurray!! I'm glad to know it, Katie123212321. :D And that's a LOT of reading. ;) I like the made up word though. I think I might steal it, because I feel like I've written my millionth bijiolianth word in this mondo novel!!

Reviewer: Hypatia
Date: 04/09/13 5:21
Chapter: Too Late

I love it! Especially when Remus is trying to wake her up. I also couldn't help but smile when reading Dumbledore's interaction with Remus. :) Nice job introducing Dumbledore to the hallow too!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,

Author's Response: Yay! I always worry about writing Dumbledore. I think he's really tricky, so if it brought a smile, (hopefully in a good way, and I chose to believe it is) I consider that a success! :D Thank you so much for reviewing, Hypatia. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Potter_head_13
Date: 03/31/13 10:13
Chapter: A Bloody Mess of Things

Oh the suspense!!!! I hope the listing in the story if it not being done holds true this is turely an amazing story!!

Author's Response: Ha! The listing is correct. Not even really close to being done. >.< Well...getting closer, but after 8 years... *bangs head on desk* I'm so glad you are enjoying it. That makes me determined to press on! Another chapter should be up very soon. I hope you enjoy it. Thank you, Potter_head_13. :)

Reviewer: Potter_head_13
Date: 03/30/13 22:59
Chapter: Friends Like These (Part 1)

I am loving this fic so much!! It has to be one of my all time favorites from this site. You are such a talented writer!!!!!

Reviewer: Potter_head_13
Date: 03/30/13 22:59
Chapter: Friends Like These (Part 1)

I am loving this fic so much!! It has to be one of my all time favorites from this site. You are such a talented writer!!!!!

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much, Potter_head_13. I am so glad you are reading and have enjoyed the story. Thanks for letting me know!

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