c'est incroyable! puits fait
Haha...oh Hermione! What a sight to be seen eh?
Oh, my... I love to think what Hermione will do to Ron then :) Quite detailed and... hot!
Now that was good. A little smutty, perhaps ... but still good. I liked the implied Ron/Hermione parts the best. This was a different side of Hermione. Who would have thought that she would be so interested in this subject ...
very good story. i loved it!!!!!!!!!!
so much detail, i'm adding it to my story favorites.
Are you a Monkees fan? Auntie Griselda?
Oui, i agree. Ron does have a nice back....Naughty Hermione! Climbing up trees and spying on Lovely Bill and Fleur...i never really looked at the loving part of their relationship...But you made it Perfectly Clear!!! Grand Story.
LOVED IT! That was HOT! I really liked how you used Hermione as the one to observe because it really showed her character as more than just a "good" character. the way you portrayed her as well really made her seem human and didn't view as what fleur and Bill were doing as "wrong" Very good taste as well portraying the whole thing!
Ooooh la la. I think they were right to put the 'imagery not suitable for those under 17' thing! Not to say I didnt enjoy the story, tho................ Hermione loves Ron, obviously- her thoughts! I never expected her to do something like that!
Wow. That was ...very hot.
Yet, it wasn't childish or smutty. It was vair vair good.
And you seemed to have steamed up my computer screen. ;-)
a correction of an earlier reviewer: It's "Je t'adore" that means she loves him, not je t'amore. i've been in french immersion for 8 years, and couldn't help but point that out. great story!
it was different :) Very quirky and individual. Liked it a lot.
I thought it was really good. I liked it very much! I like Hermione's role in the story. One thing, Je t'aime means i like you, Je t'amore means i love you. sorry, i'm in third year french and i just though you should know. Anyhoo, i really like it. ;) 10
loved it, it was cool, hermione as a peeping tom funny and intriguing