i loved this story!! i like the twists in it im gonna recommend it to my bro. i give this the highest rating i can!!
Ha!! That was awesome!! I want the next chapter soon! 10/10!!!
I have to say I found that very interesting. Poor Harry seemed mroe stunned than the other two. I really did find that funny, especially the whole soap opera theme to it or Trisha/Springer theme - "I'm pregnant with my half brothers kid". Bloody Brilliant!
Whoa...its interesting. My favorite lines are:"We were really worried, "Harry said. "And no one would tell us anything. You know how much that pisses me off."(i couldn't stop laughing...is there something wrong with me?) Another line is:"Any excessive amount of stress or activity could cause the tumor to swell and her head could explode." Lol thats just grand isnt it. Well all in all it was alright...I'll be waiting for the next chapter...
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you got that joke it was a bit subtle:)
Hi I really liked your story!!!!! I can not wait for the 2nd chapter,is there one?Ihave you on my favorites list if there is.If there is a chapter 2 get it typed up soon,pleeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Author's Response: I'm working on it dear, let's not freak out! lol
That was very...erm...interesting. Can't wait to see how the rest of the story comes out. There is more isn' t there. Putting it in my favorites. Keep up the good work and update! Lol. I like your style of writing, it is alot like mine in my stories with weird plot twists and narration. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback and yes there's more!