Reviews For Blind Intuition
Reviewer: moonymaniac
Date: 06/27/05 20:40
Chapter: The Great Escape

You said you would like some hints for your story so, lets see...there was a typo (minuet instead of minute). That's the only hint I feel qualified to give. You are doing a great job. Your writing has a lovely flowing quality; almost poetic. Also, I like the fact that you create mystery by giving a few details but not revealing too much at once. It makes me look forward to what comes next.

Author's Response: ditto...again *smiles*

Reviewer: moonymaniac
Date: 06/27/05 20:39
Chapter: The Great Escape

You said you would like some hints for your story so, lets see...there was a typo (minuet instead of minute). That's the only hint I feel qualified to give. You are doing a great job. Your writing has a lovely flowing quality; almost poetic. Also, I like the fact that you create mystery by giving a few details but not revealing too much at once. It makes me look forward to what comes next.

Author's Response: Heya Moony! thanks for dropping by! Ha-I always have tons of typos and grammar issues (I had to ask four people to help edit my grammar and spelling for chapter three! no lie!) but other than that i do take alot of my inspiration from great literary works. It is so nice to have someone notice! drop in again some time-it is nice to hear from people who are in my favorites! Ta! and thanks again!

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/27/05 10:13
Chapter: The Great Escape

Wow, this was a kick a** chapter! It was really well written and just *Wow*, it was excellent and you write the characters so well and interestingly! Your story has gotten my hooked...I'm really glad I found this story! Well done, 10/10

Author's Response: ditto

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/27/05 10:13
Chapter: The Great Escape

Wow, this was a kick a** chapter! It was really well written and just *Wow*, it was excellent and you write the characters so well and interestingly! Your story has gotten my hooked...I'm really glad I found this story! Well done, 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you, you will make me blush! if you like my story why dont you check my favorites for some other really swell written works! Thanks again and espicially thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Miseryluvsu
Date: 06/27/05 0:46
Chapter: The Great Escape

this is a great story keep updating :-)

Author's Response: Thank you, chapter three is submitted so it should be updated by wednesday, if not then the moderators are undobutable busy! I have been recieving e-mails asking (bluntly) "when is the story going to get happier?" so here is the response: chapter four. Promise! thanks again!

Reviewer: Sophia Loren
Date: 06/26/05 16:01
Chapter: The Great Escape

Wow! I thought it was so great! I'm really anxious to find out what happens next, and I bet you're having a lot of fun writing it! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I have almost ten reviews now and It is rather exciting! Admittedly, I am having a lot of fun writing this, and am having alot of help from Huskers (espicially since he is such an awesome grammar and spelling freak) and i truely wouldnt have gotten this far without help from him and all my friends. The third chapter should be up soon and the fourth should be alot more fun-and interesting! Thanks again and Ta!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/26/05 12:09
Chapter: The Great Escape

Wow! I am so curious as to what's going on with Serra's eyes! But you did say that you'll explain it in the next chapter, so please update soon!!! I'll add you to my faves and be watching for it!

Author's Response: Wow! thank you for adding me to your favs! If i could blush any redder my shirt would catch on fire! You are amazing for giving me two whole reviews, as a starting writer i dont like to push people for them so its nice when i do actually get some. Thanks again!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/26/05 11:58
Chapter: Catch and Release

STUPID $*@!%#& LOG IN GLITCH!!!! Sorry, that had to be said. Okay, first off, that you for getting me up to 50 reviews on Baby! Because you sent such a nice email, I'd like to mention your story in one of my author's notes, if you don't mind. Maybe it will get you some more reviews! I hate to see a story like yours go unnoticed. You have a brilliantly written first chapter and I just have to say.....POOR SERRA!! I'm SO glad she was able to get away from her abusive adoptive father, what an %$#hole! Now I'm off to read your second chapter, I'm sure it's great!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! It is always an honor to have someone who is a great writer review my work! I would also be honored and quite thankful for you to mention my story! Chapter three is still being edited and then things get happier in chapter four-Promise. Huskers has been helping me edit-along with my friends! So credits to him! thanks again!

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 06/21/05 12:40
Chapter: The Great Escape

Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks, dont worry, things will pick up. And thanks again for your help.

Reviewer: moonymaniac
Date: 06/19/05 15:37
Chapter: Catch and Release

Nice first chapter. It does what a first chapter should do; creates interest in what comes next. Very well done and so very sad. I look forward to what comes next. Hopefully, Serra will find some happiness...soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review-And im honored! I really love your story too! Portraying Remus like that must have been quite the original idea, Unique! I made a little mess up so Serra's eyes are not fully explained untill the third chapter (hopefully) but the second chapter has happiness...or some. Story gets moving around the third! thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: HP11
Date: 06/09/05 22:53
Chapter: Catch and Release

This is one of the first stories I have read here because I am new but this was aan awesome story!I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you, your words are kind! If you are new and looking for more stories to explore, try some of Husker's (Steve) stories. He is quite brilliant! And please do keep checking in. My awesome moderator is doing the best that a moderator can to get the next chapters in on time. Thank you for the rate and review again! XOXO!

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 06/09/05 20:29
Chapter: Catch and Release

so the bit at the begining was like a flash-back?right?but it was a dream? just making sure. anyway, it is a cool idea. but blind?huh?

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, the second chapter will explain how she is blind...It is one of my rare brilliant ideas. Yes it is a dream flash-back. Thank you for the rating, here is a kiss for taking the time to drop in!-X

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 06/08/05 12:21
Chapter: Catch and Release

Ok, To start with, this sounds like it is going to be difficult to read because of the violence. I can however seperate out the fact that this is pretty good writing. I am curious as to how her adoptive parents know about the magical world as they obviously hate it and are muggles. I guess, I don't have much more to say right now. I am intrigued, and will be back to check out more as you post your chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I appreciate it deeply. I will try to ease up on the violence for awhile but i assure you that all of your questions will be answered in due time. I hope to update every week at least. I do hope that my writing starts to improve. XOXOXO for the review!

Reviewer: Polaris Dakota
Date: 06/06/05 13:25
Chapter: Catch and Release

Reviews welcome, dont be shy! I love that I seem to have alot of readers already, So dont feel pressured to review. The story is already mapped out but i would LOVE to hear opinions, criticisms and most espicially ideas. I have many but you can never have enough. XOXOXOXO

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