Reviews For Blind Intuition
Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 03/20/08 1:47
Chapter: Catch and Release

How are you doing honey? I would like to make the pointless request of you not relapsing back into more of what you've had, or something else for that matter.

Author's Response: Im not dead Nox! I just haven't really been well enough to finish the story. I am sorry to say that I will be on an indefinate hiatus, but feel free to e-mail me at : xxeclipseangelxx@yahoo.com for anything. I appreciate your comments!

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/16/07 21:57
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

Now now, we haven't abandoned you. I just personally decided that I had gotten my point across (heh heh) and should let you recover in peace. I'm perfectly capable of being an obnoxious nag again if you'd like. I'm glad you're doing better.

Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 12/27/06 12:09
Chapter: The Great Escape

This is really good writing! I just have one question, you always spell "minutes"
"minuets". Is this a coincidence or computer problem, or what?

Author's Response: Im still aliveeeee! Unfortunately (not only is my "L" key being evil) but I am lacking the time to work on my story. (getting better, working and school) ...and I am a terrible speller...so I always spell minutes strangely... Thank you for taking the time to comment

Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin
Date: 09/10/06 8:50
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

If you're already out of treatment, congrats!!!! *is happy for you* But that means I'm expecting an update! *sounds like McGonagall* hahaha...

If you're out of treatment, you may want to take that little note saying that you can't update for a while out of the summary. It confused me when I read that, then saw you had responded to reviews...

When will Serra meet other people? I can't wait until school starts! Hogwarts, that is. ;-)

Again, keep it up!

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

Author's Response: I was responding to reviews because I couldn't leave the people I care about hanging, wondering if I was getting better or not...but yes I will update as soon as I am able. Thank you for your reviews Twizzle, I enjoy your criticism. ^_^

Author's Response: I was responding to reviews because I couldn't leave the people I care about hanging, wondering if I was getting better or not...but yes I will update as soon as I am able. Thank you for your reviews Twizzle, I enjoy your criticism. ^_^

Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin
Date: 09/10/06 8:41
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

This is... so sad. You write beautifully! I feel so bad for Serra, and she doesn't even exist! Well, she does in my mind, anyway... but still!! What happened to Tempest was so sad...

This is a beautiful story...I-I don't know what to say! Are you sure you're not a professional writer in disguise? Because you sure write like one! There are a few little mistakes, like punctuation and stuff, but nothing major. It's all good!

This chapter is a little confusing at the start, though. No one really knows what you're talking about, so it's a little hard to understand how it fits into the story. But I'm glad you added the flashback about Tempest. That cleared things up for me really fast.

When is your treatment going to be over? I know it's a little selfish, but I can't wait for an update! I wish you good luck with your treatment, few visible scars, and no emotional ones. :-)

Keep up the writing, and heal fast!

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

Author's Response: My my, I had no idea I was still getting reviews! I thought that my fans had long since abandoned me! Give me time, I beg you, I am still working on myself before working on my writing.

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/28/05 22:18
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you. I love it when I win. :D I'm sure Moonymaniac is happy too, or will be. It's for the sake of ART. And, well, me. Yay! I should go yell at all those people who reviewed the first chapter and said they'd come back shouldn't I? But I'm happy, if you hadn't noticed.

Author's Response: Wow I feel really really bad now telling you this...I wont be able to update till after new years, and even then Im not sure it will go through those mods. Soooo I will give you some info to tide you over... Tempest is dead, so don't get any ideas that he will somehow come back, and he is not a ghost nor is he going to be one...but he will act as a guardian angel. It will surprise you just how awesome it can be to have an angel watching your back. And I can't believe I just gave that away! But I must appease the fans. ^_^

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 12/07/05 20:05
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

But if you don't update hardly ever then people will think it's dead and not check it anymore. If they think it's still alive they'll check it periodically. Besides I want to read MOREEEEEE. Be nice to me! Please? *puppy dog eyes*

Author's Response: AWw...fine. But only because you are so sweet and nice and kind. I will try to get an update by the new year. Thanks so much for the reviews!

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 11/28/05 21:50
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

You answer questions but add more as you do. Prank gone awry? HURRY. I hate waiting for updates. I really like your writing style. Poor Serra.

Author's Response: If you want me to update I wont till I have enough reviews or reads. Im up to 1600! YAY! but I was hoping for at least 100 more or 5 more reviews. 4 is a happier chapter...errr...not entirely. Want some of it revealed? Well.....check the reviews. The next reviews I get will have some clues.

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 11/28/05 21:34
Chapter: The Great Escape

I love your description of Madam Pomfrey.

Author's Response: My aunt is alot like her, so it is rather easy. That and I think she is a tough old bird. Wait till you discover how I portray Snape. By the way, read Through Time and Space, thats where I get my Snape (all credits due...) and my story line follows that of Huskers. Read his story, ITS AWESOME! he has finished and I think you will enjoy it.

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 11/28/05 21:17
Chapter: Catch and Release

Intriguing. Very. I feel ... the... suction... I'm being.... drawn in....*squelch*

Author's Response: Yes! My ev-errrr I mean my awesome plan is working to bring my readers in! DRAW THEM IN UNTILL THEY ARE SO HOOKED THEY CANT-err...anyhow, thanks for the review! ^_^

Reviewer: moonymaniac
Date: 10/14/05 10:33
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

Welcome back, Polaris. And quite a comeback it is. You do drama very well in addition to creating suspense; I’m so curious about that little silky-haired blighter! I also commend you on your creativity: those eyes of Serra’s. Wow! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you moony, you really are the best...but you will find that I will give away nothing...yet. :)

Reviewer: moonymaniac
Date: 10/14/05 10:32
Chapter: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

Welcome back, Polaris. And quite a comeback it is. You do drama very well in addition to creating suspense; I’m so curious about that little silky-haired blighter! I also commend you on your creativity: those eyes of Serra’s. Wow! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: ditto

Reviewer: Bexly48
Date: 09/11/05 11:58
Chapter: The Great Escape

UPDATE!!! ITS TIME FOR AN UPDATE!!! YOUR STORY IS AWESOME, PLEASE KEEP IT GOING!! PLEASE UPDATE Thank you.

Author's Response: Im trying! but my grammar and spelling is just too poor. the moderators wont approve my work, even with the help of a beta.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 07/15/05 8:51
Chapter: The Great Escape

I loved the two sisters, and I am glad she seems to be safe enough right now. Love the story so far.

Author's Response: Hey! i remember you from Moony's story! You give great reviews, and thanks! Tell your friends!

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 07/10/05 9:25
Chapter: The Great Escape

I loved this chapter too, very excited to find out what this whole white pupils thing is all about, and why it changed her life for the better...... the sisters are very nice, i wonder what happened to them, anywyas update soon =)

Author's Response: Thanks again for taking the time to review! Third chapter explains the eyes. Feel free to ask questions! Ta till then!

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 07/10/05 9:12
Chapter: Catch and Release

Good start, it was very violent and i wonder why anoyone would who was this hateful would want to adopt a kid, Poor Serra!! anyways i'll move on to chapter 2 now =)

Author's Response: I have been recieving lots of e-mails simular to your review soooo i think i shall just answer that question now (if you would kindly excuse my poor grammar and spelling): The adoptive parents of Serranes thought that Serra was a squib, like they were. Serra's adoptive parents wanted to help a child like themselves because they hated wizards. Her adoptive parents grew up in a world that they could not be part of and they were CONSTANTLY reminded of the fact that they would and could never do what their parrents and friends could do. Serra's parents felt that they had been tricked when they found out that Serra was a witch, so they took out their years and years of frustration on her. You say "poor Serra!!" I say, poor them. I take pity upon her parents because they will never know the beautiful intellegence that is Serranes. They will never know her smile, loyalty, strength or her will to endure. They are doomed to their ignorance. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: snapefan1
Date: 07/08/05 18:28
Chapter: The Great Escape

This is a truly unique chapter, I loved it! I couldn't help but be reminded by sleeping beauty, because those two ladies reminded me of the fairies... Sorry, too much disney. Great job

Author's Response: Okay, I think it is time to reveal something about Eloisa and Elena; They are more than just witches. You all will find out more about them later but i thought i would just lay that small and somewhat elusive fact on the table. You are all (espicially you snapefan1) free to guess what else they may be, and i will hint it in other chapters and when they come up again in future chapters but till then....Thanks for reviewing! XOXOXOX

Reviewer: snapefan1
Date: 07/08/05 18:18
Chapter: Catch and Release

I really really really really like it. I think that it is a wee bit violent, but not violent for violent's sake. I was a little worried because of the 'R' rating. Thankfully, no sexually explicit scenes. Those are the worst... Well, I am going to read your second chapter, see you then! *10*

Author's Response: I really really really really really REALLY appreciate you taking time to review! XOXOX! There will be hardly any sezual content in this story (no sex scenes) but yes there will be much violence in later chapters. Sorry if this is bad for you...but im not a pervert like that. (or elaborate, whatever your case may be.) So if no sex scenes is not your particular brand of vodka then you need not read on. (This is not to snapefan1, this is to those of you reading this review). Thanks for the time reading and reviewing! I hope i live up to your expectations!

Reviewer: Over40Potterfan
Date: 07/07/05 16:58
Chapter: The Great Escape

The thing I liked the most about your story was the flow. It was so easy to read, and captivating. Can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you so much~! I love how my work tends to flow, most likely because i am enamored (enamoured?) with poetry. This response would be more serious if i could spell properly...Anyways! Thank you for your time!

Reviewer: Miss
Date: 07/05/05 7:53
Chapter: The Great Escape

I'm still curious about where this story will be going, but for some reason or other I am not able to stay away from it. I guess that's a compliment then, keep it up and I will read whatever you put up.

Author's Response: I would tell you the direction it is going but unfortunately I cant! It would take away from the surprizes and such, and i am all for keeping people in suspense. Thanks for reviewing! The third chapter is being re-edited because the mods rejected it for poor grammar (thank god for Huskers...) check out my favs!

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