Reviews For Many Times After
Reviewer: Gseeker7
Date: 01/06/08 0:29
Chapter: The One and Only

thats so sad :( i amost cried.

good job

Reviewer: RitaSkeeterWannaB
Date: 11/15/07 21:54
Chapter: The One and Only

*tear*

Reviewer: random fan
Date: 07/15/07 15:17
Chapter: The One and Only

As you have said, once the prophecy has been fulfilled, it no longer affects harry and o he would be vulnerable. However, the prophecy is misleading. As in book six, dumbledore said that he sets too much store by the prophecy. The prophecy doesn't mean nobody can kill harry, it just means that if anybody can kill voldemort, its harry.

Reviewer: horseqt1988
Date: 04/20/07 17:56
Chapter: The One and Only

this one does not make me happy...

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 03/03/07 13:36
Chapter: The One and Only

This was extraordinarily touching and brought me to tears. Absolutely amazing. You most certainly have a way with words.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 01/25/07 14:58
Chapter: The One and Only

THis was fantastic. Great job!

Reviewer: xo eleyteriaGR o
Date: 07/11/06 19:49
Chapter: The One and Only

omg!!!!!!!! im crying!!!!!! awwwwwwww

Reviewer: moneyj75
Date: 05/05/06 1:48
Chapter: The One and Only

I really wish you good writers would write a happy ending for Harry and Ginny...LOL. Good story, now go write a happy one so I can cry tears of happiness.

Reviewer: Jules_411
Date: 03/17/06 7:54
Chapter: The One and Only

I think you did a nice job. You captured some of the intensity of the battle and you were very descriptive. Here are just a few things that stuck out to me: [i] Voldemort bowed, shocked, recognizing for the first time ever that Harry was now his equal, or possibly even his superior. [/i] I think it is a bit unlikely that Voldemort would think of Harry as his equal. Maybe he could have bowed with an amused look on his face, like he was just mocking Harry. [i]Cho Chang lay next to a fallen Death Eater; as did Michael Corner, Seamus Finnegan, Dean Thomas, and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of was lying behind Neville, she had obviously died protecting Neville. Brave Neville, thankfully stood amongst them all, wand pointed at the now limp body of Bellatrix Lestrange. [/i] This sentence was a bit of a run-on and maybe instead of using the name 'Neville' you could add a pronoun. Here is what I mean. [i]and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of[b],[/B] was lying behind Neville[b].[/b] she had obviously died protecting [b]him[/b][/i] Okay, I am hoping these codes will work and I don't look like a really stupid person who puts random codes in the middle of the sentence. So, what I did was I added a comma after the phrase 'made fun of', I placed a period after 'lying behind Neville', and I added a 'him' and took out 'Neville' during the last part. [i] Ginny stared into the fire, unable to breathe, wondered if she would ever breathe again. Her chest was constricted with pain, her breathing harsh, when she felt it. She felt like she was being wrapped in the tightest hug of her life. [/i] I really liked this description. It captured Ginny's emotions very well. I hope this sort of helped, and all in all, I really liked your fic! Nice job and I look forward to reading some of your other works.

Reviewer: aMeRiCaNcHik
Date: 05/19/05 18:25
Chapter: The One and Only

that was a wonderful story! it was horribly sad, i was crying. but to me, that's what a great story is!

Reviewer: loonypadfoot
Date: 01/29/05 12:45
Chapter: The One and Only

no, once the prophesy is complete i think that he would be invincibke - the only one that could kill him would be dead - people could shoot as many killing curses or watever at him and he would live - it was well-written, but i dont think it was all that acurate!!

Reviewer: loonypadfoot
Date: 01/29/05 12:45
Chapter: The One and Only

no, once the prophesy is complete i think that he would be invincibke - the only one that could kill him would be dead - people could shoot as many killing curses or watever at him and he would live - it was well-written, but i dont think it was all that acurate!!

Reviewer: gossipweaver
Date: 01/27/05 14:50
Chapter: The One and Only

I really love your writing style. Brilliant story.

Reviewer: Catana Snape
Date: 01/13/05 17:52
Chapter: The One and Only

It is quite ironic, is it not? In the moment of victory the hero dies at the hands of the right-hand man of the villen. so sad, yet so true. This was truely a beutiful story.

Reviewer: Melly
Date: 11/29/04 19:27
Chapter: The One and Only

you had me in tears by the end. the idea of harry dieing in the end espeically by lucious is unthinkable.. good story.

Reviewer: Melly
Date: 11/29/04 19:27
Chapter: The One and Only

you had me in tears by the end. the idea of harry dieing in the end espeically by lucious is unthinkable.. good story.

Reviewer: Wispy Veil
Date: 11/16/04 21:21
Chapter: The One and Only

Well, you almost had me in tears at the end, so I'd say it was pretty effective! Good job!

Reviewer: icemaiden47
Date: 11/08/04 16:45
Chapter: The One and Only

beautiful. really loved. a genuine story.

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