Reviewer: Jessica6119
Date: 03/09/07 18:14
Chapter: The Room with the Locked Door

I loved Ginny in this chapter, and not to be rude, but where the hell did you get Snape's story? Thats just gross

Author's Response: Ginny was the character I had the most fun with. I think because she is the one least developed by JKR. As to Snape's story, I made it up. Really, it was tamed down quite a bit from the first draft.

Reviewer: Jessica6119
Date: 03/08/07 19:37
Chapter: The Healer

OMG, this one of your most emotion chapter, it's so perfect, I love it, keep writing
Jessica(who gave blood today)

Author's Response: Yes, this chapter got lots of comments to this effect. Thanks for yours.

Reviewer: Jessica6119
Date: 03/07/07 19:32
Chapter: The General Begins to Plan

Aaaaaaaw warm and fuzzy chapter, just what i needed

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: hogwartsprincess
Date: 02/16/07 21:59
Chapter: The Healer

Hermione has so much strength in this chapter, but poor Harry, his birthday being ruined by the attacks.

Author's Response: It was really a bad day to be Harry Potter. And yes, Hermione was really a hero. I thought it was time for someone besides Harry to save the day. Ron's day is coming. He is the general after all. Today, it was Ginny and Hermione. Ginny brought them back, and Hermione saves them. It works to teach Harry that others are capable too.

Reviewer: hogwartsprincess
Date: 02/16/07 19:55
Chapter: At What Price

I like how you describe how to fight the crutiatus curse. I also enjoy reading about all four of them getting so strong especially with Occlumency and Legillamency.

Author's Response: Than you. I'm glad you understood how I thought t could be fought.

Reviewer: hogwartsprincess
Date: 02/16/07 19:29
Chapter: The General Begins to Plan

Ginny really is brutal, even when everyone is just playing, poor Harry!

Author's Response: Yes, in the end, I think I may have overdone her a bit.

Reviewer: hogwartsprincess
Date: 02/16/07 16:38
Chapter: Weddings

I loved the weddings, the vows were reaaly good.

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: neomatrixj2
Date: 02/03/07 7:38
Chapter: Epilogue

Excellect story, took me nearly a day to read it all.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: William B
Date: 01/27/07 1:30
Chapter: Epilogue

I was curious if you are going to wright something new.

Loved the storys by the way.

Author's Response: No, I am not planning on writing any more HP fan fics. Will that change? My crystal ball is as fogged as Trelawney's. In other words, I can't tell what the future might bring.

Reviewer: fasterfreddie
Date: 01/20/07 16:40
Chapter: Epilogue

you did a grreat job with both storys thanks for the good read... I have an idea for you for a third fic,you do a fantastic job of showing the golden four in thier day to day lives that since in this story it was said that they were going to surpase the founding four that hermoine would come up with the idea of wizard college and they would build it together...anyway great read

Author's Response: That's an interesting idea for a fic. You should write it. It's your idea after all.

Reviewer: fasterfreddie
Date: 01/20/07 2:33
Chapter: Ambush

you did a really good job on the story before this one,you really did a good job of showing them as just day to day friends,I thought at first it was takin to long for ginny to come into harry,s heart but it actuallity was growin the whole time if you paid attention.though harry never does till it hits him in the head any way that was a great story

Author's Response: Thank you. And you're right. If you paid attention, you could see Harry and Ginny coming a mile away.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/11/07 21:54
Chapter: Ambush

i know i've already mentioned this in another review but i can't stop saying how much i love stories that are complete. thanks for making mugglenet fanfics so much more readable.

Author's Response: you're welcome

Reviewer: katgirl
Date: 01/03/07 1:12
Chapter: Epilogue

great story

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/24/06 2:21
Chapter: Epilogue

That's a lot of kids. Yeah, I'm blunt with a one track mind. Deal with it.
That was good, but the very end was a bit sad.
In general, good story.

Author's Response: Yep, lots of kids. And it's always sad to have a good story end.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/24/06 2:04
Chapter: Recovery?

Huh? Where are they?
So, what happens to Snape and Draco now???

Author's Response: Who knows what happens to Snape and Draco? Actually you find out about Snape in the next Chapter. As for Draco, I think he goes on to be an Auror.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/24/06 1:34
Chapter: Checkmate Part Two

OMG, Harry is okay, right? He better be or else!
I don't know what I'll do, but I'll figure it out!
What was Ron hit with? He better be okay too!
How many people died, both sides??
Is it finally over...?

Author's Response: Aren't you glad the next chapter is already posted?

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/24/06 1:06
Chapter: Checkmate Part One

That is a lot to chew on.
Poor Peter *throws party* Ooops...
Ew, now Voldemort has Scabber's Syndrome!
Harry better win. Where is Ginny, physically? So Snape is good, Malfoy too? So many questions!

Author's Response: What is Scabber's Syndrome?

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/24/06 0:37
Chapter: Stalemate

So where DO Snape and Draco's loyalties lie!?!?
When are they going to take Ginny out of there?
Are R+Hr going to be okay? How's Harry doing?
WHAT IS GOING ON? For every question answered, I get more questions! Like a real JKR!

Author's Response: Like real JKR, that is a great compliment.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/24/06 0:12
Chapter: Whose Trap Is It?

Snape, the evil, foul, rotten, git, *&^%$#@! jerk!
Sorry, I'm REALLY mad at him.
I hope I figure out what is going on.
(Yes, this means I am REALLY confused! Help!)

Author's Response: Patience.

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/23/06 23:41
Chapter: Setting the Board

That's quite a lot to think on, isn't it?
Will we ever be told the plan? Where are the tomes now? Who were the dead Keepers??

Author's Response: Lot to think on, The tomes? Don't know at this point. And the dead Keepers, not really important.

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