Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/25/07 19:46
Chapter: The General Begins to Plan

i very much liked this chapter in fact i unknowlingly used a part of it for inspiration for one of my own stories....but it gets bad now doesn't it? damn.... : )

Author's Response: Well, things don't improve much, and a lot of bad stuff happens, but then that is the nature of the story.

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/24/07 23:12
Chapter: Weddings

1-“Argh, I’m going to kill Bridgette. She was the one pouring that stuff down our throats last night,” Ron groaned." cho also had a part in it but we'll just pretend that they were too drunk to remember...

2-"Her hair spilled around her shoulders in soft ringlet curls, with sprigs of babies breath adding color to her appearance." isn't babies breath white and therefore colorless?

3- I'm pretty sure i said this the first time i read this but the vows were....bad...i was laughing the whole way through them they were fake and them ginny and harry did like a little skit in theres..they were just really, really bad. I really enjoyed the bachlor/ette party though! Fred and George rock! : )

Author's Response: If I'm not mistaken, and it has been over a year since I read any of this, Bridgette was the only one to acutally pour any of it down their throats.

With brown hair, white would add color. For your information 'White' is a color

So you didn't like the vows, plenty of others did. Glad you enjoyed the bachlor/ette party.

Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258
Date: 05/24/07 20:49
Chapter: Ambush

"“Let’s here it for vertasium,” George yelled as the cat calls in the room reverberated in Harry’s ears."
Weren't they taking the antidote every month so snape couldn't give them vertasium?

Author's Response: Yes, but Snape figured out it was them in the Chapter where Harry teaches the Phoenix Charm to the Minister and everyone else. So they stopped taking it.

Reviewer: Hazil
Date: 05/19/07 19:15
Chapter: The Healer

you need a better beta

Author's Response: If you say so.

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 05/17/07 17:51
Chapter: Epilogue

absolutley brilliant story asa whole i no the odds of u readinthis are slim but if u do this was gr8!!

Author's Response: Actually the odds of me reading a review are very high. I might not check in every day like I used to, but I still check in on a regular basis. Thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought.

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 05/15/07 14:00
Chapter: Pawn to E4

this is a rather inter esting chapter really but imust say tht it is also a very gud one

Author's Response: thanks.

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 05/14/07 16:29
Chapter: Happy Birthday

R.I.P Bridget Weasley 1981-1997
ill miss here

Author's Response: I know a lot of people didn't like her much, but as she was one of only 2-3 characters that I created, I really had a tough time killing her. I knew she was going to die from the first second she appeared, but it wasn't easy to actually write it.

Reviewer: hpgreatestfan
Date: 05/10/07 3:55
Chapter: Epilogue

Gr8 stories...both of them....but what did harry show ginny at the end of the second to last chapter in unlocked mind?

Author's Response: Thanks. It goes all the way back to when Ginny asks to borrow money from Harry at his vault in Blood Traitor. He is keeping his promise to take her to an amusement park. And he shows he a roller coaster

Reviewer: andy
Date: 05/08/07 22:17
Chapter: Bluff Discovered

u got it wrong see, the reason people don't review is caus' they'd rather read the next chapter and so would i. Bye

Author's Response: Unfortunate, but true.

Reviewer: andy
Date: 05/08/07 22:17
Chapter: Bluff Discovered

u got it wrong see, the reason people don't review is caus' they'd rather read the next chapter and so would i. Bye

Author's Response: Unfortunate, but true.

Reviewer: andy
Date: 05/08/07 22:17
Chapter: Bluff Discovered

u got it wrong see, the reason people don't review is caus' they'd rather read the next chapter and so would i. Bye

Author's Response: Unfortunate, but true.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 04/23/07 17:55
Chapter: Epilogue

I repeat, you could rival J.K. I would love to read more of your work. As I have apparantly read everything you have on mugglenet right now, would you please either write something else, or let us know if you have stories on other sites?
I was pleased when you mentioned in your A/N about remembering those who have died for us. I am from a military family and I married into a miltary family. You are right, war is hell and there are far too many good people that fight and die for people that could care less. Thank you for acknowledging their sacrifices.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. I wish I could direct you to more of my writing, but this is all I have to this point. I have a new HP story that is about a 1/4 done, but won't post it till I finish it. I make no promises about when that might be. As to my writing of my own creation, I am on chapter 15 of a book that will be 1 of 3 and that I hope to publish some day. Thanks again, and feel free to e-mail me for up dates if you like. Just go to the author page and hit the contact button. Steve

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 04/23/07 11:48
Chapter: Whose Trap Is It?

OH MY GOD!!!! Normally I would wait until the last chapter to review, but this has to be the best scenario I have ever read. And trust me I read about sixteen hours a day. You have unlimited potential to write anything you can imagine and probably rival J.K. in imagination. As the seventh book isn't out yet, I can't say yet that you have supassed her. We will have to wait and see. I will leave my final review at the end of your story.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for your enthusiasim. I am trying to wroite my own stuff, but have stalled for a bit recently. I will finish it some day. Hopefully it will be half as big as HP was for JKR. I'm glad you like the set up. Seems like everything I read has Voldy holding all the cards at the end, and it is prettty much luck that Harry wins. I wanted to do something different.

Reviewer: BetaThenNormal
Date: 04/23/07 3:52
Chapter: Checkmate Part Two

thats like the fourth time i have read this ending and it sends chills down my spine everytime and i can say with all honesty that this is the best harry potter storey after the original ones i applaud you *clap clap clap*

Author's Response: You may offically have read it through more times than me. That is so cool that you've read it 4 times. Thanks a lot for your support.

Reviewer: GrayGreenEyes
Date: 04/16/07 1:00
Chapter: Epilogue


Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: 1_3_5_midget_7_9
Date: 04/15/07 12:28
Chapter: Ambush

This is the funniest chapter so far in both book.

Author's Response: Leave it to the twins for funny.

Reviewer: jakgarden
Date: 04/04/07 15:58
Chapter: Ambush

very good start to what looks like a very interesting story.

Author's Response: Hope the rest it measures up for you.

Reviewer: Zlaker1001
Date: 03/21/07 21:01
Chapter: Epilogue

Very good story...Both of them....4 days to read them both ontop of everything elses!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed them

Reviewer: demrok
Date: 03/13/07 13:17
Chapter: Epilogue

Great Story i liked it alot,srry i didnt review before while reading but i like to review at the end

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Alluring_Twilight
Date: 03/13/07 5:42
Chapter: Epilogue

Brilliant story. I'd say it's one of the best I've read.. I especially loved how you ended it with Molly. I know that I will be reading both again. You are truly a great writer.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Repeat readers, they are the ones that tell you, you did a decent job.

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