Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 23:19
Chapter: It Begins

Your take on legilimency and occlumency is wonderfully detailed.

Author's Response: Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Rocky235
Date: 08/10/06 22:33
Chapter: Ambush

I think Fred and George were taking a big chance binding the crew.

The party scene was sweet.

Author's Response: Yeah, they were. But, it all worked out in the end.

Reviewer: DarkForceElite
Date: 08/10/06 17:06
Chapter: Epilogue

Hey Huskers, I don't know if you're still around on these fanfics, but once again, Great Story! I read Blood Traitor and Unlocked Mind a while ago, and curiosity spurred me to read it again. The emotions were as real as the first time I read it, and I wish that your story was the canon version of Harry Potter. Kudos x 100, Thanks for a great heartfelt and emotional story,

Author's Response: I check in every once in a while. Thanks for your kind words.

Reviewer: balla
Date: 08/02/06 17:52
Chapter: Epilogue

awsome story. you're a great writer.I can't wait to read your next story.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: balla
Date: 07/25/06 22:29
Chapter: The General Begins to Plan

Awsome story. Hope you write many more. You're an awsome writer.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Blackeminence
Date: 07/25/06 5:00
Chapter: Epilogue

I don't think I can say much more than i simply love this story. it has made me cry, laugh, be angry and happy. I have come back to read it more than once, and it is always as enjoyable as the first time.
My greatest compliments.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: kookachoo
Date: 07/21/06 11:01
Chapter: Ambush

umm sort of funny but i dunno just them doing stuff to make the couples openly lust was sort of discomfitting?discomforting? lol w/e.

Author's Response: Well, stag parties are not usually the most humble of times for the guest of honor.

Reviewer: moine
Date: 07/09/06 10:53
Chapter: Epilogue

Your story is quite good realy. Your a great writer.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: inkhearted
Date: 07/08/06 21:45
Chapter: Bluff Discovered

nice story

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 06/23/06 17:44
Chapter: Pawn to E4

i love ginny! (well not literaly but still...) she like a snake never backs down

Author's Response: I know what you mean. I love Ginny too.

Author's Response: I know what you mean. I love Ginny too.

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 06/23/06 16:44
Chapter: The Healer

way to go hermione, if i was the healers i think i would have been running for the hill when harry started telling them what to do

Author's Response: Harry can be frightening when he wants to.

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 06/23/06 12:49
Chapter: Happy Birthday

*sob* i'm so clos to tears its unbelievable.

Author's Response: I did a good job then.

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 06/22/06 15:58
Chapter: The General Begins to Plan

yeah! fun and fluff to the extream

Author's Response: Everyone has to have a little fun.

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 06/22/06 14:43
Chapter: Weddings

i have to say i agree with you on the thing about ginny's gift/ long road home. but you are still a good writer even if you think that you can't come up with something like that

Author's Response: It's been two years since I read that wedding scene now, and I still can't come up with anything of my own that I like better. Thanks for the encouragement anyways.

Reviewer: hpgeek512
Date: 06/13/06 9:32
Chapter: The Healer

that was so sad, and exhilirating at the same time!

Author's Response: I agree.

Reviewer: hpgeek512
Date: 06/12/06 12:40
Chapter: Ambush

great ch!! it was so funny!!! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/07/06 22:22
Chapter: Stalemate

Ginny watched him go and then went to the toilet.

“Do you even have the decency to turn around?” she asked.

“No,” Voldemort replied.

That was absolutly halarious!

Only 1 week left until the Harry and Voldemort smackdown occurs!
Bring It!

Author's Response: Glad you got a smile out of it.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/07/06 21:45
Chapter: Whose Trap Is It?

This chapter KICKS ASS!
Go Ginny! Go Ginny! It's your Birthday, shake ya booty!

next chapter here I come!

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/07/06 20:56
Chapter: Setting the Board

Nice historical input.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/07/06 20:08
Chapter: Sacrificed

I know you are trying to prolong the mystery, but it's just making me more and more confused. And in a way it is taking away from my enjoyment of the story. Don't get me wrong! I love the story! 87 out of 100 so far! But those lost points are from the fact that I'm confused on what the game plan is and the fact that you created these great animagus creatures but you have done nothing AMAZING with them except a couple of carefree moments.

Maybe... Hopefully... you'll do something in later chapters to address these issues.

Author's Response: Well, the plan gets revealed when it is time. The animagus, originally, I intended for it to be nothing more than a way for the characters to have fun. There was never a plan to use any of their forms as part of the battle. But, the best laid plans can change and a few forms do get used latter on.

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