Reviewer: Miss
Date: 05/24/14 15:04
Chapter: The Healer

You wrote this a long time ago, but wanted to point out a small thing. You say Hermione is 16 here (when working on George) but she's 17, nearly 18 here.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/23/11 11:55
Chapter: The Healer

Absolutely brilliant. I love Hermione. She has power but she holds herself so classy. Great chapter.

Author's Response: When I started writing, Hermione was my favorite character. Ginny took her place eventually. But I still love her, and truth be told, JKR got it wrong. She might have paired Ron and Hermione and Harry and Ginny, but what she actually wrote, in real life (LOL as if this could be real life, it couldn't could it?) Harry and Hermione would have ended up together. Don't get me started. I've already got the story line in my head for why it's so. Someday I'll write it.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/23/11 11:26
Chapter: Happy Birthday

Great chapter but I'm still going to complain about Ginny being a grandstanding loose cannon.

Author's Response: Yes, she can be and Dumbledore let her have it because she is.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/22/11 20:19
Chapter: Weddings

Brilliantly done. I am intrigued with your mixing the magical and non-magical for the ceremonies. Kudos.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/22/11 19:51
Chapter: Ambush

Original and funny. Great start.

Author's Response: And thanks again.

Reviewer: Wiccan
Date: 10/08/09 21:36
Chapter: Epilogue

Brilliant and captivating. Thank you for an entertaining ride.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 22:59
Chapter: The Room with the Locked Door

poor snape!! thats so horrible about his wife and child!!!! im glad that in your story, snape is good.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 22:46
Chapter: Bluff Discovered

lol! nice ending

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 22:32
Chapter: Something Amiss

its so cool that ginny made harry a wand!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 22:13
Chapter: Bungie Jumping with Dragons

that was a good chapter! i love good, carefree chapters. lol

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 21:45
Chapter: Pawn to E4

i still think its horrible that they're using unforgivables to torture, but i get it know, i suppose...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 14:40
Chapter: Aftermath

thats so sad about all those deaths! but at least its safe at Hogwarts.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 14:20
Chapter: The Healer

luna is dead?! nnnnoooooo!!! sob! and all the members of the DA's houses attacked! and we still dont know who the other three people dead are! oh, dear... oh, dear...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/01/08 13:54
Chapter: Happy Birthday

war is terrible. its so sad that Bridgette had to die, on harry's birthday, no less. i almost started crying myself!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/31/08 23:26
Chapter: At What Price

thats so cool that harry got another voice!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/31/08 23:04
Chapter: The General Begins to Plan

im not sure how or if harry and ginny would have been able to be a lion or whatever, but its still a good chapter!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/31/08 22:48
Chapter: It Begins

the legilimency and occlumency training was awesome!!!! i could actually picture it in my mind.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/31/08 22:28
Chapter: Weddings

yaya!!! congrats to harry, ginny, ron, and hermione!!! i loved their vows!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/31/08 21:46
Chapter: Ambush

lol! that was some party! although i do think that they drank a bit too much...

Reviewer: LittleGinny
Date: 01/29/08 0:26
Chapter: Epilogue

Exelent story. One thing though. How could you kill Brigette, Arther, Bill,and anyone else who died??? i was sooo sad. Apart from that, great story. i could never come up with those ideas. thanx for an enjoyable story. i couldn't stop reading!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. But just like JKR, this is a story about war, and people die during war. Believe me, it wasn't easy killing any of them.

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