Love it the ending is so sweet
Love it the ending is so sweet
This was great! Write more, I show them all to my bff. She is as just HP-crazy as me.
Sweet. And charming.
hi author!!!!!!!!!! how can you put pictures in ur bio????????????? plz tell me......
good one! i thoroughly enjoyed the story. =) fluffy? yes, but a good kind of fluff! =)
HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I'D JUST DIE OF LAUGHTER IF HERMIONE LIKED NEVILLE!!!!!!! But I'd also be really pissed because she's SUPPOSED to fall in love with Ron. Oh, look at me, blabbering on like some old person on crack. Well, anyway, great story.
I'm a HUGE Ron/Hermione shipper and enjoyed the story so much! I think you've captured Ron and Hermione's personalities well. It was so cute in the end too! (sorry for my review being so short - I'm useless at them!)
I really enjoyed this story. I'm not a Ron/Hermione shipper at all (actually I'm quite against it), but you did a very good job at displaying the relationship, that I could enjoy it anyway. There were a few puncuation mistakes, and Hermione's thoughts at the beginning didn't sound very thought-like. It sounded more like something she could be exlaiming to herself. You did switch tenses once. “She was pretty sure that everyone in the school must know about her “secret” crush on Ron.” It should be "the school must have known" if the rest of it will be in past tense. In the entire story, Hermione was very in character, which I quite enjoyed. You portrayal of her emotions, especially near the end, is very well written. Ron is a little bit too blunt near the end, but I suppose he is like that a lot. It was a very satisfying ending. Good job!
That was cute and FLUFFY!
Author's Response: I know it was extremely fluffy, sorry! This was my first fic and I have written about another four stories which are a lot longer than this one and some are full multichaptered stories and they are A LOT LESS fluffy. This story was mainly fluffy in access because it was the first story I wrote and fluff was a lot easier to write. Thanks for the review - I am glad you think it was cute, that was what I was aiming for so YEY :) Smile Always,
twas a great story, but i just wish it was a little longer! great job anyway!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like I am currently writing another oen shot with a big Ron/Hermione element to it, so keep your eyes peeled it is a bit longer. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
I really liked the story! Good job! Are you going to write anymore?
Author's Response: I am currently writing a different R/H fic, it is a creation in the works. It isn't a continuation of this story though, I might think of adding another one-shot to this one ... I shall have to think about it. Watch this space! ~ the5thmarauder
I just LOVED that last little bit of dialouge between Ron and Hermione. It was really sweet and really sincere on Ron's part. I have found finally(BIIG emphasis on finally) a fic that doesn't portray Ron to be a blithering idiot when it comes to Hermione. You got it down to show how well they suit eachother, you also portrayed ron in a good light, I don't think half of these fics portray him as well. You got the charachters down really well. *10*
Author's Response: Thanks so much, FINALLY (and I also put a big emphasis on finally) I have found someone who sees Ron as I do. I don’t think he is going to continue to be a blithering idiot in the following books, I think as he matures he is going to become an entity in itself. I think he is going to become more influential and gain more confidence and therefore not be the blithering idiot, I don’t think Hermione and Ron will get together until he stops being the blithering idiot. They are soul mates, in my opinion, muirn betha dans to one another, they won’t have that type of relationship until Ron matures. I am glad to find someone who shares the same perspective as me ! Thanks for the review and please look out for any of my future one-shots! ~the5thmarauder x