Reviewer: Wingardia
Date: 02/06/06 21:39
Chapter: Figuring Each Other Out

I like this story! I like the way Harry is being cautious and not trusting this too-good-to-be-true gal. I also love this little interlude during his summer... something out of the boring ordinary for Harry. How nice! She's going to go to Hogwarts? You must write more of this story! It's such a nice change to see someone in the muggle world who wants to look after Harry. 'Bout time!

Author's Response: Unfortunately I've abandoned this story... I just couldn't seem to make it go the way I wanted it to go....

Reviewer: Sirius_ly_mental
Date: 04/23/05 21:54
Chapter: Coincidence

so how long before he trusts her? Hopefully not to long...Really like what you have so far. Update soon...

Reviewer: Kneazle731
Date: 02/22/05 20:42
Chapter: Getting out of the house

i love this story. its awesome that it's not some cheap romance story but really folow's jo's legacy. amazing writing, keep it up

Reviewer: fawks
Date: 12/07/04 14:22
Chapter: Getting out of the house

wonder what harry finds while he clears up can't be a coincedent that it's a muggle magic shop love it update soon

Reviewer: Scarlet Crystal
Date: 12/06/04 14:42
Chapter: Getting out of the house

wonderful as usual. still love the magic idea. so yes... i have no qualms since you've already read them :)

Reviewer: Scarlet Crystal
Date: 11/27/04 11:35
Chapter: The bitter made better

wonderful! sorry i went out of order. but i'm still very happy with your success.

Reviewer: Scarlet Crystal
Date: 11/20/04 17:20
Chapter: First Day Home

it's me! lovely job. when you have more, you know where to find me...

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