I liked this first chapter, it was good how you caught us up on Hermione's achievements in such a swift and discrete way, allowing the reader to focus on the present and future rather than going over old ground. The character analysis of Snape was very realistic. I'd love to read more. Oh and thanks for having Dobby around, he's one of my favourite characters.
This is great! why no more chapters? I'd love to see how this goes! (I'd choose Snape over Ron any day!!! I wonder what Hermione will do? Hmmmmm......)
personally i think Snape's kinda ....favorable. And i like Hermione so i don't see why this story can't flourish!!! Not Bad AWESOME BEGINNING hope i write like u
Dude. Why can't I have Snape? Ah. well. It was a great story Anyhoo. Cant wait for the next Chapter!!
Can't Wait for the next chapter
Two words: Loved It
I love this... I love this... I love this... I love Snape... Poor Lonely Snape... Poor Little Hermione marrying dumbbum Ron... *sigh* I'm going to enjoy reading this.
This is the fifth time I logged in and the 15th time ive tried to submit a review... so that should tell you the story is good. I may not like Snape/Hermione, but I do like some Snape/Hermione stories... Rambling... Anyway please continue!
Please continue this is will be such a great story. I can't wait to read more!!
Nice premise! Setting up Ron as a jerk.....making way for Snape! I like it! Please continue.
ohhh, Ron's a jerk!!! hehehe, keep up the writing!
I really liked your story... Kinda depressing though... Poor hermione, i would luv to se more!!!!!!