That is very good. I like the idea of going out for a walk and discovering Hogsmeade.
Wow......I really really loved this story! I mean--what a unique subject you've brought up--Hogwarts and Hogsmeade as seen by people who don't know they're magical. It's really hard to find such nice stories. I usually read Humour, and I'm glad I read this.
oooh, goody, I'm the first reviewer. I loved the story, and how Rachel found Hogsmeade on one random walk. It makes you wonder why her mother kept her from walking, and if she knew about the magical world or not. I give it a 10/10!