Hate snape for manipulating Lily. Like how Lily was loyal to James. Sweet how they fell asleep together on the train.
Cool chapter. Not so smart plan.
AHHH, EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!
Oooooh, Lily likes James. She can really defend herself, can't she? That was a really spectacular fight scene. Jake Mallon creeps me out!
I hate Jack Mallon. But he seems a lot like Tom Riddle... and what the heck is he doing in Hogwarts years after he graduated? Isn't he supposed to be taking over the world or something?
James getting a little overprotective, is he? I didn't leave a very good review for the first chapter, but I liked how James plowed into Lily, and how you showed us a glimpse of Lily's family life. This chapter was pretty good. The older malfoy is just as slimy a git as the younger one.
very good opener there.
Awww, what a nice ending. Very good story, I loved it.
I really, really like this story. It's great. Especially the part where Sirius sings ;)
I think this is a great story, one of my favourites! 10/10
OR MAYBE SNAPE - ACTIN G SUSPICIOUS!
Dumbledors hat - the portkey. KILL PETER!
that was definatley uncool when snape stole the credit. I HATE HIM AS MUCH AS I HATE PETER PETTIGREW! BOTH ARE EVIL AND VERY UGLY!
Snape go to HELL!!!! peter die die peter die
wow. i love it.
napkins are so facinating.
Author's Response: Uhhh...wha? Napkins?
I would be asking what you meant by head girl for gryffindor and in 6 year year but youve already answered it so yeah. 10
now, what language was i speaking in?
Author's Response: Beats me! But I think I was able to catch the jist of the review! Lol. Thanks!
I'm here too! Yay! I'm bored so I dicided to read some of your other work...really good! i loveit! just dont expect the lond reviews lke i did on collision coz i didnt get nuch sleep yesterday and not in a writing mood. 10