omg! THOSE DAMNED (SHIT)DEATH - EATERS!!!!!!!! sorry, outburst...
love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww.... i wish a guy would beat someone up for me... lol.
love your story!!!!!
talk about short.... wow, that Jack dude is pretty creepy... that person really IS bizarre... lol. i like it, though.
awesome!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!! i have nothing more to say...
lol!!! i promise you, your writing is "up to snuff"... as you say. well, if James meant literally, then that definitely happened. but, if he didnt, oh well, Lily is probably going to call him an arrogant prick (which is true) and march off... lol! i like it!
OH JACK MALLON
At first I thought it was
James is protective
Lily is relieved
They're in love
Well.. he ran into her allright..
Such a good story. I wish I could write like that.
this is a very, very good fic. I don't think that Lily is ACTUALLY a quiditch player, but you made it very convincing. This was suspenceful, romantic, funny and, over all, really good!
Very creative! I liked it.
But can Sirius sing to me anyway?
Haha "Allow me to show you" ... that was great! good job! You Need to write a sequel!
I absolutely love your story, but one tiney little thing that bugs me (everything else is PERFECT!) is in the 5th book Molly Weasley says that stiches aren't a wizard thing... oh well! Great story!
Wow! Great story! I especialy loved that last line:"“Then think about this,” Lily whispered, and slowly, hesitantly, she lifted up on her toes to kiss him." It was GREAT! keep up the good work!
Awww, I liked that very much. James seems to be SO very overprotective of Lily, but there you have it. And they both get to be on the QUiddidtch team! I just love happy endings!!
hey cool chapter. i didn't think remus had it in him to actually bite another human.
HAHA!! TAKE THAT YOU STUPID SPIDER!!! Sorry, I really need to stop using all capitols.
ERG THAT SNAPE IS A VILE IDIOT HE MUST ROT IN HELL EITHER THAT OR GET SEVERELY BEATEN UP BY JAMES AND LILY!!!!!!
OOOOOH EVIL CLIFFIE!!! Loved this chapter.