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Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/20/04 13:22
Chapter: Toil and Trouble

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: abt
Date: 11/20/04 2:56
Chapter: Head Boy Meets Head Girl

Oh ya one more thing, there is only two Heads. Not two Heads in each house.

Reviewer: abt
Date: 11/20/04 2:55
Chapter: Head Boy Meets Head Girl

TOM RIDDLE!!!! But he was'nt studing in Hogwarts anymore in Lily and James's year. Or is there another Tom Riddle? Rating: 8

Author's Response: Yeah, I realized that fact after I wrote this but...It IS fanfic so I thought it was ok. LOL. I needed some major conflitct and this really worked for me!

Reviewer: Neli P
Date: 11/19/04 22:56
Chapter: Toil and Trouble

WoW ! Hurry with the next chapter, please :)

Reviewer: thestral horse
Date: 11/19/04 22:44
Chapter: Toil and Trouble

Please update soon, I think i'm getting depressed lol, cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Well, I don't mean to depress you!!! But I will certainly hurry up writing the next chapter!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 11/19/04 20:23
Chapter: Toil and Trouble

Don't quit! Just keep at it! You see, I read just about every romance fic that has a ship that I support. Well, I try to anyway. Just don't give up! I love the story so much! Try and try until you gt peoples attention. if you have time, read my story, Reaching Beyond Fear. It is a Ron/Hermione fic. I love your story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will definately read your fic! I am a HUGE R/Hr fan! LOL. Thanks for the support=)

Reviewer: dudette3993
Date: 11/19/04 18:53
Chapter: Toil and Trouble

Good story, but there is one thing. There is only one Head Boy and Girl at one time, there are two prefects from each house but only two Heads. Other than that it was great!

Author's Response: oooopppsss... well as i've already written that way, and as Tom Riddle really needs to be Head boy for Slytherin, I can't change it. I hope ou can forgive my error and keep reading!

Reviewer: lilyanna
Date: 11/18/04 19:13
Chapter: Toil and Trouble

wow, thatz idk, weird how he knew, but iz a great story please continue

Author's Response: Wow! Some actual interest in that story. I was thinking of stopping because nobody seemed interested in that story AT ALL! Lol. *Confidence restored*=)

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