oo0hh this is good 10/10
I LOVE THIS STORY is good it is soooo on my fave list
awww this is good i like it *claping*
aww, that was so lovely!
action packed, fast moving and just the right amount of lovey doveyness!
Love the story, very funny. Give it two thumbs up!!!!!!
Seems a little quick and superficial for love.
Hahahaha. The end of this chapter was funny. :D
lol that ending is funnehh too :]
lmao i love the last part.
' “Good morning, Potter,” she said crisply. She refused to look at him as she gathered her things from the ground. He bent to help her. “Dare I ask?” she said, trying to keep her composure. “Just why you were leaving the station?!” James smiled wickedly.
“Honestly!” Lily was fuming, and James knew it.
“Well, I was hoping I would run into you.” '
lol it's funneh as!
i think it is so clever at the end just after lily and james run into each other and then james says that he was hoping to run into her. took me a few minutes to get it but then again im having a slow day lol ! x
This was great,are you gonna make a series?Please?
I loooooved this! It was soo cute, and nice, and for once it had some PLOT in it [unlike other James/Lily fics] other then the Devious Plot of the Is Lily falling For James??? hehe...good job, I liked it a lot!
i love sirius!! =)
and yea, also the story.
This was an amazing story..it was really funny ......sad........and, and i dunno what else but it was really good.
i loved your story and Sirius' song was very funny
jus as a thought, where is dumbledore in all this?o.O
umm.... malfoy didnt go to skool wit the mauraders, he went to skool wit voldemort n onli snape went to skool wit them, but still a good story so far =)
I love this story! you are going on my fave author And fave stroiy! you should be proud.... well? are you?