Reviews For Once Upon a Time
Reviewer: Shortone
Date: 02/03/08 22:31
Chapter: One-shot

That was fantastic.. It gave me chills. I loved the movie The Notebook, and this kind of reminded me of it.. It was FANTABULOUS! Thanks!!

Reviewer: Shortone
Date: 02/03/08 22:27
Chapter: One-shot

That was fantastic.. It gave me chills. I loved the movie The Notebook, and this kind of reminded me of it.. It was FANTABULOUS! Thanks!!

Reviewer: pokecharm
Date: 01/09/08 10:28
Chapter: One-shot

that was really depressing...well written, but now I'm really sad...

Reviewer: HarryPotterLover_01
Date: 07/22/07 0:56
Chapter: One-shot

ohhhhhh.....so sad!!!!!!!!!!
poor harry!!!!!!!!!
poorerGinny!!!!!!!!!
*tear*

Reviewer: lilstrywrtr
Date: 09/14/06 14:40
Chapter: One-shot

so sad but not bad

Reviewer: lilstrywrtr
Date: 09/14/06 14:40
Chapter: One-shot

so sad but not bad

Reviewer: gryffindorgurl22
Date: 08/14/06 17:04
Chapter: One-shot

that was terriblely sad.

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/13/06 10:44
Chapter: One-shot

OMG that was so beautiful, sad -*sob* I liked it. It was very diffrent than what i thought from the begining. I gess it cane out about the same at tghe end. "That was so sad

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 06/12/06 16:09
Chapter: One-shot

awww i ALMOST cried but i didnt.Its sad but not sad if you know what i mean.Love the ending.

Reviewer: Ashton06
Date: 04/23/06 14:00
Chapter: One-shot

I really like this fic!!!!! It made me cry.

Reviewer: xenophiliac
Date: 04/04/06 15:13
Chapter: One-shot

I heard about you through a number of authors, all who gave you praise. So now I finally sit down and read one of your works (the first one-shot on the list so I don't have to spend a week reading thirty chapters of you for the first time....just testing). I must say it seems like a showcase for potterverse theory of how Voldemort will be defeated. I like to believe in the one where harry and voldemort go "beyond the veil" and fight eachother there. But this story also seems to be showing off how you like to write. I really like the part where you say "Voldemort’s mind had been full of evil, corruption and treachery. . . . Ginny’s mind was like a slate wiped completely clean." I just really like that bit alot. Also about this story, its one of those flat out tragedies. You know you can't change it and while your in the middle you know something bad will happen. In Of Mice and Men the same thing happened...in fact the likeness between your story and that one now that I think about it....both damaged characters die at the hands of their most beloved but at a time of peace/understanding. Well, great story.

Reviewer: Potterphile12
Date: 09/17/05 21:08
Chapter: One-shot

Well first let me say that after reading this story, I will be reading more of your writing. I chose this fic because I tend to gravitate towards dark/angsty fics, and this one did not disapoint. I found there was so much emotion in this fic, but it always suited the mood. I found the beginning to be hopeful, almost happy. In fact, I thought he was telling his daughter a bedtime story. The backstory was well done. Just as a sidenote, I think its interesting that everyone seems to write the last battle in the same manner, and it always seems to happen at Hogwarts. I like your resolution to the battle-very well thought out. You used the emotion factor in an interestin manner. The end made me cry. It was very emotionally charged. The narrative followed an interesting path, alternating between fairy tale and brutal reality. Anyways, I think I've rambled enough. Very well done!

Reviewer: QueenGinny1629
Date: 04/24/05 0:51
Chapter: One-shot

I'm crying. That was so perfect and so sad. You are a truly gifted writer.

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 04/17/05 7:16
Chapter: One-shot

That was so sweet!

Reviewer: HPLiNKN92
Date: 02/19/05 14:29
Chapter: One-shot

o man...........she died? the last thing she did was.......

Author's Response: Yeah, she died.

Reviewer: Stuart
Date: 02/18/05 12:13
Chapter: One-shot

Unbeliavably sad!! It was so well written, almost had tears coming out of my eyes! You can't do that to me!

Reviewer: harry rukes
Date: 02/01/05 21:12
Chapter: One-shot

that was the saddest story i have ever read in my life. i know its pefetic but this story made me cry for hours and its made me sooo sad but it was written great though keep up the good work though

Reviewer: rwanner
Date: 12/23/04 23:33
Chapter: One-shot

Wow... Saddest story ever.

Reviewer: jeweledbuggy315
Date: 12/22/04 14:56
Chapter: One-shot

you have to wrote more, but please no more sad one like this one.

Reviewer: EvilBliss
Date: 12/19/04 19:33
Chapter: One-shot

...wow.

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