Reviewer: Danae
Date: 06/09/05 10:30
Chapter: Bickering And Thinking

Very nice beginning! Hermione at her best - mature, thougtful, sensitive. And I agree that including Ginny this way seems to be a cute idea. I am so curious, how will you handle the character of Snape, expecting the best :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes it is mostly Hermione in the beginning and more Severus at the end. It is one of the things I'm still looking into.

Reviewer: Cindy
Date: 06/08/05 16:59
Chapter: Bickering And Thinking

Well, you are off to a very good start!! I am very interested to see what happens next!! Please post soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, I will.

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/08/05 0:06
Chapter: Bickering And Thinking

I've said this before in other reviews. I'm mainly a H/G R/H girl, but have been reading other types. Some of these H/S fics are actually pretty good, if they're written well, and so far yours is! I'm curious to see if Snape is the guy Hermione was talking about, and if so, I hope you'll put in some background info on their past together. Lovely beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm personally a Snape addict but like you say, if a story is well written. As for their history, well you'll see....

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 06/07/05 13:27
Chapter: Bickering And Thinking

I knew when I saw this fic I really shouldn't read it, I mean, I think this is now fifty on my favourites list. However, against my better judgement, knowing I would love the story and have to keep reading, I read it. And it's excellent I love the first chapter and it includes Harry/Ginny *cheers* which makes it even better. And I do like the fic and I do have to keep reading, it's excellent. I'm glad it's mostly written and I really like it and will keep reading and reviewing, cos it's a great fic :) *10* I like the how you started it, have they been together before? Or did she just like him?

Author's Response: Thank you, and no i'm not going to tell you. It is part of the story and you will find out soon enough.

Reviewer: Kestrel
Date: 06/07/05 10:13
Chapter: Bickering And Thinking

Oh, thank God. Someone else mostly finished their story before adding it. Look at all the old, uncompleted Hr/S fics here! This is a great start and I'm excited that another fiction shall have quick updates! 9/10! P.S. I'd love it if you'd review my stories! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks, I hardly ever share anything before I finish it, writing something darker at the moment as well. And this one has the option of a sequel. I also would love to R&R your stories, just keep doing the same for me and life would be bliss.

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