Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 15:37
Chapter: Harry and Lily

this is funny!!!

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 15:18
Chapter: Reunions 3

stilll good

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 15:02
Chapter: A Christmas With Family

still good

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 14:47
Chapter: ‘Tis the Season


Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 14:39
Chapter: Reunions 2

still likein it

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 14:39
Chapter: Reunions 2

still linkin it

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 14:29
Chapter: The Hill

im not really l9ikeing Brain he gets harry in to much trouble

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 14:17
Chapter: Reunions 1

wow still likeing it

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 05/29/06 14:05
Chapter: The Room of Requirement’s Secret

wow l like this story

Reviewer: mrrlyn
Date: 05/25/06 23:07
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

i think it should continu....

Author's Response: Thank you for voting.

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 05/25/06 14:25
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

Great!! I think u should end this story and create a new one with episodes from harry's normal life and make a series with the punishment for inmuturity, this one and the next one

Author's Response: Thank you for weighing in. That seems the best idea, eventhough it does not have the most support. others have suggested the same and I'm leaning toward it, but I can't help but feel this should be the end too. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lightning_crashes11
Date: 05/25/06 6:18
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

personally im disapointed that Harry choose to go back to that life. I feel that Harry is brave and wouldnt choose the easy way, he'd learn to deal with whats happening and would definetly not go back. Ofcourse he misses his parents but he has some sense of responsibility - what happened to him happened to him. It cant always be easy. Harry i think knows this and tho it would ofcourse be tempting he would never make that decision.
impressive writing however.

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive feedback. You make a very good point. His choice is not that of a Gryffindor, is it? i must admit that I scewed up, but I can't really change it now. Thanks for complimenting my writing.

Reviewer: Emporer Dan
Date: 05/24/06 19:57
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

Wow... I would say end it, but it looks like it's going to continue. If it continues, you should make another story. Harry in his new life would no longer have the same plot, etc. so therefore it'd be a different story. I hope if you decide to continue it, it'll be written well, I don't want a half-repeat of 'immaturity' because Harry is a baby. Looking forward to reading more of what you write anyways. It was almost a bittersweet ending, I almost cried, Idk why. I just realised I would NEVER be able to change time. I wouldn't be able too.

Author's Response: I thank you for your suggestions. you are right about the plot changing, just as it did at the end of my first. Rest assured, I would never do a repeat of any of my stories. There is nothing wrong with crying; the ending was definently bittersweet. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 05/24/06 19:49
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

hmm.....I can't say I liked the chapter before this one so much, personally, I didn't see what the purpose of it was in terms of the overall story. But I guess that was the only thing I had a problem about, the rest of the story I thought was great, I never read a story like that one before, and the plot wasn't lame at all, rather it was quite interesting, and I wanted to keep reading it till I finished.

As for the last chapter, I personally think you should end it. The story (actually series) was really great, and I'd hate it if you had just dragged on the story. I think you would do a good job (I have no doubts in your writing), but I think that all good stories have an ending. Basically quit while your at the top.

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive critique. I am glad you liked the series and you are probably right about quiting while ahead. Thank you.

Reviewer: Skittlezbabi
Date: 05/24/06 17:23
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

i think you should definalty keep it going becuase i want to see what will happen to harry if he never had the scar and his paretns were still alive. I THINK ITS GREAT!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your vote and for your praise.

Reviewer: beth1191
Date: 05/24/06 15:02
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

i think you should keep writing the story.i want to know about Harry's life at hogwarts since he's normal-ish.this is a great chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you for voting and for the praise.

Reviewer: RemusMoonyLupin
Date: 05/24/06 14:16
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

Don't end it just like that! I know Harry is happy and all, but what about everyone in the real world?? It's not fair to them. Many people live without their parents, and still live a happy life even though they knew their parents just as well as Harry. He should live in the real world, and not leave them all to die at hte hands of voldemort. I geuss it's too late to change that now...

Author's Response: He didn't leave everyone else to die. The whole world changed and Voldemort never existed. Technically that happened the last time, but was then reversed. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: angel_charlie
Date: 05/24/06 10:48
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

please conitnue - me loves this story. “All ca-lean da-da,” aaww how cute.

Snap shots sound good! Possibly about how ginny and him got together. Harrys first day at school. etc etc
xx weldone

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. Thank you for voting.

Reviewer: kram
Date: 05/24/06 10:24
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

i think it should be snapshots of his life. perhaps 2-5 chapters for each occasion hmmm?

Author's Response: Thanks for the input.

Reviewer: Megan Radcliffe
Date: 05/24/06 6:13
Chapter: Lavender and Chamomile

YES! CONTINUE! lol please? yes i say yes whos with me?!

Author's Response: Thank you for voting.

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