Reviewer: blackstack
Date: 05/09/06 18:43
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

absolutely love this story! It's fresh..none of that bored them with writting type of thing..it has people talking and characters realizing what their fears and foes are. this story is da bom! When i wrote mine, i want mine to be atleast half as good as this one! luv it! ———Brie

Author's Response: Thank you for your praise and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: alla
Date: 05/09/06 18:14
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

oh i luv this story!!!!! i've been reading it from chapter 4 (sorry i havent reviewed all of them) and it keeps getting better. just a question, if harry goes back, will his mum keep dying or if she doesnt, will someone else die? 10/10!!!!! oh yea, why cant u put what u score the story?

Author's Response: If Harry takes the offer, he will go to a world without Voldemort. I can't say she won't die, but he will not be killing her. Simply put, I have no plans to kill anyone before the story's end. I don't know why they got rid of the score function. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Virginia Drewster
Date: 05/09/06 16:39
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

I just found your story, and I am entranced by it. Very clever idea about the Dream Catcher. Makes everything a little more complicated. Update soon!


Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you like it. I like to write complicated stories and make my readers think. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Death Eater 101
Date: 05/09/06 14:59
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

Nice chapter, although I'm a little confused with what happend to Harry in the dream. No matter, I'll probably reread it again, that usually clears it up.

Reviewer: softballplayer
Date: 05/09/06 10:37
Chapter: The Room of Requirement’s Secret

wow, that was a pretty good story. it kind of sounded like my friend wolfdancer12's stories. I don't think that you should tell people that it has sex if it doesn't!


Author's Response: Your complaint about the sex is warrented but inaccurate. The warning is actually for sexual situations, of which there are some. These include Harry and Ginny sharing a bed, because I specifically said Harry was thinking about it and because they were doing what is considered foreplay, had they not had clothes on. There is also the focus on Ginny's body as she tries on the dress, particularly since Harry was thinking about her breasts. I was fairly certain that the mods would have rejected these moments without the warning, also. Plus, the story is not yet complete and a later chapter comes closer to that line. Thanks for the praise for the overall story and I will check out your friend's stories.

Reviewer: Megan Radcliffe
Date: 05/09/06 2:06
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

Awesome chapter! Wht will he choose I hope he chooses to go bak with his parents so this story could continue! *hint hint* lol Jokes

Author's Response: 2:06 AM? Somebody was up late, even by my standards. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As always, thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 05/08/06 23:44
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

"I'll see you soon, sweetheart" I thought for a split second you were going to kill Harry! I didn't notice anything wrong or out of place. Lots of little clues scattered through out the chapter. It seemed to draw me in and the chapter was over far sooner than I wanted it to be.

As to the time constraints that I am under, that’s life. Not having access to the internet for a few months will be worth the things I will be doing.




Author's Response: I apologize for the shortness, but the next events are better placed in there own chapter. Rest assured that I have no plans to kill the famous boy, er, teenaged wizard, at this time. Lots of scattered clues? Anyway, thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 05/08/06 22:38
Chapter: They Mean Every Flavor

*first review dance!!* Yikes- I was thinking that he would go back when Lily said "I'll see you soon, sweetheart", and then the whole demon thing... ICK! IT's so scary. That ought to throw anyone off. And then the baby formula.... very slick. Reminding Harry that in order for the dreamcatcher to 'work', he must go back to being a baby.
Once again, I'm at a loss and have no idea where you'll take me next. I'm frustrated and loving it!

Author's Response: You like being frustrated? Maybe I should finish that mystery that I was writing and really confuse some people. Alas, my muse abandoned me on that fic. Nice job on catching the hints. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/05/06 22:16
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

He still has some fame in his "new life" though. His dad got "rid" (made him leave..) of Voldy right? He's known as Jame's boy but still he still has a little bit of fame. I don't think he'll ever be able to escape it. I know he hates being famous but in some ways it is a good thing to be famous... there is always some stalker that is following you (what else would they be doing?) and might save your life... you never know. It's better than being a nobody right? Wouldn't you rather be somebody rather than a nobody? I'd rather stand out than look like everyone else in crowd. I still would say that if I were Harry I'd stay in my old life... He seems to know everybody better there.... Yeah....

Author's Response: I'm content with not standing out in a crowd. I wouldn't say I'm a nobody, but I don't have to avoid the media circus either. Besides, he wouldn't be famous at all, because he would go to a world without Voldemort; that is Tom M. Riddle was never born. As for knowing everyone; he would become an infant again and be able to meet and learn about everyone all over again. Personally, I wouldn't do it, but if I were in Harry's shoes, I'd give it a lot of thought.

Reviewer: heartsinger2
Date: 05/05/06 20:52
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

please update soon

Reviewer: ink_heart
Date: 05/03/06 22:52
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

In respone to 5589:
I'd stay in the life that he is living now. he as so much to accomplish. I know that it does suck but chances are that it will get better. It is a hard choice and it is Harry's choice. But why relive your life when you can just stay and keep it as it is. Do get what I mean? His life is way more exciting than the one he'd be going into. i don't know.... But I am pretty sure I'd stay here.

Author's Response: I really like debates and wish this one was more heated. You make some good points, but you need to remember something. Harry never wanted and does not like the fame and excitement. I like the positive attitude, though. Hopefully things will be better at the end of book 7. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: 5589
Date: 05/03/06 14:30
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

hmmm leave this past and become a healer... stay in this past and become an auror. leave and become a child. stay and marry ginny. leave and no voldemort. stay and voldemort. leave and get your parents. stay and get the Dursleys. tough decision. if he stays he has to fight voldemort and deal with the dursleys but out of all that he gets Ginny. leave and get his parents, no voldemort to deal with but he becomes a healer and has to become a child again plus meet all those friends that he had to meet. but hopefully that time around, he would be on better terms with Malfoy. i'm leaning towards going for his parents.

Author's Response: Nice pros and cons list. Of course, he could still marry Ginny in the other world. But I don't think he'd ever be friends with Malfoy. Malfoy is a very unpleasant person. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megan Radcliffe
Date: 05/02/06 3:17
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

Wow! lol really good how u made that dream catcher thingo! lol it made sense wht they do...scary.
I wonder what Harry will choose? i want him to choose to go to a world without Voldy so then you can make ANOTHER sequel bout Harry's life with his parents...

Author's Response: So you think he should abandon his past? A sequel like that would be tough to write. Plus, Harry seems to take deep issue with becoming a child again. But after what happened to him the previous summer (my other story) I can't blame him. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: fantasygirl7
Date: 05/01/06 3:48
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

Cool. Nice story. I can understand why Harry feels this way. keep going I can't wait to hear the end

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 04/30/06 22:16
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

Just to let you know it is possible to read every chapter you have posted for this story in one day! :) Does that tell you how captivating your writing is? (Don’t worry, I didn’t have anything extremely important to do today.) I am curious to find out what he will do next. I think you could write either choice very well.

The Dream Catcher seemed to have taken pity on Harry and brought him back. I hope that was a good thing. It would be terrible if he ended up in St. Mungo’s. I wonder if Harry will try to get Ginny to sleep with him once they Christmas holidays are over?

I am going to have internet access for only a few more weeks and it would be nice if I could read the ending but I am not meaning to rush you are anything like that. Good writing can’t be rushed or forced and it’s well worth the wait.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear about your time constraints. I hope you can stick around long enough to enjoy the end. As for your questions; all I can say is that you have to wait, though that seems cruel given your situation. Thanks for the review. I hope I continue to captivate.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 04/30/06 20:55
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

WOW that was a turn around i only just read the whole thing now took me two days. crazy. that really sucks for Harry i hope things get better for him. on one hand i hope he has a life with his family but on the other hand he was such a wimp in the other life pluse all the relationships he has now. i don't tough decision. update soom please!

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 04/30/06 2:35
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

Hey another great chapter I keep on reading can't wait to see what happens

Personal note: thanks guys for the tip about reviewing but not being able to read the story!! thought I was going mad! I click on chapter and then nothing! hate new system don't care for the look either.

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 04/30/06 1:21
Chapter: Harry’s Dilemma

Very interesting... I'd like to hear more about what EXACTLY went on between DD and the Dream Catcher. Sounds like crucial information to me!

Author's Response: It may sound crucial, but it would be pretty drab and boring. If I do add it, it may delay my postings, but I will consider it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 04/29/06 19:31
Chapter: The Room of Requirement’s Secret

I like your story idea, but sometimes you make Harry look a little immature and childish. Otherwise, plz continue.


Author's Response: In my opinion, Harry IS a little immature and childish. But that's not his fault. He was deprived of a normal childhood and never had a chance to learn crucial social skills. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 04/29/06 19:31
Chapter: The Room of Requirement’s Secret

I like your story idea, but sometimes you make Harry look a little immature and childish. Otherwise, plz continue.

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