Reviews For Ode to Snivellus
Reviewer: laurenpotter9
Date: 06/26/07 21:46
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

That was funny! I'm still laughing!...I love it..funniest poem i have ever read!

Reviewer: allura mystique
Date: 02/07/07 14:55
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Haha...funny! Yeah, it did seem like the Marauders actually wrote this!

Reviewer: Lily Roxy
Date: 01/31/07 10:08
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Awww, I'm not sure whether to laugh or be disturbed, so I compromise *shakes head dissaprovingly and laughs*

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 11/21/06 20:07
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

LOLZ I LOVED IT! It's fuinny! Wee!!! Marauders and poetry make a great mix!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 11/21/06 20:05
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

LOLZ I LOVED IT! It's fuinny! Wee!!! Marauders and poetry make a great mix!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SPotter
Date: 10/16/06 13:57
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Hahaha, amazing! I sent it to my enemy that me and my friends call Snivellus(she really, hates it) I thought she was going to kill me. Me and my friends act some what like the Marauders, so I really injoyed this, amazing really!

Reviewer: SimplyCharmed
Date: 08/31/06 16:18
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Hahaha! That was so funny!

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 08/04/06 23:41
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

I love Severus. But this was still really funny. James and Sirius are such goofballs. Good Job!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/30/06 19:16
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Lol. It actually does sound like something the Marauders (especially Sirius or James) could have written!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 06/23/06 14:41
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Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 06/08/06 13:13
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Heh... I'm guessing that Lupin had to correct their spelling and grammar, and Peter just giggled. *laugh* ~Katie-kun

PS: Please check out my poetry!

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 05/29/06 6:59
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Reviewer: Lily Luna Lupin
Date: 05/10/06 18:46
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Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 05/09/06 16:13
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

This is so FUNNY! I was laughing almost all the way through! Other than including some more details about their torturing Snape, I dont think there's anything you could have done to make this better. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 05/06/06 11:39
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

*snigger* *snort* *sniggersnortsnigger* I *snigger* think that *snort* this *sniggersnort* portrays exactly how the marauders feel abou Snivellus! *sniggersnort*

Author's Response: I'm glad. That is what I was aiming for.

Reviewer: moon_goddess
Date: 04/26/06 17:29
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

This is cute! I like the last line about how they will cherish their hate for him.

Author's Response: Me too :)

Reviewer: Dedalus Diggle
Date: 11/05/05 1:50
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10! I love this poetry.. it sounds like they are the ones that wrote this...!!! Nice one!

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 08/04/05 7:06
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

I dunno, I really don't. The first stanza was probably the best, but that probably could have been done better as well. I think the main problem was the meter and flow. If I can't think of any other way you could have said it, I'd be fine. But most of the time I can see a way to make it shorter -- or longer -- to better fit the meter. For instance, Don't try to deny it, for you know it's true. This could be shortened to "Don't deny it, for it's true" for the meter's sake, and it's still saying the same thing. When you write poetry, you have to work on things like that, or it makes the poem seem mediocre.

Reviewer: valerinaballerina
Date: 07/13/05 18:59
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

i don't know much about poetry, but i really love your ode to snivellus. it will hold a place in my favorites section forever.

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 06/19/05 14:01
Chapter: Ode to Snivellus

Alas - I found the childish insulting nature of this poem amusing! Here you have your traditional rhyming poem with a hint of grease and trouble, it was great.

I found it became a little bumpy after your superb opening stanza, but you picked up the pattern nearing the end. I would have liked to hear more of the Maurauders exploits in their on going torure of Severus, I particularly liked your mentioning of the chair!

I can almost vision them writing something like this, though no doubt Moony would be a little ruffled by it all! Well done - Good Job!

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