Great! Great, great, great, great, great! I loved how you described Mary Sue and then made Harry compare her to Cho! Lol! Great! Awesome! Update real soon! 11/10!
Author's Response: Wow I'm glad you liked it so much!!! Don't worry I'm updating as soon as I can!! Thanks!!
Very cute! I like it how Mary Sue is described as your average - well, Mary Sue!!
Author's Response: Yeah, i know, i wanted her to be like your average, unbearable, perfect Mary Sue... And wait till you see what happens in the next chapters!!! Hehehe... anyway, thanx for reviewing!!!