Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 09/25/06 1:34
Chapter: Repercussions

Ooooooooooooooh, I want to keep reading! That's always my reaction when I come to the end of one of your chapters, though. I still really want to see what happens with Riddle's Apprenticeship, and I'm looking forward to Isobel being reunited with the parents she doesn't remember. I know life is busy, but pleeeeeeeease update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review dear. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: FuNnYcIdE
Date: 09/24/06 19:44
Chapter: Repercussions

I quite enjoyed this chapter! Stupendous!

Keep On Writing;)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: SoL_leeks
Date: 09/24/06 19:18
Chapter: Repercussions

no dont say that about ur chapter it was really good i thourally enjoyed it no worrys! anyway update soon

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 09/24/06 19:16
Chapter: Tripping the Light Fantastic

I'm glad harry and draco are friends, but the serpents on their arms come a little too close to the dark mark for my comfort. Is harry making a lifelong commitment with those?

Author's Response: Everyone thinks dark mark there, but those are innocent marks between fledgling friends. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 09/24/06 18:58
Chapter: High Tea

what is up with dumbledore? does he have a secret agenda or something?

Author's Response: Of course he does. :)

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 09/24/06 18:28
Chapter: Loosing the Battle

I feel sorry for poor underprivelidged hermione. if this isn't a success story I don't know what is.

Author's Response: :) Totally.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 09/24/06 18:17
Chapter: I Spy With My Little Eye

The lack of two of his older brothers seems to give ron some extra confidence. that is really interesting; also that he comes up with good comebacks.

I was totally startled to see tom riddle. what was he like when dumbledore taught him at school? does he know that mcgonnagall is recruiting for the rebels? he is definitely charismatic...

are harry and draco actually gonna be friends? cuz i am amazed at what you are able to pull off here. Im worried about what malfoy sr will do to draco.

and tom riddle definitely has some serious mood swings if he vetoes draco on the spot.

Author's Response: :) Harry and Draco are still getting along. No idea if the friendship will last for the whole fic. Peace!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 09/24/06 17:42
Chapter: A Rebel at Heart

this is really cool. you have created an interesting an intriguing world.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hp_fangal
Date: 09/12/06 9:35
Chapter: Connections

I hadn't read many (if any) alternate universe fics before this one, and I'm loving it! It's amazing to see all these characters we already know put in surprising, new situations. And I think Riddle is still Voldemort. The way you described him in this chapter is very much the way I see him in the books. And I hope Dumbledore can pull off this plan of his. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Welcome to AU! It's the only place I play in any fandom. :D

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 09/07/06 16:10
Chapter: Connections

Another great chapter. I'm glad you didn't drag out Lily's transformation -- the suspense would have been too much. It was heartwarming to see her and James together again, but I agree that she really should give him all the details soon. I guess now she's got something big in common with Remus (being a cursed being who transforms against their will).

I'm still thinking that Riddle will pick Harry as his heir. (BTW, am I correct in assuming that immortality comes hand-in-hand with sterility?) Perhaps Harry becoming Riddle's heir will make him a Parselmouth, etc., just as Voldemort's failed AK did in the books. Hmmm... I do think it would be cool if the heir-making process gave Harry his lightning-bolt scar (it's just so weird to think of him without it).

I'm extremely excited to see what happens next. I want the Potters reunited, darn it! Ok, enough of that. Dumbledore takes his sweet time, but sometimes that's the only way to do it. I think he probably had Sirius locked up to prevent him spilling the beans about the kids being alive.

Keep up the excellent writing, and PLEASE update soon.

Author's Response: Hurting Lily is probably the worst thing that happened serendipitously. It made me feel like a bad person doing that to her.

Riddle's choice will be a major plot point and i can't say more.

If you're still reading, reunions are on the horizon.


Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 09/06/06 10:40
Chapter: I Spy With My Little Eye

Wow thats very good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: bkwrm0502
Date: 09/04/06 17:52
Chapter: Connections

Ok, C here. Sorry it's taken me so long to review. My computer's busted and I had huge issues with getting to a computer this weekend. Anyway, on with the review.

Ok, so I'm glad you turned Lily back, though I'm pretty sure my lovely boyfriend told you that already. I loved the connection you did with the dream. It'll make their reunion so sweet. I wonder how she reacted upon meeting the other Bog Golems? I'm also very glad that you reunited them. Will she tell him, or try to keep it secret? And what was James up to the whole time she was gone? Just searching for her and nothing else? Is there any purpose to Narcissa being so OCD? I mean, you spent a great deal of time on it, and usually that means it's important, but I never can tell with you. What happened to the Reaper? Did James perhaps have anything to do with it? And where will the evil lady get her victim if not in the school? You have a very interesting scenario going on with Riddle. I suspect he's getting a soft spot for Draco... why else allow him to stay in the class? I mean, it could be for the usual torture, but that would get rather boring after a while. What is his purpose in splitting up the classes anyway? And about Melinda... she's starting to scare me. What's Dumbledore going to do when he pulls them out? I mean, surely he can't pull them out forever, unless he's bringing down the Empire soon after. And is he actually going to infect the children with the plague, or is he just going to pretend they have it to pull them away? Very interesting. Why put Sirius in a cell? And I think you got the numbers mixed up on that, cause I got confused when you switched numbers. Unless Sirius wasn't her 'special' person.

Yeah, can't think of anything else at the moment. Please update against soon. :-D

Author's Response: I'm going to skip the James Lily questions as you have most likely read the latest chapter already. As for Narcissa, she's a big part of Draco's life and one of the ways I'm rounding him out. He loves his mother, but is frustrated by her and happy to get back to school. His father avoids her at her worst moments. By giving his parents faces you see what shaped their son to some degree. If the only characterization Draco got was through Harry, he'd be less vivid. I like multiple angles and perspectives. *cough* Not that you couldn't tell.

Melinda has been less than honest recently and it's all about to come out. I forsee a trip to the doghouse for her.

Eeeeep! I need to fic the number.

Thanks for the review C.

Reviewer: anAnachronism
Date: 08/31/06 23:59
Chapter: Connections

Another great chapter. I really do adore this fic. All the hints seem to be setting Riddle up for picking Harry as his heir. I'm guessing this'll prove to be a complication when Harry's trying to 'die' of plague?

Author's Response: :X
*shifty eyes*
Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: Fraulein Weisenheimer
Date: 08/31/06 20:22
Chapter: Connections

Yay! you updated! I love your story, It's so imagainative, if a bit sad, poor Lily, Everything seemes to happen to her!

Author's Response: Yes. Lily never seems to have it easy does she. I should spread the bad luck out more. ;)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FuNnYcIdE
Date: 08/31/06 16:36
Chapter: Connections

That was amazing.

Keep On Writing;)

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 08/31/06 11:47
Chapter: Prologue

Wow, this is only the first chapter and I'm already gripped!
I have a feeling this is going to appear on my faves list!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. : )

Reviewer: SoL_leeks
Date: 08/31/06 1:02
Chapter: Connections

this chapter was great took forever to read really long but i enjoyed every word of it good job keep the updates comming

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed it! The long chapters are getting to be a habit at this point. But don't worry, they can't get much longer. the site limit is 10000 words an installment and these last few have been 8000-9000 range.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bkwrm0502
Date: 08/30/06 20:45
Chapter: Connections

I haven't read it yet, but I will. I feel mildly offended though. He only told me it updated about an hour ago. Hmph.

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: Zacko Borni
Date: 08/30/06 10:22
Chapter: Prologue

Heyyyyyyy! Nice story, you know, but, no offence, really, it's just kind of like a cool type of story without anything to do with Starwarsor fishing really. Next time, Maybe? lol.

Author's Response: Okay. Yeah.

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 08/30/06 9:34
Chapter: Connections

what a great chapter! Millicent and Neville... what a match. Great characterization as always, of course, and I particularly enjoyed reading Hermione and Lily. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: hehehe, yeah, a couple made in heaven. Thanks for the review! :)

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