Wow, very touching. And very sad, too. I particularly liked the fourth stanza, it made me smile. I'm glad Draco turned at least a little good in the end.
I'm not a Draco/Hermione shipper, but I found this really moving. I liked the phrase: "Even your death is like a mystery that involved unopened doors". Excellent!
Wow. I don't ship Draco/Hermione, but that poem was fantastic. Beautiful and sad. 9/10
aw, so sad. really good poem, though!
Wow... that was so sad. I felt so sorry for her.Fantastic!
Hi, still waiting.... =)
Hi, still waiting...
HI, not to sound rude or anything, but WHATS TAKING SO LONG?????? I love this story and check up everyday for a new chapter... LOL :)
Sad, beautiful, unbelievable! The part about sorrow was interesting. Things like this make u wonder well. It was great, superb, excellent, super, wonderful, and any other good thing I could say!
The poem was beautiful and honestly written. It had a ring of truth about it; I could really believe and relate to the feelings. I would suggest, this is rather nitpicky but I can't help it, that you keep the structure and pattern consistent. At some points, the rhyming would go ABCB, then AABC. There was no rhyme (no pun intended) or reason to it. Also, at some places it didn't quite flow right. Like I said, that stuff is nit-picky, it really was brilliant :)!
This is was really beautifully written. We must support D/Hr on every archive!
That was a really great poem, wonderfully written and so sad, but so good at the same time :)
Very sad, but I really like it! ^_^ Sand
Beautifuly written poem...and im glad you chose Draco/Hermion, they are my number one couple. Hope you write more so i can read them all...hehe. ~marina
hey! what a wonderful poem. i was so shocked at the part that draco died ): it is a very sad poem. it touched me! makes me think about my regrets and how death may just creep on us anytime at all : i must commend you on such a great poem, and that you managed to rhyme it so well! :D