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Reviewer: DawnsRedemption
Date: 07/27/05 0:24
Chapter: Chapter 21 Dancing With Dementors

Wow! Another awsome chapter. I love reading your work. Thank you so much for updating so fast it really is a joy. PS When you start publishing books are you going to give a discount to you long time fans :)

Author's Response: Hi Dawn! Thanks for the kind words. I don't own Harry Potter so I can't publish anything like this story. It's just a hobby.

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 07/26/05 11:38
Chapter: Chapter 21 Dancing With Dementors

Wow this chapter was awesome. I am very very impressed you know so much about the Wonders of the World and about the history of the world. BRAVO!! Excellent chapter and please please update again soon. -----Sauce

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it.

Reviewer: VeryFirstMarauderGirl
Date: 07/24/05 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 20 The Spring Term

Alright, so we need to worry about a white bird that comes to Harry every Monday and the windows on the more thing ----> EVIL CLIFFIES! Great story!

Author's Response: Better a white bird than a red herring, hey!

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 07/23/05 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 20 The Spring Term

Great chapter! I was afraid I was going to have to wait! But, you've come through for us... again. You're a lean, mean, fic writing machine! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Chapter 21 is in the queue. There will be four more chapters after that.

Reviewer: DawnsRedemption
Date: 07/23/05 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 20 The Spring Term

:) :) one more chapter, this made my week. Please update soon I cant stand the cliffhanger. PS You rock

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep working on it.

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 07/23/05 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 20 The Spring Term

AH! This story made my day. As nice as it was to FINALLY have the 6th book, I was suffering from serious fan fiction deprevation! EVIL CLIFFE!

Author's Response: When I wrote about the moment when Harry noticed the windows it just screamed at me to end the chapter there.

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 07/23/05 13:18
Chapter: Chapter 20 The Spring Term

If Harry and Hermione's wands didn't sound the alarm, then how come they didn't use a spell to clean up their robes? This chapter is building up to something big. Please update again soon. Peace, Sauce

Author's Response: I thought the hug would be funny. Harry is entitled to get a little bit of revenge for the way Hermione is abusing their date. But he does it in a nice way.

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 07/23/05 11:18
Chapter: Chapter 20 The Spring Term

A busy chapter my friend. I wonder why Hermione just didn;t use her wand to dry out Harry's robes, ah yes, the registration of wands. Way too many rules to remember, but I am sure you can keep track of them all.

Author's Response: They could have gotten away with using magic to clean up the dog pee, but Harry probably wouldn't think of a nice neat house-keeping spell like that, he's a bit of a slob. Hermione had her mind on that cute puppy and not on Harry's problem, until he shared it with her. They've had it drilled into their heads for the whole school year that they can't use magic outside of the classroom and Hermione does not lightly break the rules. (But she does break them when it is necessary!) Shacklebolt made it possible for them to use magic in special circumstances, like midnight forays around the castle looking for clues and stuff. He also told them to not abuse the privilege. Do you suppose Hermione would have thought to clean up the mess after Harry's hug? I cut the scene short so I'll let you decide.

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 07/23/05 2:00
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

You've done it again. Blown us all away! I cant wait till chapter 20! Keep writing! After this fic is done, are you going to write another? or are you retiring, knowing you have the admiration of H/Hr shippers?

Author's Response: Thanks, you made my day. I have no plans to retire but I have no plans to write another HP fanfict either. August is almost here, I have to get back to work.

Reviewer: Mermione
Date: 07/20/05 0:05
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

those...AGGRAVATING...mods. I can't wait until the 23rd for the next chapter! Oh well...Will there be a Harry Jr. (or a Hermione Jr.) in the future?

Author's Response: It's given me time to get chapter 20 finished and to make good progress on chapter 21. It looks like a lot of my ideas about important plot directions were totally different from JKRs ideas, but that's OK. As for the future of this story? Cloudy with a chance of rain.

Reviewer: allysonpotter
Date: 07/18/05 14:43
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

that was so kool. i loved it i cant wait for more. that was cute that harry gace hermione a ring. i just love it cant wait for more

Author's Response: You know they love each other. It's just a question of what Harry would do when he realizes he loves Hermione. Would he break her heart and chase her away for her own good? (I didn't give him that option.)

Reviewer: Mermione
Date: 07/17/05 22:39
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

WOW! This is great! It sounds like something Jo Rowling would've written herself! (I've been waiting for Harry to officially propose. Hee hee) 10/10!!!!!!

Author's Response: Just wait until chapter 20! I plan to have Harry take Hermione to Hogsmeade on their first date! (First marriage, then the proposal then a date. A little backwards? You bet.)

Reviewer: DawnsRedemption
Date: 07/17/05 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

Wow you rock. I got an account just so I could tell you how much I like your work. Please dont stop writing ever. I cant wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks Dawn. I plan to finish this story in about 5 - 7 chapters.

Reviewer: VeryFirstMarauderGirl
Date: 07/15/05 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

LOL! I really loved the ending there. OMG! I really liked how you did it with Hermione and Harry on the train while showing clips of what was happening in Hogwarts. Gilderoy huh? tsk...tsk...tsk... Very very very good chapter. Keep updating (HBP 2MORROW!) P.S. I sooooo agree with Harry needing a strong friend. Harry can't always be the strong one right?

Author's Response: Ron took over once before. On a chessboard when he was just eleven, and he showed what he was made of. I think he's got it in him.

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 07/15/05 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

I am glad you updated. This chapter was cool. Update again soon. Peace, Sauce

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 07/14/05 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

wow that was a hecca good chapter update soon please!

Author's Response: Thank You, chapter 20 will be up ASAP after the break for HBP.

Reviewer: andyman21
Date: 07/14/05 15:10
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

That was an incredibly long chapter, but it explained a lot. I would also like to mention in chap. 17 that flourish and blotts is a BOOK store not a cauldron store. And Canada is quite an interesting place to take them(GO Canada!) 11/10

Author's Response: I figured they sold school supplies at Flourish and Blotts. Not good cauldrons mind you, like a Smith would make.

Reviewer: andyman21
Date: 07/12/05 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 18 Gold, Silver, Red and Brown

WOW! Thats all i have to say. I could almost picture that being part of the series(granted editing for language, nudity etc.). Keep up the good work, and continue this story even though HBP comes out on Saturday. God knows I will be done with it fast and i could use something to read in the meantime.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. i plan on completing this story even if most of my guesses get blown away by HBP. If Hermione decides that S.P.E.W. is a waste of time, then we'll just have to consider my little yarn an "alternate universe" tale. I have an idea about the final battle that I want to pursue. It's not really geared for eight year olds.

Reviewer: VeryFirstMarauderGirl
Date: 07/12/05 0:04
Chapter: Chapter 18 Gold, Silver, Red and Brown

Wow...lots of head hurts now. I like your ideas on ways on killing Good Old Voldie. Human sacrifices...EW! Never again...never again... Keep up with the good work. I am really liking how this is going though I do think Ron is kinda OOC but hey he is cooler!

Author's Response: I'm deliberately making Ron more of a leader. I think Harry needs a stronger friend. And I think Ron needs to be a stronger person in order to get over his jealousy about Hermione. My excuse for this foray into character development that may not be in line with JKRs intentions is that Ron had a summer working with Charlie in the dragon preserves. That would help any boy grow up. Also there was this brain thing in the DoM. Could it have made him smarter?

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 07/09/05 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 18 Gold, Silver, Red and Brown

i love this story! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank You!

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