Reviews For E Deus Unum
Reviewer: ReinNightshade
Date: 11/29/06 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

............... wow! I don't know what to say! Excellent!

Reviewer: Ktbug
Date: 08/13/06 18:29
Chapter: Chapter 15 Tuesday Night

lol this reminded me of Scooby doo. If it wasn't for those blablablablabla oh then again they were being talked about in a good way. Oh forget i said a thing. Good story.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/11/06 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 19 The Bamboo War

LOL! What a dinner! I liked how you alternated back and forth between H&H and Hogwarts.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/11/06 0:39
Chapter: Chapter 15 Tuesday Night

My jaw is dropped and I'm in shock!
Umbridge! Who knew! I didn't snap out it until Ron told Filch that she was too fat for him. lol. That was great!

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/10/06 23:52
Chapter: Chapter 13 The Halloween Ball at Old George's Place

LMAO! I have a feeling that you have a thing against the American gov. I'm right behind ya. Department of Illusions... ha! And blaming the French! Not to mention Mr. Shurb's aparent and complete incompentance. The Texas accent was a nice touch...reminds me of a certain president of ours.

And I was cracking up when Hermione reasoned that b/c the americans died she could sleep in and finally see the thresals. My eyes are still watering!

Great chapter! Had me laughing from begining to end.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/10/06 23:15
Chapter: Chapter 12 Luna's Scoop

You made a slight error when you said: "One hundred and fifty three miles per hour," Ron answered.

Britain uses kilometers not miles.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/10/06 21:46
Chapter: Chapter 10 Find My Heart

Oh Man! That was the funniest wedding! It was absolutly crazy! And certain Weasleys need to get over themselves. Very well done.

Reviewer: Believer
Date: 06/10/06 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 9 Autumn Leaves

Your story has a lot of interesting ideas... Fudge getting killed was a really cool plot twist. Nice method of death by the way.

But your story lacks the JKR feel. A lot of the dialog is too American and lacks British terminology. And as a byproduct the characters seem to be out of character. Like, Harry wouldn't tell Hermione he thought she was 'cute'. That's too American... He would say she looked 'nice' or 'smashing'. Also Dennis wouldn't say 'shit'... he'd probably say "Bloody Hell!" It's more British which is the setting of the HP world.

I don't mean to down grade your work... just offering some constructive criticism to make it better.

Reviewer: PottersFire
Date: 06/02/06 9:58
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

That was a wonderful story king! I got a little confused when Hermione shouted 'I lost our baby' as far as I knew she hadn't gotten pregnant the way they were supposed to.

Reviewer: 5589
Date: 04/14/06 15:18
Chapter: Chapter 16 A Crash Course in Quidditch

try saying the title of this chapter 5 times fast

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/15/06 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

I think it is a good story but Harry and Hermione aren't going out, and they are acting like they are? Can u explain please? Besides that it is a good sotry!

Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the nice review! Please remember that this story was concieved (and nearly completed) before HBP came out and so must be considered AU. In my silly little story, Harry and Hermione get legally married without really understanding what they are doing when Hermione starts messing around with spells she has not fully researched. She's a bit stressed out because of all of the murder attempts. Once they are "magically married", they have to make the best of it. Eventually they get engaged and later they go out on a date. Sort of backwards, huh. I made Ron a more mature leader-type. I thought he might grow up after the fight in the MoM (and I had him spend a summer working with dragons). JKR approached things much differently. In HBP, Hermione was much more cautious, Harry was bitter towards Hermione because she was right about not going to the MoM and Ron was a jerk. I have written a post-HBP fic called: "HP and the Needed One" and have sequel to it (WIP) called "The Fifth Horcrux."

Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the nice review! Please remember that this story was concieved (and nearly completed) before HBP came out and so must be considered AU. In my silly little story, Harry and Hermione get legally married without really understanding what they are doing when Hermione starts messing around with spells she has not fully researched. She's a bit stressed out because of all of the murder attempts. Once they are "magically married", they have to make the best of it. Eventually they get engaged and later they go out on a date. Sort of backwards, huh. I made Ron a more mature leader-type. I thought he might grow up after the fight in the MoM (and I had him spend a summer working with dragons). JKR approached things much differently. In HBP, Hermione was much more cautious, Harry was bitter towards Hermione because she was right about not going to the MoM and Ron was a jerk. I have written a post-HBP fic called: "HP and the Needed One" and have sequel to it (WIP) called "The Fifth Horcrux."

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 02/04/06 19:48
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

Wow that was great! Your an amazing writer! Please keep writer. Although it was sad that Harry didn't have a boy. But the kids he have must be amazing witches. (Hermione brain and Harry's strengh, WOW!) I give it a 10000000/10

Author's Response: Thanks, I enjoy these fanficts. It's a way to spend time while waiting for the seventh book.

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 11/26/05 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

Wow I just love you're story..... I think it was the first fan fic I read on this website.... I think I started reading it in May or something.... It is just faboulus(sp?) !!!!! It's my all time favorite!!!!! I'm sorry that it took me such a long time to post a comment but I just signed up a couple of weeks ago and I couldn't find your story... I just love it... What more can I say.... I have retold you're fan fic to all of my friends in school and they also loved it.... You are such a great writer..... You have a gift... Keep on sharing that gift again with us... Please ..PLease write more fantastic stories.... You're humble reader, HermioneJPotter

Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the nice review! JKR has created a wonderful fantasy world and a great set of characters. I don't own them but they sure are fun to play with. I have started writing a sequel to another fic that I wrote called HP and the Needed One. But it's not even close to being ready for posting. Sometimes I daydream about Dumbledore. I wonder what he was up to in 1870 - 1900.

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 11/03/05 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

This is probably my fav H/Hr fan fic!

Author's Response: Hi Ashka! Thanks for the nice review! I had a lot of fun writing it. I guessed wrong about a lot of things: the new Minister of Magic, the DADA instructor, the mechanics of Voldemort's immortality, Hermione's approach (My Hermione was more open in her pursuit of Harry.) and Ron's level of maturity (My Ron is less selfish and more of a leader.) But like I said, I had fun writing it. And it was neat to see Harry using house elves to tail Malfoy in HBP.

Author's Response: Hi Ashka! Thanks for the nice review! I had a lot of fun writing it. I guessed wrong about a lot of things: the new Minister of Magic, the DADA instructor, the mechanics of Voldemort's immortality, Hermione's approach (My Hermione was more open in her pursuit of Harry.) and Ron's level of maturity (My Ron is less selfish and more of a leader.) But like I said, I had fun writing it. And it was neat to see Harry using house elves to tail Malfoy in HBP.

Reviewer: hgjadegirl
Date: 09/05/05 10:48
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

I read it all the way through before reviewing (sorry!) and I have to say that I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10:-)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I had a lot of fun writing E Deus Unum. I'm glad you liked it even though I guessed wrong about a lot of things beginning with Hermione's response to the end of the Harry-Cho affair. In my yarn she chooses to make her feelings towards Harry known. In HBP she was much more cautious. And as poor Ginny found out, Harry might ditch a girlfriend because he loves her! What a catch-22.

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 08/13/05 2:27
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

Wow... Just - wow. That was probably the most amazing, imaginative, ... (cant think of a word cool enough for this fic) fic of all times, and that was the perfect ending. Thank you so much for taking the time it must have took you to write such a wonderful piece of art. I have enjoyed reading it so much. I hope that some time in the future you'll write another!

Author's Response: It's amazing how writing fiction can become such an addictive hobby.

Reviewer: Mermione
Date: 08/12/05 23:32
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

Wow! I lurve happy endings! If you don't have a sequel, write this story in a post HBP version!!! 10/10! Why don't they have an eleven in the Rating box? :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice review! As for a post HBP story, how can Harry find and destroy all of those horcruxes and defeat Voldemort and the Death Eaters and the Dementors, giants, werewolves and inferi? He will need bravery, powerful magic and cleverness. He's got bravery. He's got magic. But he lacks cleverness. To paraphrase his thoughts before the first trial in GOF, to get cleverness I need... Hermione.

Reviewer: VeryFirstMarauderGirl
Date: 08/09/05 0:02
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

That was a wonderful ending! I am expecting a sequel! I'm sad that this story is over. I really loved it! Had me going there with the whole character death only to find out that it was Mouldiebutt! So, I DEMAND A SEQUEL! lol. Luv ya king! ~Alex

Author's Response: Hi VeryFirst, Thanks! I had to warn that a character died even if it was you-know-who. But the death that really drives the story is the death of the new and unnamed character who died in Harry's place.

Reviewer: andyman21
Date: 08/06/05 17:37
Chapter: Chapter 25 The End and The Beginning

Thank you sir, may i have another! A sequel would be wonderful. I was wondering what the title meant? (if anything)

Author's Response: Hi Andyman, Thanks! I really appreciate the kind words. E Dues Unum is Latin and it means "From Two - One". It refers sort of to the union between Harry and Hermione and sort of to ... well ... um... sex. My inspiration is from the motto on U.S. currency E Pluribus Unum which means "from many - one" and refers to the formation of a federal government from 13 states.

Reviewer: allysonpotter
Date: 08/02/05 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

that was so good. i loved it, just loved it. i cried i laughed, i just fellin love with it. lol. it was so sad. im sad that it had to end. but i lokied how ended it. i just loved it. 10000000000000000000000000000000/10 ~Allyson

Author's Response: It sure felt good to get it finished. I started with an idea about how Harry could kill Voldemort, based on the fight with Lord Quirrelldumort in PS. But I didn't want Harry to die! Someone else had to be the sacrifice. The fourth book gave me the idea of the duel in the cage of light and I also was inspired by the solution to the first challenge. (To get past the dragon I need my Firebolt. To do a summoning charm I need Hermione.)

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