Reviews For E Deus Unum
Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 05/26/05 12:40
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Trial

1st review! I really like this story. I'm usually into all fluff because I get bored with the plot lines, but this is really interesting, and it seems like it could actually happen. Also, what does the title mean? Good job, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Cloudybear, Thank you for your encouraging words. I hope that this story helps to while away the time while we wait for real thing. The premise of this story is that Hermione has loved Harry since their third year if not before that. My opinion is that the books are loaded with hints that support the Harry + Hermione ship. There is an excellent review of the signs in OotP that point to a H+Hr ship by Player in Madam Puddifoot’s. I think that the definitive answer to the question: “Who does Hermione love?” is found in chapter 20 of PoA. Hermione is faced with a choice here. Ron is unconscious, has a broken leg and is lying near the edge of the forbidden forest at night. This is a dangerous place for Ron. There is a werewolf lurking nearby and an evil wizard, Peter Pettigrew. Hermione could easily justify staying with Ron to protect him. Instead she chooses to follow Harry to help defend Sirius from a hundred dementors. This is suicide. My conclusion: Hermione would rather die with Harry than live with Ron, or she didn’t think it through. Harry might have that effect on her. I’m not sure that romantic involvement with Harry is in her best interests. If I were her father I would break her wand and wouldn’t let her go back to Hogwarts. And the whole family would move far away. But I expect her family hears less than half of what goes on at Hogwarts. At the end of the fifth book, Harry has gotten over Cho, but Cho might not necessarily be over Harry. She turns red when their eyes meet. I think Harry and Cho could make up quickly, a little forgiveness and they’d be a great couple. Cho is a good flier. She and Harry could get along. Ginny Weasley still has a crush on Harry. Hermione has befriended Ginny like a sister, possibly to keep in the know about H-G developments. The ministry of Magic has officially recognized that Voldemort is back. This is going to make Harry even more of a hero than he was before. My conclusion: young witches will be flirting with Harry by the dozen. This will drive Hermione nuts. Hermione will make her move to attract Harry before his head gets turned by some other girl. Being the intense perfectionist, she will pull out all of the stops. Some readers may think that Hermione’s actions seem a bit out of character, but I would argue that these valedictorian-type girls can be a bit on the edge. E Deus Unum means “Out of two, one.” King

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 05/26/05 10:02
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

Chapter 2, The Trial I so enjoyed seeing Fudge being te sniveling, groveling whiner that he is. Hermione's defense of the crimminals against the death sentences is well within character, as well as her desire not to see the execution. Doesn't mean weakness to me, she doesnt need to see it to prove her bravery. An excellent chapter

Reviewer: hermione4harry
Date: 05/26/05 9:20
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

Wow, that was great and a very good idea! I also never thought of charging the students for trespassing, then again, I think that Cornelius Fudge is going to step down as minister, so there will be no punishment for the group, but your way is great too!

Reviewer: TNT_Angel
Date: 05/25/05 22:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

That was a very good start! Hermione kissed him? Just right out of the blue, KISSED HIM!?! cool. This is actually the first fic i've read that they were charged with trespassing. Interesting, I had'nt even thought of that! Good that Mrs. Figg put Harry to work, I thought all that hard work would have been worth more than clothes, but hey. Fudge seems a bit creepy, telling Hermione to look all hot!? C-R-E-E-P-Y! I really hope he gets replaced in this fic and in the HBP! He's stupid. GOOD STORY THOUGH, please continue writing! Rating-10 ~Leena

Reviewer: stephen
Date: 05/25/05 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

great starting chapter im looking foward tos ee how this story goes please update soon. ill be keepin my eyes on this story its looking very good 10000000000000000000/10

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