Reviews For E Deus Unum
Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 06/19/05 20:19
Chapter: Chapter 8 Summerís End

This particular chapter is very intriguing and has succeeded in drawing me into this fantastic story. I really enjoyed the scene on the train. I believe you played that stupendously with Malfoy and Harry. I am really excited for your next chapter to see how the problem with Hermione, Harry, and Snape plays out. Please keep updating. 10 from me, Sauce. A.

Author's Response: Hi Appelsauce I have always liked trains. Snape is a really rich character but I donít use him very much because I havenít got him figured out. Iím betting that HBP is going to be really scary. Harry has a bunch of dark wizards that want to kill him, and he has to sit in a classroom with their sons. That is really tense. And this polyjuice potion, how do you ever know if the person you see is the person you think you see. Can a parent impersonate their own child? I would think so. Iím guessing that Hermione will have a rough time in HBP, but probably not as rough as what my little story puts her through.

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 06/19/05 10:55
Chapter: Chapter 7 The Trap and the Bait

1st Review! That was so sad, but fabulous of course. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Hi cloudybear JKR puts the screws to Harry in so many ways. I'm using Hermione as a new way of tormenting Harry. Worse things will happen.

Author's Response: Hi cloudybear JKR puts the screws to Harry in so many ways. I'm using Hermione as a new way of tormenting Harry. Worse things will happen.

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 06/17/05 17:30
Chapter: Chapter 6 Young Wizards and Witches Magic Camp

Galloping Gargolyes, what a chapter. From little brats to a little romance, with some mystery mixed in as well. I knew I was correct when I told you that you were twisted, keep up the good work, and don't let the muggles get ya down.

Author's Response: Chapter 7 is in the queue. Horrible things are about to start happening. Harry and Hermione get closer. Ron returns in chapter 8.

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/17/05 12:42
Chapter: Chapter 6 Young Wizards and Witches Magic Camp

Tis story is fricken TWISTED! In a good way... ASnother great chapter! I can't wait for the next one... This is a really original plot! Well done. Loved is as usual 10/10 : )

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/17/05 12:36
Chapter: Chapter 5 The House Elf

Great last two chapters! OMG! why was Hermiones punishment so harsh? I was about to kick Harry so hard when Hermione said I love you and he just STOOD there! Can't wait to read the next chapter! 10/10 : )

Author's Response: In self defense, I have to say that I am not the first author to make an undernourished child-character dress in rags, sleep in a cupboard and work like a slave.

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/17/05 12:29
Chapter: Chapter 3 The White Cliffs of Dover

Great chapter...once again! I like the character Gunny, (do you mind if i call him that?) He is awesome! This was another great chapter. I thought it was fast-paced and well written! 10/10

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/17/05 12:24
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Trial

Another great chapter! Fudge is such a #$%@*...I hate him! I can't believe that plot, it very excellent! Your story is so amesome! I was suprised by Hermione in this chapter, she was more bold but at the same time a little less brave...That sounds crazy but thats the way I took it... I'm so happy you turned me onto your story! Just brilliant! I'm attached....10/10

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 06/17/05 12:18
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

OMG! I love this story a lot! I've always favored Hermione and Harry ships. This was extremely well written and very unique. I've never read a opening chapter like that! Well thought out and clever! I'm adding this to my favorites. Great Job! I'm off to read the next chapter......10/10 : ) -HPotter7

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 06/17/05 10:08
Chapter: Chapter 6 Young Wizards and Witches Magic Camp

Yeah! 1st review. I would just like to say that I spent the last 5 minutes logging in like 12 times so I could review this. Now you know how much I love this story. It's perfect. 10/10 as always.

Reviewer: iwasbornaunicorn
Date: 06/14/05 11:34
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

like itm like it. a good read

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm just having fun with it.

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 06/08/05 0:03
Chapter: Chapter 5 The House Elf

Wow! I give you MAJOR creativity props. Never in a million years would I have thought to write something like that. (that's a compliment fyi) Hermione's punishment seems pretty harsh. What's Harry's deal? She says "I love you" and he just stands there?!? Such a guy. j/k Love this story as usual. Update asap. plznthnx!

Author's Response: In my version of the story, Harry loves Hermione but he is afraid that it would put her in danger. What can he offer her? Grief when Voldemort kills him or life with a killer if he succeeds?

Reviewer: tsina
Date: 06/07/05 9:01
Chapter: Chapter 5 The House Elf

liked it! the story is really enticing to read. i loved this chapter. hermione working as one of the house elves is cool and her tea towl!hehehe..anyway i hope you post the next chapter ASAP...looking forward to it!

Author's Response: There has to be an excuse to undress the leading lady. I didnít invent the idea of naked house elves. I didnít invent the idea of Hermione being interested in elvish welfare. I didnít invent the idea that her elf hat project was a disaster. And I didnít invent the idea that Hermione would stick to a project with a determination bordering on fanaticism. I am just building on JKRís marvelous characters and situations. And my speculations are probably wrong.

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 06/04/05 22:17
Chapter: Chapter 5 The House Elf

I got som'att to say to you... Distracted? distracted indeed. I have told you before my friend, you have a derainged mind, but oh my, I never knew just have far 'round the twist. An excellent chapter, so much better than we mere mortals could have ever dreamt up

Author's Response: You've seen my guess for the next Minister of Magic, Amos Diggory. Amanda Bones would be another good choice. The guy that worries me is the wizard with the bushy mustache that sat next to Dolore Umbridge at Harry's trial. He voted against Harry.

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 06/04/05 21:01
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

Was is Dumbledore who put Hermione in "detention"? I dont know, it just doesnt seem like somthing that Dumblebore would do... It's so mean and sad...

Author's Response: Yes, as it stand it's very harsh. But at this point in the story Harry doesn't have all of the facts yet.

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 06/04/05 14:42
Chapter: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

I love the part about the Mirror of Erised, and a fanfic that I never posted had Harry looking into the mirror and seeing himself w/ Hermione as well. Urg, Now I'm all creeped out by the snake cliff hanger...

Author's Response: Do you think Harry will become the Minister of Magic and have 12 children. Could Madam Trelawney be right on rare occasions?

Reviewer: Potterfan524
Date: 06/02/05 8:47
Chapter: Chapter 4 Drill Instructors

That was a wonderful chapter! I can't wait for an update :)

Author's Response: Hi Potterfan Thanks, I'm working on it. Rough times are coming for a certain character. king

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 05/31/05 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 4 Drill Instructors

gggrrrr! Evil cliffe. This is so good. Please update ASAP.

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 05/31/05 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 4 Drill Instructors

I got som'att to say to you... It seems as our hero is having a very different summer. Mrs Figg is Perfect!! What a hoot, playing laser tag with an old squib. Enough mystery about Hermione let let us know this is an HP FanFic, and summer camp, who would have guessed. And then, at the end, to leave us all hanging with the sound of a snake, you have a clearly derainged mind my friend.

Author's Response: Hi Hagrid51, I have a deranged mind? Thatís funny, my family says the same thing. I am currently writing chapter 15. Chapter 5 was submitted on Tuesday and I am wondering about the delay in posting it. I should increase the rating to PG-13. If the censors balk at chapter 5 theyíll freak out over the rest of it. You just canít have a killer stalking the halls of Hogwarts without a death or two. king

Reviewer: Hagrid51
Date: 05/29/05 0:36
Chapter: Chapter 3 The White Cliffs of Dover

I got som'att to say to ya... Very good, wandless magic, a vacation and a mystery ending, who could ask for more? Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 05/27/05 22:04
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Trial

Wow! That's a really good theory. I agree, and it's weird because I'm reading PoA right now (for the like 8th time). I'm not quite that far, but when I get to that scene, I'll be sure to pay attention. I feel so special. You wrote me like another novel. I get the title now, thanks. Again, can't wait for the next update.

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