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Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/11/06 18:59
Chapter: one-shot

For a one-shot, this was pretty good. I thought it was all very cute. Some lovely work here. The implication that there was SEamus and Lavender...how did I guess they would end up together at some point? Lily seems like such a cute kid. I really like your variation of words. Instead of overusing the word "said" you have used a variety, and I really like that. It keeps things from sounding too choppy or repetitive, you know? The ending was all right...but I thought it could have been longer because it seemed a bit like it was just chopped off. Overall, though, nice portrayal of Harry and Ginny as parents!

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 01/26/06 19:03
Chapter: one-shot

That was so gosh darn cute! I definetly agree that if Harry and Ginny were to have a kid, her name would be "Lily". I gotta develop a story about that....Anyway. Great story. I don't know if I already mentioned this, but you are on my favorites list!

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 01/14/06 21:26
Chapter: one-shot

That was soooo cute! I've read like three of your one-shots now and I love them all! You're a fantastic writer.

Reviewer: EmeraldFire
Date: 12/01/05 10:48
Chapter: one-shot

Great story :)

Reviewer: Tina101
Date: 08/28/05 19:20
Chapter: one-shot

wow, u did a GREAT job 4 a challenge. u have some skills, nobody's challenged me, but i know i would flip!!!!! i LOVE ur stories!!!!!!

Reviewer: bigD103310
Date: 08/16/05 11:59
Chapter: one-shot

Hey, this is a very good storyline. You could've lengthened it out a little bit, i'd still say you could put a coninuation out of it. But good job nonetheless. I really enjoy reading your work. -Dom

Reviewer: Bella Tidus
Date: 08/01/05 18:28
Chapter: one-shot

Oh.... Very cute! Maybe you could do a few more chapters on them..... I loved it!

Reviewer: ginnyluvsharry90
Date: 07/29/05 21:12
Chapter: one-shot

luv it the best yet!

Reviewer: ginnyluvsharry90
Date: 05/27/05 15:59
Chapter: one-shot

awww it so cute i luv the part bout their daughter!!!! one ur best fanfics yet !!! *10* ^_^

Reviewer: Ginevra_Weasley
Date: 05/27/05 0:20
Chapter: one-shot

excellent! as always! sooo cute and sweet!

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 05/25/05 13:25
Chapter: one-shot

That was fun, you did a good job, and I like Ginny. Kissing him. for what she wanted to do.

Reviewer: ilovehpfanfic
Date: 05/24/05 20:52
Chapter: one-shot

oh!!! i loved it! it was really great! plz update soon! i just added u to my favs!!! keep up the great work!!!!!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 05/24/05 6:45
Chapter: one-shot

Ohhhhhh, I just love that fluffy stuff.

Reviewer: Sunshine1313
Date: 05/23/05 17:23
Chapter: one-shot

I loved it. It was soooooooo cute and sooooooo sweet! 10!

Reviewer: madfoot
Date: 05/23/05 17:04
Chapter: one-shot

very nice! Can you read my story? (Ski Club)

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