For a one-shot, this was pretty good. I thought it was all very cute. Some lovely work here. The implication that there was SEamus and Lavender...how did I guess they would end up together at some point? Lily seems like such a cute kid. I really like your variation of words. Instead of overusing the word "said" you have used a variety, and I really like that. It keeps things from sounding too choppy or repetitive, you know? The ending was all right...but I thought it could have been longer because it seemed a bit like it was just chopped off. Overall, though, nice portrayal of Harry and Ginny as parents!
That was so gosh darn cute! I definetly agree that if Harry and Ginny were to have a kid, her name would be "Lily". I gotta develop a story about that....Anyway. Great story. I don't know if I already mentioned this, but you are on my favorites list!
That was soooo cute! I've read like three of your one-shots now and I love them all! You're a fantastic writer.
Great story :)
wow, u did a GREAT job 4 a challenge. u have some skills, nobody's challenged me, but i know i would flip!!!!! i LOVE ur stories!!!!!!
Hey, this is a very good storyline. You could've lengthened it out a little bit, i'd still say you could put a coninuation out of it. But good job nonetheless. I really enjoy reading your work. -Dom
Oh.... Very cute! Maybe you could do a few more chapters on them..... I loved it!
luv it the best yet!
awww it so cute i luv the part bout their daughter!!!! one ur best fanfics yet !!! *10* ^_^
excellent! as always! sooo cute and sweet!
That was fun, you did a good job, and I like Ginny. Kissing him. for what she wanted to do.
oh!!! i loved it! it was really great! plz update soon! i just added u to my favs!!! keep up the great work!!!!!
Ohhhhhh, I just love that fluffy stuff.
I loved it. It was soooooooo cute and sooooooo sweet! 10!
very nice! Can you read my story? (Ski Club)