Nice! Is snape in desguise? (sorry for my spelling)
Good but don't you think that McGonagal is a little smarter than that?
Wow! Very good.
Wow! Nice writing! By the way ppl check out my account page im a beta and i need to get working on a story here!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow, Harry is really pulling for it now!!!!!!!! Awesome writing!
Neville needs to cool it or he'll turn out like Percy, and that's scary.
Ok, now Harry needs to get his butt in gear and go after Ginny.(yelling at Characters) Geez people get with it!
(smirking) Nice but Ginny needs to pounce on it or Harry is going to go with someone else (not very likely)
Very good but why is Harry so afraid of Ginny? I mean he likes her!
Funny, Fred and George should watch their back with thier sister.
Very good writing here. Keep it up!
I was releaved that I finished your story so i could peasefully go to bed. But now I learned there is a sequel and I have to keep reading.
The story is in lack for a better word WOW.
And if you would excuse me, I have a sequel to read :)
Thought I point out a minor "error" in your story.
Although it neglects OotP and HBP (which is actually refreshin because we have Sirius back :) ) I can't help pointing out that Ginny's birthday is after Harry his birthday. So Harry would be 18 before Ginny would turn 17 (11 aug).
On the rest, I think you should receive another review from me. But I can tell now that I am enjoying it very much.
Excellent story. I would never have been able to think up of all that in my non creative mind.
You are an extremely talented writer who has a gift for developing plots with subtlety, instead of the ever-popular 'drop an Oxford unabridged dictionary including slang and common foreign words on the head of your reader' approach. Throughout this whole story I have been captivated and entertained. I have only one minor criticism: A highly embarrassing yet highly amusing illustration in your clever Dr. Zog book has been mentioned several times throughout the story. I have reached chapter twenty-two and you have not yet revealed what it is. The same old line gets old without new information, and I for one am desperately curious as to what it is. Before I go, I have to say that you are an exceptionally gifted writer and that I hope to read many more fics by you. Oh, one last thing: You can never use too much fluff. As I am browsing the Harry/Ginny romance section, that is exactly what I am looking for!
i feel sorry for charlie
was it the girl malfoy went to see? in regards to the monty python i mean
This was a very good story!