I love this story. I have read it like 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 times, and everytime I like more and more 100/10.
I like the ending. Very different than any other story and I like it. You're a really good writer and I like your stories.
That was awesome! I thought it was neat that you brought all three generations, even one we haven't seen yet, together in one story!
Ha! That's funny! Deja vu! I would be so freaked out. That's great how you did that. I love it, I love it. "Interested in playing Quidditch during your time here." That's funny. This is great.
very very cute!!!!
Aww very clever and very cute. I really liked how you continued to Harry's son! Well done!
Very clever and sweet. Nice work.
I love it ! I love it ! I absolutely love it ! My favorite part :
"Dumbledore watched as Lily Evans gave away her heart to a boy that had been waiting for her all along. "
You are a genius! Write more one shots like that!!
I loved it!!! Well done!
I loved your story! Continuity throughout the years. It was fabulous. I don't usually read one-shots but came upon your story in a game of tag. Thanks for the wonderful read.
i hearted it. dats so cute:P adam potter 8D lolz aww i wish i cud rite like that:P i heart like all of ur fixx lolz :P:P *IM UR GROUPIEE!* rite more:D
Perfect! I loved the ending! "Do you have to do that?" "Yes." Genius! The squeeing is going to overwhelm me!
i luv this story and i luv it even more coz its goy my name in it: Nelson, Shannon.” but my last names not Nelson anyways 9/10
I loved it.... Pre-HBP im guessing... it was interesting
That wasn't half bad...I really liked that. Nice job.
The story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet. I loved it. I got a friend of mine to read it, and she loved it to. This story totaly earns a 10/10.
OMG, soooo sweet! Definately going under my favorites! I give it a full 10!
I really liked this story!! It was so original, a great new way of portraying it. I also loved how you envolved all three generations - the ending was brilliant!! Perhaps there could have been a little more detail in some places, but overall, very good!!
I really liked how you connected lily/james to harry/ginny. It was a really cute story and it made me think that both James and Harry fell for a redhead :-) I also liked the fact that it was from dumbledore's view...
Aww, absolutely sweet... and cute.I loved it. The only think I didn't like that it was sort of rushed.More detail would have helped it, too.