Reviews For Sixth Year
Reviewer: ghetto_dumbledore
Date: 03/09/05 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 20

That was brilliant! Your discription of the event was elegant, and sincere. You are truly amazing, what more can I say, you're a literary genius!

Reviewer: nilole
Date: 03/09/05 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 20

i think that was my favorite chapter yet! GREAT job... what an imagination you've got! :)

Reviewer: phoenixfeather
Date: 03/09/05 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 20

OMG so good, so amazing, POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 03/08/05 22:10
Chapter: Chapter 20

ahhhhhhh....great chapter!!! I hope that everything worked out okay and that Harry was able to severe the link! When Harry kissed Ron's cheek it was funny!! Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: fourcorners
Date: 03/08/05 18:18
Chapter: Chapter 20

I love it! Finally Harry can stop passing out all the time ;) Keep up the good work, and I agree, 100/100

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion
Date: 03/08/05 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 20

sweet. So i guess that means that all this passing out and the pain throbs are going to be over now eh? Well thats good. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D 10

Reviewer: littlemissperfect
Date: 03/08/05 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 20

absolutely fabulous! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 03/08/05 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 20

Wow - I could visualize what you had written about the thick strand of blackness and the golden ball of light. It seems like Harry severed the connection, with some help from his friends. Looking forward to your next chapter. (BTW - you are on "favorites" list.)

Reviewer: elderbreath
Date: 03/08/05 8:45
Chapter: Chapter 20

You-re description of harry's journey to the core of the magic connection was fantastic I really could imagine it! Readers are right though be careful of spelling, tense consistency and the Americanisms(!)

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 03/08/05 7:16
Chapter: Chapter 20

Fantastic chapter albeit with a few minor spelling mistakes and americanisms- but I'll let you off for them since your description over-compensates! Just so you know we brits don't really say the 'week drug on'! The word drug is only ever used in context to substances illegal or otherwise! Usually we'd say 'dragged'! Like i say everything else was pretty much spot on and I felt that we were really following Harry's journey through his body to the isolated anger strand! Keep up the good work and make sure you keep an eye on your verb tenses and adjective agreements.... the dark hair(ed) man!! etc ;)

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 03/08/05 5:36
Chapter: Chapter 20

No one has such an imaganation as you. Very good job.

Reviewer: BelindaM
Date: 03/08/05 4:59
Chapter: Chapter 20

Awesome - I loved the suspense and the fact that everyone there helped him. You really have a way to make a body feel they are actually in the room - jk eat your heart out. I am looking forward to seeing where you are now going to go with this story. Not worth a 10/10 anymore - more like 100/100.

Reviewer: padfootprongs4eva
Date: 03/08/05 2:03
Chapter: Chapter 20

awwwww what a cute ending. i really want some action though. there hasnt been much and i think were do for some. please update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: parangjim
Date: 03/07/05 23:03
Chapter: Chapter 20

Always a pleasure to read your chapters. It may have been a mistake to sever the tie, but it had to be done sooner or later. keep writing!

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 03/07/05 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 20

A super chapter!! I hope Harry's efforts paid off. The way you described what Harry was doing to sever the link Voldmort had with Harry was terrific! I could actually see it happen! Brilliant! 10+++++

Reviewer: loonypadfoot
Date: 03/07/05 16:59
Chapter: Chapter 19

puppiluv, i think that %#&@# stnds for the bad word of "femal dog"... anyways, Terri, awesome story as always, just try to update a bit faster... ... ... ***choughcough ***coughwouldlikemorestorycough*** teehee

Reviewer: puppiluv
Date: 03/07/05 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 19

update you %#&@# I have no idea what that means! i mean, what does %#&@# stand for?!!!

Reviewer: mstiquerose
Date: 03/07/05 14:34
Chapter: Chapter 19

Awesome story! Keep up the great work! :)

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 03/07/05 13:51
Chapter: Chapter 19

wow, i just finishd reading this after reading the prequel, and its amazing, bloody brilliant!

Reviewer: Emma4Irish
Date: 03/06/05 23:10
Chapter: Chapter 19

Okay so wierd. I've been reading your story for a long while now, and I read this chapter a while back but I never reviewed! So here I go... Awesome!

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