everything goes black alot for Harry, doesnt it, like every other chapter, y does he get hurt so much - i mean he doesnt get hurt thsi s much in the books, but i guess that now that Voldemort is back... well, good capter and try to update a bit faster!!!
no a cliffy, rly awesome, but please update ASAP!!!
And another chapter whitch you end with "all went black" and Harry faint... next chapter please!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON THIS IS MY FAVOURITE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good chapter. I think that you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the good work.
Wonderful ideas! i love your writing. please try to control grammar, syntax, agreement, etc. a bit better.
no more Nagini!! yay!! I don't like snakes. im definitely looking forward to reading more
Awesome chapter! I loved it! Please post again soon.
I am glad you fixed it. Please update soon!
Awesome chapter! Update again soon please!
Great story so far. Can't wait for you to update!
seriously, 'ole voldy needs ta think of a new home! please update soon!!
Voldie REALLY needs new headquarters.
Nice, looking forward to seeing how this works out!
were the four that were spying like prevoiously expelled or something, i am seriousky confused abot why snape was his former head of house, did the four spying like quit schoool or something - i t would be nice if you would answer my review, bcuz as i read more and more it makes me even more and moree confused, i have tried back tracking in the story as to where they would leave, but i cant find the spot!!!!!! i like ur story, but u should: a) update sooner and b) answer questions reader may have, it only takes about a minute, minus getting online and all!!!!! i think that in the beginng Remus was overr protective and sapy-ish , now you have taken him out of tyhe story copletly!!!!!! Remus us always sick, or something - it is a bit confusing, truthfully , i think that u should have him in the story or not at all!!!! but then again, he needs to be in the story because he is the god father and all - so nevermind, awesome story and just keep writing - and plz answer my questions!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, don't mean to confuse you at all, I have been trying to concentrate on writing. Goyle and Crabbe withdrew from school when their fathers were killed over the summer. Draco did not come back to school after his little stunt at Christmas that almost killed Severus, Harry, Ron and Hermione. And Remus is sick every time there is a full moon - curled up in his room as a werewold after drinking his Wolfsbane potion. Thanks for reading, Terri
I'm enjoying this story as much as your last one. You really try to keep things "realistic" in the Potter universe and you always keep your characters true to JKR's original. Can't wait to read more!
Brilliant! You're doing fantastically well, love the plot twists. update soon!!!
great story!!!! you are a very talented writer, and i feel like im reading jo's books!! great chapter and update soon!! this is one of the best stories on this site i give you a 10!
Purfect. It's some of the best work I've ever read. Please update soon.
igotbanned - but alas, when harry had his first dream in this chapter and dumbledore came, remus was still recovering from the full moon. the only explanation of remus' presence is thhat a new day has transpired and he has now recovered from werewolf transformation. also noticed the goyle hufflrpuuf/ravenclaw discrepancy. great chapter please update soon. very soon!