Reviews For Sixth Year
Reviewer: loonypadfoot
Date: 01/30/05 12:40
Chapter: Chapter15

everything goes black alot for Harry, doesnt it, like every other chapter, y does he get hurt so much - i mean he doesnt get hurt thsi s much in the books, but i guess that now that Voldemort is back... well, good capter and try to update a bit faster!!!

Reviewer: littlemissperfect
Date: 01/30/05 12:35
Chapter: Chapter15

no a cliffy, rly awesome, but please update ASAP!!!

Reviewer: Black_dragon
Date: 01/30/05 10:57
Chapter: Chapter15

And another chapter whitch you end with "all went black" and Harry faint... next chapter please!!!!

Reviewer: SnitchSeeker
Date: 01/30/05 4:06
Chapter: Chapter15


Reviewer: School owl
Date: 01/30/05 1:04
Chapter: Chapter15

Good chapter. I think that you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: parangjim
Date: 01/30/05 0:38
Chapter: Chapter15

Wonderful ideas! i love your writing. please try to control grammar, syntax, agreement, etc. a bit better.

Reviewer: LisaK
Date: 01/29/05 22:55
Chapter: Chapter15

no more Nagini!! yay!! I don't like snakes. im definitely looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: redhead
Date: 01/29/05 22:02
Chapter: Chapter15

Awesome chapter! I loved it! Please post again soon.

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 01/29/05 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 14

I am glad you fixed it. Please update soon!

Reviewer: redhead
Date: 01/28/05 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 14

Awesome chapter! Update again soon please!

Reviewer: Darth Voldemort
Date: 01/26/05 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 14

Great story so far. Can't wait for you to update!

Reviewer: OCDboutHarry1234
Date: 01/25/05 17:47
Chapter: Chapter 14

seriously, 'ole voldy needs ta think of a new home! please update soon!!

Reviewer: ginny15
Date: 01/24/05 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 14

Voldie REALLY needs new headquarters.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 01/24/05 5:19
Chapter: Chapter 14

Nice, looking forward to seeing how this works out!

Reviewer: loonypadfoot
Date: 01/23/05 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 14

were the four that were spying like prevoiously expelled or something, i am seriousky confused abot why snape was his former head of house, did the four spying like quit schoool or something - i t would be nice if you would answer my review, bcuz as i read more and more it makes me even more and moree confused, i have tried back tracking in the story as to where they would leave, but i cant find the spot!!!!!! i like ur story, but u should: a) update sooner and b) answer questions reader may have, it only takes about a minute, minus getting online and all!!!!! i think that in the beginng Remus was overr protective and sapy-ish , now you have taken him out of tyhe story copletly!!!!!! Remus us always sick, or something - it is a bit confusing, truthfully , i think that u should have him in the story or not at all!!!! but then again, he needs to be in the story because he is the god father and all - so nevermind, awesome story and just keep writing - and plz answer my questions!!!

Author's Response: Sorry, don't mean to confuse you at all, I have been trying to concentrate on writing. Goyle and Crabbe withdrew from school when their fathers were killed over the summer. Draco did not come back to school after his little stunt at Christmas that almost killed Severus, Harry, Ron and Hermione. And Remus is sick every time there is a full moon - curled up in his room as a werewold after drinking his Wolfsbane potion. Thanks for reading, Terri

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 01/23/05 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 14

I'm enjoying this story as much as your last one. You really try to keep things "realistic" in the Potter universe and you always keep your characters true to JKR's original. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ghetto_dumbledore
Date: 01/23/05 17:39
Chapter: Chapter 14

Brilliant! You're doing fantastically well, love the plot twists. update soon!!!

Reviewer: hermionestwin
Date: 01/23/05 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 14

great story!!!! you are a very talented writer, and i feel like im reading jo's books!! great chapter and update soon!! this is one of the best stories on this site i give you a 10!

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 01/23/05 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 14

Purfect. It's some of the best work I've ever read. Please update soon.

Reviewer: uea1
Date: 01/23/05 13:22
Chapter: Chapter 14

igotbanned - but alas, when harry had his first dream in this chapter and dumbledore came, remus was still recovering from the full moon. the only explanation of remus' presence is thhat a new day has transpired and he has now recovered from werewolf transformation. also noticed the goyle hufflrpuuf/ravenclaw discrepancy. great chapter please update soon. very soon!

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