wow... I love this whole evisaging the magic idea you've got going on here. It really shows just how powerful Harry is becoming. Also 'obsidian' is my new word for the month-- I've never heard of that one before so I'm going to try and use it somewhere descriptively in my story. Not sure a situation like the one you described though will end up in there but I'll certainly log it my memory bank for future reference!!!
Chapter 18 coming up. Thank you to whoever stated the Then/Than problem. I guess I have been grading Essays a bit too long. Lol, dang kids... won't you ever learn? *eye roll* Anyways, I am in the midst of editing chapter 18, so it should be out very soon! Have a nice day, igotbannedfroma2k
Amazing Chapter! Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Anothwer terrific chapter. Thanks and write another soon.
AAAHHHHH!!!!!! Cliffhanger! Noooooooo! That was brilliant! I can't wait to see what they say. hurry hurry hurry get that next chapter up please!!!
wat do mean by all hell breaking loose- wouldnt they like the idea - or do the portraits start talking amonst themselves??? u just lluv evil cliffies, dont ya???? well - update soon!!!
hmmm... I fell a little behind with this story I have to admit but now I've caught up again I thought I'd review! It's a great story and like some one else said earlier, the whole idea of how to get rid of the dark magic was well thought out. I only have one really niggling thing to say (and I'm sorry but your beta must have missed this one but it's not something major, just something which bugs me personally) when you say more/less it follows with THAN not THEN!!! Arrrghhh! Sorry, I feel so much better now I've got that off my chest- you did only say it once though so you're forgiven and everything else was perfect!! Just ignore me or tell me to go away!!
This is a great story and i cant wait for u to write more i have read the first part and now this and its great keep it up
hah! love the last line... can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh!!!!Update soon cuz u put a scarey and evil cliff hanger , what hell broke lose!?ArGh!!!!!!!please update soon!
Great chapter!! You really have to update soon.
Ok, see, now you HAVE to update sooner!! Cus I don't think I can wait very long for the next chapter..great chapter!
What do you mean by "then all hell broke loose?" I don't get it...Is Snape mad or did Harry's scar hurt again?? I just don't know.....oh well, I guess I will just have to wait til the next update....so hurry!!!!!! ^_^
wow that was really good, i really like your idea of how to get rid of harry's pain, -very creative and well thought out. Amazing job, as always and thanks for updating so quickly!!!!
great chapter. keep up the good work!
