Whoa great chapter! You bring out Snape's character very nicely
It's as good as your others chapters. You have a great view on the books. Keep up the good work.
WOW! Absolutely amazing! Please keep on writing1
luv this fic! but about this chapter, it's in the wrong place! you have chapter 7, chapter 9, and chapter 8! very bamboozling! but anyway, luv it! P.S. UPDATE SOON!!!! luv, puppiluv
about your whole story, I luv it! but i think maybe you should do some more editing. for examle, what does the spell EXPELLIAMUS do? i found alot of typos in your story, and I think that your great beta, who is my cuzn, and calls herself a great editor, should go over heryour story again. but it is a greeat story, and has a great theme and plot!! luv, puppiluv
that was very good, and the scar idea is extremely plausible adn well thought out. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see if it works. Update ASAP!!!
That was truly magnificent! I hope it will be possible for Harry to remove the Dark Magic from his scar. Please update soon!
great idea with the magic strands!brilliant chapter!
whoa.. cool!! ^^ Post next chapie soon!:D
Love the chapter! One question. How is Snape going to spy on Voldemort now?
A very creative possible solution to a very pressing problem. Enjoying your story!
Love it! This whole story is great! keep on writing.
ohh exceelllent!!! that was pretty cool with the whole dark mark removing.. hurry up with the next chapter
that was really awesome how u had Harry's magic take away the dark mark, it's good that Snape gets some relief!! i really liked this chapter!! i can't wait to see if Harry can take away the pain. UPdate soon!!
I have been reading your story for quite a time and I just want to let you know how amazing your imagination and writing style is! Absolutely brilliant!! Please update ASAP!!!!
:-) you will never cease to amaze me. I hope to see chapter 19 in my mail bow soon...
Absolutely brilliant as always! Keep Up!
Great, like all of your chapters. Keep it up.
Awesome. Your development of Harrys magic is fantastic - and using it to remove Snapes dark mark so so effective. I cant wait for the next installment. Yet again - 10/10.
