Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 07/03/05 0:54
Chapter: Chapter Four

Nooo!!! Harry might Hate Hermione! No your so evil, and i luv it! I love cliff hangers, love writing them [;-)] luv reading them!!! You could have said somehting like "a change came over his face as he looked at Hermione standing in font of him", and that could have meant either good or bad... but most likely bad... but at least then we would have known!!

Bah, I'm just a mess of ramblings! ~Lurid*

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 07/03/05 0:48
Chapter: Chapter Three

Aww! How great would it be if Harry had true feelings for Mione? Come to think of it, it wold be great isf i had a guy with true feelings for ME..~Lurid*

PS another awesome chapter!

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 07/03/05 0:35
Chapter: Chapter Two

Hi! It's steph again, sorry it took so long to get my arse into gear! I've been writintg LOTS and LOTS of chapters, and am happy to see you have been too! Chapter 6 just got accepted so, yeah if you'd like, check it out!

This chapter really moved me. I love H/H rmances, but can't help feeling sory for Ron when Harry tells him he revealed his secret to Mione FIRST. poor guy! 10+

Reviewer: Black_Swan
Date: 07/01/05 8:03
Chapter: Chapter One

why do you people always have to have a cliffe its not fair so update soon and don't make me suffer

Reviewer: iuli12
Date: 06/30/05 20:58
Chapter: Chapter Four

GREAT chapter!!! i love the drama. i can't wait to see harry's reaction!! plz, plz, plz, update ASAP!!!! i really am dying here!!! 10++++++++++++++++

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 06/30/05 20:28
Chapter: Chapter One

EURGH!!! I've been waiting FOREVER for chappie 4, and it was good, until the cliffhanger of death and dispair! *Sigh* Ah well, cant wait for chapter five!

Reviewer: americana_89
Date: 06/30/05 18:01
Chapter: Chapter Four

No, you can't stop there! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!! I just want to add that your writing is wonderful, I get that feeling that you get when you read the books...I can't describe it, but I hope you know what I mean. And hardly any spelling or grammar errors either, it's great! Although it's quite confusing sometimes with the number of empty rows...sometimes one, sometimes two, and you don't really know when it's a different scene. Anyways - you're a really talented writer, please update soon!! 10/10!

Reviewer: laughypunky23
Date: 06/30/05 10:42
Chapter: Chapter Three

awww.. i love this story!

Reviewer: googliebear
Date: 06/28/05 17:09
Chapter: Chapter Three

omga!!! please update asap!! this rox

Reviewer: Superbeffie
Date: 06/28/05 1:56
Chapter: Chapter Three

Oh man, it should be illegal to post these half finished. Please hurry this drives me crazy!!!!! Update SOON!

Author's Response: LOL Sorry guys! The next chapter is being validated right now! :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: king
Date: 06/27/05 22:58
Chapter: Chapter Three

Good story. But this cliffhanger! Why should Dumbledore care about Harry's love life? Please update soon.

Reviewer: fawkes411
Date: 06/12/05 23:04
Chapter: Chapter One

Hurry up and write some more:P

Reviewer: dan800
Date: 06/07/05 15:25
Chapter: Chapter Three

this story is so good. plez update!:)

Reviewer: youngwriter16
Date: 06/05/05 10:57
Chapter: Chapter Three

i am loving this story pleez update soon i wanna kno wht happens with dumbledore.

Reviewer: Potterfan524
Date: 06/02/05 7:54
Chapter: Chapter Three

That was a great chapter :) I have really loved this story so far! I can't wait to find out what happens with Dumbledor!

Reviewer: danielrichard
Date: 05/31/05 12:15
Chapter: Chapter Three

you are soooo great a writter, I am dying to find out what happens with dumbledore, and what hermione will do

Reviewer: padfoot1321
Date: 05/31/05 10:39
Chapter: Chapter One

this is very good

Reviewer: blahblah
Date: 05/28/05 16:00
Chapter: Chapter Two

nice story i likee rating 10/10

Reviewer: padfoot1321
Date: 05/28/05 9:49
Chapter: Chapter One

i think this story is the best from what i have read

Reviewer: Potterfan524
Date: 05/27/05 8:56
Chapter: Chapter Two

This is a great story!! It is a very easy story to read, very nice flow :) Please update soon :) 10/10

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