This is a nice way to tie up the story. JKR's characterization of Ron makes him more self centered and jealous than your fic. A lot of the R/Hr shippers say that H/Hr shippers portray Ron badly but I think we actually tend to make him a better and more loyal friend to Harry than JKR does. I can't imagine the Ron of HBP being helpful in bringing Harry closer to Hermione even if they both asked him to do so.
This story was soooo good!!! YOu really needt o write a new one soon!! YOu are a very good writer!!!
Wow I just loved the end chapter... Ron is such a genious sometimes... L.O.L... Please write more stories like that... You are an awesome writer...
That was funny. I love the Ron/Luna pairing, and Ron's genius. very funny and fitting end to the story!
This is a wonderfull story, EXCEPT: "One born in September of the same year," Hermione was born in September of the PREVIOUS year. If she had been born AFTER Sept. 1 of Harry's year she'd have been in Ginny's class.
Author's Response: i know, i caught that one after HBP came out, but well, I can't change it now. Anyways! I always thought kids in the same year were born the same year
YOu really need to write again soon!!! I really like the hole plot of this story its very interesting!!! Good job
this chapter was really good but we all no she loves him and i dnt think its an act wif harry either!!!
I Like this first chapter!!! Keep it up
Awesome story I totally love it, it's just I have been waiting really long for an up-date. I'm sorry of I spund whiney!
I read this story a long time ago but for some reason I didn't review (login problems, maybe???) Anyways, I've been checking for updates ever since, cuz this story is great!! Although various characters might be a bit OOC...but I love Harry when he's all cuddly, and Hermione's so much more human than in the books! Okay I won't say that, I think she's way better in HBP after all. Now I went rambling again, when all I wanted to say was that this story is bloody brilliant and I want you to update, NOW! =P
It was very good. :) I hope you write more on it.
I have truly enjoyed reading this. I have always wanted to see Harry and Hermione get together and the love potion was a great addition. I can't wait for the next installment.
I have truly enjoyed reading this. I have always wanted to see Harry and Hermione get together and the love potion was a great addition. I can't wait for the next installment.
This Story was really good! I can't wait to read more!
Hate give a bad review but u started off the story good with that crazy parvati but now its gone a bit dramitic
Author's Response: Thanks for the input. Like I said, I did put two ideas together. The idea about the extended prophecy was supposed to be a whole other story, then I decided to add them together. I had only planned to write a short fic about the love potion, but, oh well!
Excellent story. I think Ron mght be a bit more jealous but still excellent. All it would take for Harry to pair up with Hermione is a little nudge in the right direction. The love potion is a great gimmick.
Great chapter!!!! a little different than i expected but ...... GREAT none the less. PLZ update soon!! i can't wait to read to read what happens next!! 10++++++++
Eeeeek I want more!! This story is great, it feels so realistic!! Please update soon!
This is a really good fic. You have a really good storyline going here, I hope Harry doesn't hate Hermione! Please update soon!
