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Reviews For Leap of Faith

Name: GoF_Lover (Signed) · Date: 05/21/06 5:04 · For: Destiny
*snif* why counldnt un let them live!!!!!!! but gd storey!!


Name: NaturalSlytherin7 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/06 20:59 · For: Destiny
is it an actual song? if so by who? I love the story


Name: GoF_Lover (Signed) · Date: 05/06/06 13:24 · For: Destiny
nice storey *snif* so *sniff* sad


Name: kelri33 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/06 21:57 · For: Destiny
That is a really good story i love it. Its the best one i have read so far!!


Name: Zubz2004 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/06 12:45 · For: Destiny
Ah, I see...The last 'poem' is in fact a song. Sorry, my mistake. It's a nice touch to the ending of the fanfiction especially as the name of the song is the same as that of this fanfiction. I think you should write something or other in your other's note which tells the reader that it's in fact a song and it's by Michelle Branch like, 'Lyrics from "Leap of Faith" by Michelle Branch!' Anyway, it doesn't really make that much of a difference. Keep up the good work!


Name: Zubz2004 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/06 12:33 · For: Destiny
Hmm...Quite an interesting fanfiction but I think your Draco was extremely out of character; you did not explain well the reason for his changing, why on earth he would suddenly like Hermione is not touched upon at all. Also, I think the psychiatrist idea, though quite interesting, is not only unrealistic but rather pointless. First of all, I don't think wizards actually go into psychiatry or psychology and all such subjects and your rather rash idea of using one simply for Draco was rather defective. You have not explained the idea well and you seem to only have touched upon it, using it for only Draco's relationship with his parents, particularly his father, and then not continuing that subplot or having Hermione or any other students go to him, assuming that none have otherwise you would have included something about it when talking of Harry or Hermione, assuming that I am not wrong and have forgotten that you have done so. If this is the case, sorry, but I'd rather you have a fanfiction with a good plot rather than a rather weak and unrealistic one. Also, using the Romeo&Juliet-style ending was rather a bad choice; many fanfictions include and ending like this and not many author pull it off, leaving the ending rather feeble. I did quite like the idea of Ron and though at first I thought it very unrealistic that he would abuse Hermione, his being under the Imperius Curse turns it right around and is a nice addition to the fanfiction. What I also quite liked was the poems near the end; they make the ending seem very romantic and I really liked the final poem. However, you must remember that poems do not necessarily have to rhyme and at times rhyming can make a poem look rather immature and even a bit stupid. That said, I have to say that I have enjoyed this fanfiction even though it isn't the best I have read. You have a good writing style and use just the right amount of detail but I think you do need to develop quite a bit on the description of emotion which was only portrayed quite strongly in the scenes when Draco had left her. Good job! Keep it up, both the fanfictions and the poetry! You have real potential... :)


Name: zestylicious (Signed) · Date: 02/13/06 17:02 · For: Destiny
OMGSHh howw sadd... woww.. veryyy nicely written tho i loveedddd it. and it was great how the chapters were sooo short!


Name: KoolGirl (Signed) · Date: 12/06/05 19:28 · For: Destiny
Indeed! I liked it a lot.


Name: fan fic writer (Signed) · Date: 12/04/05 9:37 · For: The dream
I BLOODY HATE THAT ENDING, IT WAS A GREAT STORY AND U RUINED IT BY KILLING THEM BOTH OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: eyelovedraco (Signed) · Date: 10/10/05 12:22 · For: Destiny
hahahahahahhahahahah!!! i thought everything was very sad until the last part. SINGING BEFORE DYING is soooo funny!


Name: Muggles R Us (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 22:21 · For: The dream
Wow, like Romeo and Juliet all over again! What I wanted to know was that, the song in the story did u write that, cause its really good, something really sad, but bittersweet at the same time, but it was good! You should write a book of poems. Hopefully when I finish my story you will like it as well!


Name: abnormalyblonde (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/05 19:05 · For: Destiny
OmG i was crying i mean crying i couldnt even see ... my bros asked me wat my problem was i said i was reading the story i criend the most with hermione... all the stress i also thought that Lucious wrote the note but ROn did i was bout to hurt him HOW RUDE!!! I am strating to dislike Ron nowthe thing only goes to 10 but I give you higher then the highest number on the earth it was great...i was gonna ask for a sequel but they died and i am sooooo sad i loved that story omg i am crying readin this...tears are staining my face...lol bye Blondie


Name: lucypevensie (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 20:22 · For: Destiny
wow i was wondering why ron was doing that junk. . .anyway good story a little fluffy but that's why it's in romance right? a little angsty but hey that's R and J for ya or should i say D and H


Name: lucypevensie (Signed) · Date: 04/11/05 20:21 · For: Destiny
wow i was wondering why ron was doing that junk. . .anyway good story a little fluffy but that's why it's in romance right? a little angsty but hey that's R and J for ya or should i say D and H


Name: Lex_Malfoy (Signed) · Date: 03/28/05 15:59 · For: Destiny
(i know this is a little late 2 review..) :( that was sad! it kinda reminds me of Romeo and Juliet at the end... *tear* awww, that was sad! i almost cried from the verse at the end... wah :(


Name: myne (Signed) · Date: 01/26/05 23:11 · For: Destiny
That was so sad, but it was a really good story.


Name: tomfeltonzfine12 (Signed) · Date: 01/22/05 16:47 · For: Destiny
oh that was so sad! *sniffle* the way draco just took the dagger and *BAM* i blame this all on whoever voldemort's parents are. if he were never born, he would have never had all of those death eaters. if he didn't have death eaters, lucius malfoy would have never been one. then, if draco's dad wern't a d.e., he could have been friends with harry and ron and hermione all this time. i've just got two words to say. F**K Voldemort!!!


Name: LittleWhiteLie (Signed) · Date: 01/22/05 15:32 · For: Destiny
*The two were buried far apart Though always connected by the heart Here ends the tale Each followed their own trail Ending sadly But not badly Together forever They rest above Forever in love* That made me cry... that line... your story was wonderful. You have turned me into a fan of Draco, something I never thought would happen. Continue writing wonderful stories...


Name: ix3HPfreak (Signed) · Date: 01/09/05 12:45 · For: Destiny
oh my gosh! i loved the story. i don't really know if i liked Hermione dieing (sorry, i don't know how to spell the word), but when Draco killed himself, i felt a little better about it. i cryed when Hermione died so much! but i think it turned out great! please keep it up!


Name: Akasha (Signed) · Date: 01/09/05 12:02 · For: Destiny
O MY GOD!! that was soooooooooo sad!! it was still good though!! but i didnt expect to be crying at the end!! extremely well written!! and i plan on checkin out ur next story!! BRAVO!! =)


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